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1、四六级作文写作中需要注意的问题写作中应该注意的问题:1. 内容是否紧扣主题,涵盖提示要点;注意审题,紧扣题目来写。2. 结构层次是否清晰:作文要有开头、主体、结论三部分。养成良好习惯,确保主体段落有明确的中心思想句,后面的扩展层次清楚。根据文章章法合理使用、灵活改造命题提纲,做到起、承、转、合,有头有尾。3. 语言表达是否流畅,有无重大语病,有无逻辑错误。注意语法规则和固定搭配,减少语言错误。4. 是否恰当的使用过渡性词语。文贵在变,学会用不同的形式开始句子,注意句子的长短结合。5. 作文字数是否达到要求(作文的最佳要求是四级150左右,六级180左右)6. 卷面是否整洁,书写是否漂亮写作终究
2、是一项主观性测试,是靠阅卷老师而不是由机器来判分的。虽然作文评分有具体的标准,但教师的主观性因素仍然起着不可忽视的作用。因此,考生在写作的时候一定要牢记自己的阅卷对象。文章要获得高分,就必须得到阅卷老师的认可,给阅卷老师留下一个好的印象十分重要。通常以下几个方面会左右阅卷老师的给分,它们既是阅卷老师在评卷时特别关注的地方,也是考生在写作中应加以注意的地方。1 内容是否紧扣主题,涵盖提示要点写作的第一步就是审准题目,考生只要扣紧题目来写,就不会出现大的问题。能抓住题目的精髓是最理想的,但是如果没有理解题目的核心,只按照确定下来的主题,根据提纲来写也未必失分。另外,在考试中,虽然完全跑题的现象非常
3、少,但是漏“点”的情况却很多,这里说的“点”就是提纲中列出的两点或三点内容。我们应注意,审题既包括看英文的题目,还包括看指示语和中文提纲等。2作文结构层次是否清晰作文一定要分段来写,这是体现文章结构的关键。它既是英语文章结构形式的基本体现,也可以使评卷老师觉得你的作文结构完整、合理,符合写作要求。作文要有引言段、扩展段和结尾段。在引言段中要包含中心句;扩展段的每一段均应有主题句;结尾段应该是一个自然收尾的段落。另外,每段开头都应空出相同的字符数空格。文章的题目已经给出,不必重抄,段与段之间也不必空行。3语言表达是否流畅。有无重大语病,有无逻辑错误一般说来,评卷老师阅卷的速度越快,对语言关注的程
4、度就越高。内容和语言是统一的,语言方面的错误势必会影响内容的表达,造成理解障碍。4. 检查我们必须明确:考试作文的润色和修改只需要达到三个目的即可:1. 拼写正确、标点符号正确;2. 搭配正确;3. 语法正确,特别是人称、时态、和单复数的三一致。因为受考试时间和条件等诸多因素的限制,不要做大的结构或内容上的修改。语言方面:1. 尽量使用词组或短语。如果某个词有同义的词组的话,最好使用词组,一方面可以给文章增加亮点,另一方面,也可以增加字数。2. 长短句多结合。不可全用简单句,也不要全用长句。3. 注重连接词。在文章中,句子之间,段落之间以及引起和结束文章的时候要会使用连接词。如:firstly
5、, secondly, thirdly等,或者to start with, then, next, finally, furthermore, in addition, besides, last but not the least, moreover, most important of all等某人持某种观点,不仅可以用think,还可以用hold the view that, argue that, maintain the point of view that, takefor granted等论证观点时可以分为两点或者三点,不要用first, second, third。如果是两点,
6、可以用on the one hand, on the other hand或者for one thing, for another.如果是三点,可以用to begin with, moreover, finally或者in the first place, in the second place, last but not the least等等4. 句式避免单一化。尽量多使用不同的句式。并列句:not onlybut also; notbut转折句:yet, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite that因果句:therefore, cons
7、equently, so that, as a result, accordingly插入语:that is to say, so to speak +同位语一些丰富的用词和灵活的句式1 一些高级词汇的使用:平时在学习中多积累。如:用approaches 代替ways; 用implement代替carry out; 用facilitate代替make it easier;用soar代替increase;用proficiency代替ability;用tremendous/enormous/gigantic代替big/large/huge2. 善于利用相应的副词形式:it is widely ac
8、knowledged that./ generally speaking/ additionally替换in addition3. 适当使用短语,短语中也尽量涉及到高级词汇,如:用harbor the idea that/ take the attitude that/ hold the view that/ it is widely shared that/ it is universally acknowledged that 来代替think用for my part/ from my own perspective/ as far as i am concerned替换简单的in my
9、opinion用bearin the mind代替remember 等等。4 善于利用更加符合英语习惯的句式如用sth appeals to sb./sth exert a tremendous fasicnation on sb.代替sb takes interest in/ sb be interested in (doing sth) 前面的句型更符合英语中以“物”做主语的习惯。四六级作文经典总汇chapter one 文章开头句型1-1 对立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,适用于有争议性的主题.例如(e.g)1. when asked about.
