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1、3个要素搞定小作文流程图 流程图,英文叫Flow chart。flow是流动的意思,chart指的是图表,因此流程图小作文的本质是让考生对某种事物的变化过程进行描述。考生之所以觉得流程图小作文不好得分,主要是由于图中会出现若干“超级长难词”,根本看不懂图表在画什么。下面是为您收集的3个要素搞定小作文流程图,供大家参考! 许多动词不知道如何表达,比如剑六中的蚕产卵,吐丝等。再者,主体段中连接手段的欠缺,导致一部分考生在考试时一遇到流程图,只好感叹自己运气不好。其实,流程图小作文要想得分,关键在于考生能否抓住三个要素:用词、衔接手段、时态和语态。 得分要素一:用词 令众多考生抓狂的事情莫过于图中出
2、现了n多的生词,导致许多烤鸭在看完图后心里都会冒出两个问题:这画的是神马?好多单词不认识怎么写呀?其实,要想解决这两个问题非常简单。首先,如果读题后发现根本不知题目所云,连图表画的是什么都不知道的话,不要着急,我们可以去抓图表的大标题。因为大标题往往就是这个图的描述对象。如剑六的第三套题: 由于题目中出现了silkworm, silk cloth, life cycle等词汇,很容易导致考生抓不住描述对象。其实,我们完全可以从流程图大标题下手,提炼出描述对象,至于能不能看懂,根本不重要。 比如上图中的大标题“Life cycle of the silkworm”就是描述对象。 producti
3、on of silk cloth 也是描述对象。 提炼出描述对象后,在主体段第一句话直接写Life cycle of the silkworm consists of fivesteps即可,这样一来便描述出了数据的总趋势,而题目要求明确提出“Sum _rize the infor _tion”,总结数据总体趋势。其次,出现好多生词是正常现象,我们根本不需要知道第一个图中的moth,muberry leaf和larva是什么意思,只需要看出moth下了好多蛋,larva是吃muberryleaf长大的即可。至于下蛋,完全可以用produ _这个动词来表示,而吃则用eat来表示。完全可以满足5.
4、5分作文的要求。 得分要素二:衔接手段 高分作文与低分作文最明显的一个差别就是低分作文很少使用连接手段对主题段内句与句进行连接。因此,大量而准确的使用连接手段,是提高分数最快的途径之一。就流程图而言,所谓的连接手段则是要在主体段内标明步骤。表明流程图步骤的连接词和连接短语现总结如下: 第一步:Firstly, to begin with, in the first step, in the first pla _ 第二步:Secondly, next, at the second step, after that 下一步:Thirdly, at the next stage, then 最后一
5、步:Fourthly, at the final step, lastly, finally 以上几种连接手段用于步骤与步骤之间的衔接和过渡,在流程图中使用,可以帮助考生提高段落内部的连贯性,使文章的层次感更加分明。 得分要素三:时态和语态 低分作文在时态语态方面经常误用。流程图小作文主要分为两种,一种是动植物生命周期,比如上面的第一幅图,还有一种是某种产品的 _工艺,比如上面第二幅图。不管哪种类型的流程图,在对过程进行描述时都不会牵扯到过多的时态问题,因此我们多用一般现在时。 而对于动植物生命周期的语态来说,动植物生命循环一般都是源于自身生长规律,比如蚕会自己生长、吐丝,然后破茧而出。这个过
6、程不需要借助外力,因此这类图多用主动语态,但也要注意随机应变,比如蛋是被蛾子排出来的,这类情况下要用被动语态。对产品 _工艺这类图而言,一定是人为进行的生产和 _,必须借助外力,产品不会自己生产出来。因此这类图多用被动语态, 优秀范文赏析: How to _ke chocolate The diagram shows the stages in the pro _ss of _ chocolate. 【所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。流程图必备三个词:pro _ss:整个过程, stage:阶段,step:步骤】 Chocolateesfrom the cacao tree, which
7、 is grown in parts of SouthAmerica, Africa and Indonesia.【开头不能冲上来就直接介绍cacaotree,而是通过主题词chocolate引出,否则显得太唐突】The tree produ _s large red pods which contain whitecocoa beans. Firstly, when the pods are ripe,they areharvested, the beans are removed and they are fermented for several days inlarge wooden
8、boxes.【三个句子的并列:“句子A,句子B and句子C”。】 During the fermenting pro _ss, the beans turn brown. 【流程图特点:要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从 _中直接读出来的的一些内容,否则可能达不到字数要求。但是一定要把握尺度,千万不要加上自己的主观观点,否则会扣分。】 Next,the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry. They arethen put in large sacks and transported by train or lorry. After this,
9、the beans are taken toa chocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures ofbetween 250 and 350 degree Celsius. After beingroasted, the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed. This part is notneeded for _ chocolate. Finally, the inner part of the bean is pressedand liquid
10、 chocolate is produ _d. 1. It must be pointed out that it is one of our basic State policies tocontrol population growth while raising the quality of the population. 2. It is (has been) esti _ted that the worlds population could reach 6billion by the end of the _ntury. 3. It must be kept in mind tha
11、t there is no secret of suess but hardwork. 4. It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world wecannot overe. 5. As is known _n is the product of labour. 6. It is a mon saying that _n who has a settled purpose will surelysueed. 7. It is clear that the enemy has no desire for pea _
12、. 8. It is hard to i _gine how Edison _naged to work twenty hours eachday. 9. Its hard to say whether the plan is practicable. 10. There is no doubt that you will be helped by others if you have anydifficulties. 11. It seems _rtain that they have _de a series of experiments. 12. It is said that bats
13、 have been using radar for millions of years. 13. To _ the truth , _ny mistakes we _de could have been avoided. 14. As we know, it was not until re _ntly that the problem was solved. 15. It must be admitted that you havent done what you promised to do. 16. In my opinion, this puter is different from
14、 that one you saw. 17. It is _rtain that we have a long way to go. 18. All this shows that nothing can prevent us from reaching our aims. 19. As far as we know, it took him more than a year to write the book. 20. It has been proved that every substan _, no _tter what it is, is _deup of atoms. 21. It
15、 has been decided that we are going to build a railway whose basemust be pleted within this year. 22. It is obvious (evident) that the suess of the innovation depends onour con _rted efforts. 23. To be frank, whether you like it or not, you have no other choi _. 24. It is natural that one _y have tr
16、ouble expressing plicated ideas in _ English. 25. What is more important, the agreement they have negotiated is bein _arried out. 26. We will be suessful as long as we persevere. 27. Frankly speaking, what you call the truth _y not apply to thingshappening here. 28. It is true that we must redouble
17、our efforts; otherwise we cannot catchup with the developed countries. 29. I take it for granted that they will support this idea. I regard it as natural that they will agree to this idea. 30. In a _rtain sense, a suessful scientist is a person who is neversatisfied with what he has achieved. 31. Th
18、e o _ans do not so much divide the world as unite it. 32. There is no denying the fact that the new _nagement method has greatlyincreased the production. 33. There is no denying the fact that the new _nagement method has greatlyincreased the production. 34. Upon hearing the unexpected news, he was s
19、o surprised that he couldntutter a word. 35. As the saying goes, nothing in the world is difficult for one who setshis mind to it. 36. Our goal must be attained. Our goal can unquestionably be attained. 37. Noting can prevent us from realizing the four modernizations. 38. Now in China, more and more
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