2016107培养听说读写技能的先决条件是说写汇总

1、培养听说读写技能的先决条件是说写 【之六】 张铁城2016、10、7发送 中国学生要重视写的训练必然会提高说的能力 这是我们熟悉的英语教学大师亚历山大的主张 “ Speaking and writing are the most important of these skills, since to some extent, they presuppose the other two. ” 译文:“说与写在这几 种能力中，是最重要的，因为在某种程度上，这两种能力是 另外两种能力的 先决条件。” 【见：亚历山大(L.G.AIexander )在新概念英语第二 册(全英语版p.viii )】 遗憾

2、的是|:我们北京高考的书面表达分数一直不高。2009 年北京英语高考书面表达满分35分，但是平均分数只有 17.5分，相当于100分的50分。 第五章新加坡中学作文 准备向真正的英语原著过渡 比赛成绩公布通知原文及 四篇I 一等奖获奖作文 共计2,874个英语单词 （一） 一级词汇统计：661个单词 【在这里，你将看到“全国山河一片红”。 Three What will my life be like? ” I wondered As a resting in my my mind was filled with was the of my life . I enjoyed asking al

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12、cessful into a richer life , I back to the to give it a Thanks , ”lsmiled at the of love and thanks for my fear ; thanks for my You taught me that successes come when we to into the （二）二级词汇统计：64个单词 【在这里，你将看到“蓝星点点元依靠”。 Prize Secondary Category comfortable, unable threatened danger journey Gradually ,

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20、chrysalis, Pong trickle dispelled confinement haggard brightness. dim cocoon. fluttered iridescent mothmoth cherished Jubilant cocoon gratitude. dilapidated cocoon, brewing 评论 1、 这篇作文的|一级词汇|正好占全文词汇总量的70.54 %。 一级、二级、三级词汇正好占全文词汇总量的80.57 %。 恰到好处。 2、同前面的两篇作文一样，这篇的作者也是以第一人称的 方式讲故事的，他“不曾是一个流浪儿”也“不是一个 因恐惧而

21、走向成功的医生”，他把自己扮作一只昆虫，更 加细腻地讲述了 “恐惧与成功”(“ Fear and Success ”)的故事。 都是中学生扩大阅读视野和提高写作能力不可或缺的。 3、 有趣的是：我国英语课程标准词汇表未收入的二级 /三级词汇，却被这位新加坡中三学生用在作文里面，女口： 二级词汇 increasingly 、三级词汇 stirred 、chased 、 bumping 、Bang 、intense 、chamber 、newly 、 passion ，这不是巧合，而恰好证明了：朗文辞典标 注的3,547 个一、二、三级词汇，在新加坡，确确实实 被当做一回事了，|确确实实被视为权威

22、标注了。 4、由于熟知朗文辞典标注的3,547 个一、二、三级 词汇，这位新加坡中三学生在作文里使用了一些“似曾 相识的新组成”词汇，值得注意。 如： 由三级词汇Cease 派生的Cease lessly 、 由三级词汇 confine 派生的confine ment ； 还有一些由一级、二级、三级词汇合成的词汇， 诸如： 一级词汇life 与二级词汇threatening 合成的 life -threatening、二级词汇 will 与一级词汇 power 合成的will power 、一级词汇 over与一级词汇 drive 合成的overdrive 、这都是中学生扩大阅读 视野和提高写

23、作能力不可或缺的。 No.6D 第五节 第四篇获奖作文 2008年新加坡南华中学作文比赛一等奖 中四 1 班 Esther Seah Pei Leng作文 st 1 Prize - Secondary Four Category Esther Seah Pei Leng (401) A cresce ndo of hurried footsteps shattered the sile nee of the early morning. Jole ne peeled her eyes off the riveting novel she was absorbed in and looked u

24、p. An old lady was hastening towards her. “Miss! Please save my Anna! She drowning! Please save her! ” pleaded the old lady, urgency evide nt in her voice. Jolene stuffed the novel into her bag hurriedly and sprang to her feet. She gestured for the old lady to lead the way, who then took her down a

25、cobbled pathway that led to the beach. At a glance, the pristine white shore was deserted at such an early hour of the morning. Giving the distraught grandmother a reassuring squeeze on the shoulder, Jolene shed her jacket and kicked off her sandals. Halfway to the waters, Jolene halted in her track

26、s, sudden indecision and uncertainty locking her feet in place. A huge wave that crashed against the shore awakened a fear in her that she had suppressed for years. Looking at Anna drowning before her eyes unreeled a ribbon of painfully vivid memories of an incident that left her bereft of her siste

27、r seven years ago. Jolene had been paddling her canoe vigorously in a furious battle against the turbulent waters of the rapids when her sister Bernice s canoe crashed headlong into a massive boulder in the middle of the river course, capsizing and tipping her over into the waters. Unable to control

28、 her own canoe which was swept onwards by the forceful currents, Jolene had been able to do naught but watch helplessly as her sister thrashed wildly in vain to stay afloat. It was then when an alarming realization struck her: The rapids were going to end in a waterfall! Galvanized into action by mo

29、rbid thoughts of what would happen if she did not get out of the river soon, Jolene had somehow managed to steer her recalcitrant canoe against the battering force of the violent waters and get herself onto the bank. Alas! She had only been able to stare with pulverizing despair as she witnessed Ber

30、nice being swept towards the precipitous drop. The traumatic incident has caused Jolene to suffer from aqua-phobia ever since. Tendrils of fear snaked their way into her body and reached for her chest, the phobia manifesting itself again. Jolene broke out in cold sweat, quavering like an aspen leaf,

31、 as the tendrils closed around her heart. The shattering roar of the waterfall still rang in her ears as she continued to stare blankly at the drowning Anna. Jolene vaguely felt someone tug at her sleeve, but the scene of her sister s death held her thoughts fast, making her unable to respond. She c

32、ould still hear Bernice screaming as her frail form had been hurled downwards in a plunging descent into the churning pool at the foot of the waterfall and swallowed by the frothing waters below. Failure to rescue her sister burned like a fiery brand on her heart, scarring her with the guilt of havi

33、ng let someone dear to her drown. The horrifying event was replaying itself now, with Anna as the protagonist. Jolene shuddered involuntarily. An unusually large wave rolled onto the shore threateningly, startling her to retreat further inland. Jolene could almost feel the waters which had robbed he

34、r of Bernice crashing down on herself, imprisoning her in a watery world. She could feel fear seizing her chest, driving out the air in her lun gs. She was suffocati ng. She desperately n eeded to breathe “Miss! Why are you standing here? My Anna is drowning! She is going to die!” wailed the old lad

35、y as she shock the frozen Jolene vigorously. The hard shaking jolted Jolene out of her stupor, bringing her mind back to the present. She saw Anna disappearing beneath the waters, breaking the surface a moment later, only to be pulled down again. Jolenes initial indecision was expelled, leaving a re

36、solve within to save the girl. She sprinted towards the sea and dived. The shock of icy cold water stunned her momentarily. Instinct and past experience screamed at her to get back on dry land as terror surged anew, but she throttled that fear and pushed it aside determinedly. Jolene was intent on saving the girl. She would not let history repeat itself. She would not fail someone again. Success i