10、, the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that . but i think/view a bit differently.2. when it comes to . , some people bielive that . others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . there is probably some truth in both arguements/statements , but (i tend to the profer/latter .)3. now, i
11、t is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that . they claim/ believe/argue that . but i wonder/doubt whether.1-2 现象法 引出要剖析的现象或者问题, 然后评论 .e.g1. recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) . has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.2. recently the issue of the probl
12、em of/the phenomenon of .has been brought into focus. ( has been brouth to public attention)3.inflation/corruption/social inequality . is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.- to be continued !1-3 观点法 -开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.e.g:1. never history has the
13、change of . been as evident as . nowhere in the world/china has the issue/idea of . benn more visible/popular than.2. now people in growing/significant numbers are beginnig/coming to realize/accept/(be aware) that.3. now there is a growing awareness/recognation ot the necessity to.now people become
14、increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of .4. perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that.1-4 引用法 - 先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 来引出文章要展开论述的观点!e.g:1. knowledge is power. such is the remark made by bacon.this remark has been shared by more and more people .education is not complete
15、 with gradulation. such is the opnion of a great american philosopher. now more and more people share his opnion.2. how often we hear such statements/words like thoses /this .in our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this .1-5 比较法 - 通过对过去,现在 两种不同的倾向,观点的比较 , 引出文章要讨论的观点.e.g:
16、1. for years, .had been viewed as . but people are taking a fresh look now. with the growing . , people . .2. people used to think that . (in the past, .) but people now share this new.1-6 故事法 - 先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣, 引出文章的主题.e.g:1. once in (a newspaper) , i read of/learnt . the phenemenon of . has arou
17、sed public concern.2. i have a friend who . should he . ? such a dilemma we are often confront with in our daily life.3. once upon a time , there lived a man who . this story may be (unbelievable) , but it still has a realistic significance now.1-7 问题法 - 先用讨论或解答的设问, 引出自己观点, 适用于有争议性的话题.e.g:should/wha
18、t . ? options of . vary greatly , some ., others .but in my opinion , . .chapter 2 文章中间主体内容句型原因结果分析2-1-1. 基本原因 - 分析某事物时, 用此句型说明其基本的或者多方面的原因.e.g:1. why . ? for one thing. for another .2. the answer to this problem invovles many factors. for one thing. for another. still another .3. a number of factor
19、s , both physical and psychological affect . /both individual and social contribute to .2-1-2 另一原因 - 在分析了基本原因之后, 再补充一个次要的或者更重要时用!e.g:1. another important factor is .2. . is also responsible for the change/problem.3. certainly , the . is not the sole reason for .2-1-3 后果影响 - 分析某事物可能造成的后果或者带来的影响 .e.g:
20、1. it will produce a profound/far-reaching effect/impact on.2. it involves some serious consequence for .比较对照句型2-2-1. 两者比较 - 比较两事物, 要说出其一超过另一个, 或肯定一事物的优点, 也肯定其缺点的时候用 !e.g:1. the advantages gained from a are much greater than the advantages we gain from b.2. indeed, a carries much weight when compare
21、d with b.3. there is no doubt that it has its negative effects as well as positive effects.待添加的隐藏文字内容22-2-2 . 两者相同/相似 - 比较两事物共同都有或者共同都没有的特点时用!e.g:1. a and b have several thing in common. they are similar in that.2. a bears some sriking resemblance(s) to b.chapter three 文章结尾形式3-1 结论性- 通过对文章前面的讨论 ,引出或
22、重申文章的中心思想及观点 .e.g:1. from what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that .2. in summary/in a word , it is more valuable .3-2 后果性- 揭示所讨论的问题若不解决, 将产生的严重后果.e.g:1. we must call for an immediate method , because the current phenomenon of . , if allowed to proceed, will surely lead
23、to the heavy cost of .2. obviously , if we ignore/are blind to the problem , there is every chance that . will be put in danger.3-3 号召性 - 呼吁读者行动起来, 采取行动或提请注意.e.g:1. it is time that we urged an immediate end to the undesirable tendcy of .2. it is essential thar effective measures should be taken to correct the tendency.3-4 建议性 - 对所讨论的问题提出建议性的意见, 包括建议和具体的解决问题的方法.e.g:1. while it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways. the most popular
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