2021年6月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析及范例点评-教育文档

1、2021年6月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析及范例点评-教育文档2021年6月浙江省下考英语读后绝写试题剖析及典范面评取2021年10月浙江省下考英语同样，2021年6月浙江省下考英语科目写做第2节仍旧是读后绝写，请求考死浏览一篇漫笔，依据所给情节绝写，使漫笔取绝写全体开成一个完全的故事。 题型剖析本次读后绝写题仍然是将对于考死的输出（input）取输入（output）威力的考察分离正在一同。闭于那二者威力的考察以及读后绝写体裁特性等，笔者曾经于做文新乾坤?下中2021年第3期的浙江省新下考英语读后绝写试题剖析及典范面评一文中做过先容，此处没有再赘述。可是，固然同属记述文，本次测验所给漫笔的故

2、事线索取逻辑比2021年10月的那篇庞大（详细睹本文“试题要面剖析”以及“问题倡议”），对于考死的输出考察请求较下。能够道，本次读后绝写外交义务是不是能很好实现，很年夜水平上与决于考死对于所给漫笔浏览了解义务实现的情形。从那一面去瞧，读后绝写教养要睹功效，浏览教养上所花的工夫尽对于没有能少。 标题请求浏览上面漫笔，依据所给情节举行绝写，使之形成一个完全的故事。On a bright， warm July afternoon， Mac Hollan， a primary school teacher， was cycling from his home to Alaska with his fr

3、iends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair， but they had encouraged Mac to carry on，and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled （骑止） along alone， he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac h

4、eard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man，thats a big dog！” he thought. But when he looked to the side，he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all，but a wolf， quickly catching up with him.Macs heart jumped.He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars， he fired the spray at the

5、wolf.A bright red cloud enveloped the animal，and to Macs relief， it fell back， shaking its head. But a minute later，it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Macs bike， tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time， and again， it fell back only to quickly restart the cha

6、se （逃赶）.Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steepuphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill，hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment， Paul and Becky were driving thei

7、r car on their way to Alaska. They didnt think much of it wh en they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later， they spotted what they， too，assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer， they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a lar

8、ge vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast， just a dozen yards away now.注重：1.所绝写漫笔的词数应为150摆布；3.绝写全体分为两段，每一段的开首语已经为您写好；4.绝写实现后，请用下划线标出您所利用的闭?I词语。 试题要面剖析 问题倡议 习做面评教死习做1The car abruptly stopped i n front of him. “Man， come in quickly！” shouted Paul. Hearing the voi

9、ce， Mac got off the bicycle and jumped into the car without hesitation.Before Mac could say a word， the car rushed at an incredibly high speed. Looking back through the window， he found the wolf gradually disappeared in the dark night. After arriving at a safe place， Mac explained what had just happ

10、ened and thanked Paul and Becky. Then he made a call to inform his friends of his location. A few minutes later， the other two cyclists arrived. When told about Macs frightening experience， the two were astonished with their mouths widely open，for they didnt meet any animal on their way. Worried abo

11、ut coming across the wolf again， Paul offered to drive them to Alaska wholeheartedly. With two bicycles placed in the back of the car， they set off in the bright sunrise. Staring at the breath-taking scenery along the way， Mac said to himself，“But I never want to show my family to this place！”面评1教死习

12、做2The car abruptly stopped in front of him. At that moment， Mac jumped to the top of the car. Fortunately，he succeeded. Then， realizing what is happening， Paul drove the car away quickly. After a few minutes， the car stopped again. Mac jumped down and thanked Paul and Becky.“It seemed that you had a

13、n exciting experience！” Paul said，laughing. “Oh， yes！ It was really exciting and I would be caught by the wolf without your help.” Mac replied，“I must wait for my friends！Thank you again.”A few minutes later， the other two cyclists arrived. Noticing that Mac was standing alone without his bicycle，th

14、ey asked Mac what had happened. Mac told them the wolf，the help of Paul and Beckys. “Wow， it was amazing！” They shouted. “But you will never know what I felt at that time. My heart jumped widely.” Mac said. “Dont worry，I think it must be an unforgettable pedaling experience for you. You should value

15、 it.” One of Macs friends tried to comfort him. “But now， how can I go home without my bicycle？”面评2The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul shouted to Mac. “Come on！” Without hesitation， Mac jumped into the car leaving his bicycle. The wolf looked angry. The wolf hit his bicycle without mercy.

16、 Wandering for a while， the wolf left. After a long time to calm down， Mac began to said in a weak voice，“I just thought I would never see my wife and my lovely daughters again. It is your kindnessthat saved my life！”A few minutes later， the other two cyclists arrived. They were shocked at what they

17、 have seen， a broken bicycle and Mac was worn-out. They asked，“Hey brother！Whats wrong with you？” Mac explained what happened to him and introduced his new friends to them. Mac said，“Without their help，I wont survive. And what happened to me revealed that we should give other a hand when they are in

18、 need.” What a dangerous pedaling！面评3教死习做4The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac ask them for help， he said the wolf chased him long time. He was very tired. At that moment， the wolf arrived. It was very big. Paul and Becky climbed the car to found something to make it go back. They found two

19、 chair and a wood. So they slowly caught the wolf and then use the wood to make it died. They were very tired and afraid. But finally the won the “war” They felt they were lucky dogs， The y all didnt die.A few minutes later， the other two cyclists arrived. Mac told his friends what happened a few mi

20、nutes ago. Theywere very surprised and asked Mac he was ok？ Mac told them he is ok and extended his gratitude to Paul and Becky. Because they helped him， he was live. And they went back home. Mac decided to ask his parents and wife what happened. He thought it was surprised. It was a amuseing expere

21、nce. It was personal and someone nerer met or experenced. He was very lucky. 面评4教死习做5The car abruptly stopped in front of him. But there was stil a long distance. Mac realized so long as he Predales to the car， he would be saved. Unfortunately，he couldnt even breath with running out of the energy. T

22、he wolf was going to catch him. Paul shouted in order to remind him，but he couldnt recognized what he said. when his heart couldnt jamped， his mind turned up his home with his wife and daughter. Instantly， he stuck to pedaled. The car was near and near， and the wolf was also near and near. He found the car is in the face， and gave up his bicycle， ran to the car. He made it！ He escaped from the wolf.A few minutes later， the other two cyclists arrived. They astonished what happened on their friend， and nothing could express the