How to write a composition写作之“四步成文”学案

1、How to write a composition写作之“四步成文”学案Task One Tian Meis information 第一中学九年级学生田梅，在长沙地铁网站上获悉他们正在招收志愿者，以下是她填写的个人信息表。基本信息第一中学九年级学生，15岁个人品质精力充沛，随和（easy-going），有耐心。主要特长英语说得好，擅长与他人合作。相关经历去年10月，成为了“长沙国际马拉松比赛（Changsha International Marathon）”的志愿者。Activity 1 Find out her information 假如你是田梅，正在准备长沙地铁志愿者的面试，下面是你

2、和朋友模拟面试的过程，请从上面的个人信息表中提取要点，并完成对话。 Tian Mei： Good afternoon, Sir/ Madam. Nice to meet you! Partner： Nice to meet you, too. Can you introduce yourself? Tian Mei： Sure. My names is Tian Mei. Im in _ from _. Partner： What kind of person do you think you are? Tian Mei： Im _, _ and _. Partner： What are yo

3、u good at? Tian Mei： I _ and I _.Partner： Great! Have you ever been a volunteer before?Tian Mei： .Activity 2 Add more information 在模拟面试过程中，田梅不知如何介绍自己的相关经历，请你协助她把相关经历补充完整。相关经历去年10月，成为了“长沙国际马拉松比赛（Changsha International Marathon）”的志愿者。我告诉赛跑运动员准确的路线，并使他们振奋。这是一次很棒的经历。我将永远不会忘记它。Last October, I _ for Chang

4、sha International Marathon. I helped show runners the right way and _. _.Task Two Tian Meis letterActivity 1 Beautify the letter 下面是田梅写给长沙地铁志愿者协会的英文自荐信，信中有几处句子需要美化，请协助她修改。Beginning（开头） B 基本信息： o d 个人品质： y 主要特长：正文 相关经历：Ending（结尾）：Dear Sir or Madam,I read the ad on Changsha Metro website and know that

5、 youre looking after volunteers.My names Tian Mei. I am a 15 years old student in Grade 9 from No. 1 middle school. Im sure that Im qualified（胜任）for the job._（首先）, Im energetic, easy-going and pateint. Im always hard-working _（并且）never give up easy. _（同时）, I can speak English well and Im good at wor

6、k with others._（此外）, I had done some voluntary work before. Last October, I became a volunteer for Changsha International Marathon. I helped show runners the right way and cheered them up. It was _ a wonderful experience _ （如此以至于）Ill never forget it. I think I can be a good volunteer. Im looking for

7、ward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,Tian MeiHow to beautify sentences? Tip One - Proper linking words 第一招 - 恰当的关联词先后次序关系first/firstly, second/secondly, and then, besides, whats more/whats worse, last/ last but not least对照关系on the one hand, on the other hand, instead转折关系but, however, although/th

8、ough因果关系because/ because of., as, since, for, thanks to, as a result of., so that条件if, unless, as long as开场nowadays, now, recently, these days表达观点I think, Im afraid, as far as I know, in my opinion, as for me举例子for example/ take . as an example, such as, like总结all in all, in a word, in short Tip Two

9、 - Good phrases and sentence patterns 第二招 - 词组和句型Activity 2 Check the letter for mistakes 在田梅的英文自荐信中，还有几处错误（每行一处错误），请帮她检查并修改。Dear Sir or Madam,I read the ad on Changsha Metro website and know that youre lookingafter volunteers. _My names Tian Mei. I am a 15 years old student in Grade 9 from No. 1 _m

10、iddle school. Im sure that Im qualified（胜任）for the job. _First, Im energetic, easy-going and pateint. Im always hard-working and _never give up easy. _At the same time, I can speak English well and Im good at work with others._Whats more, I had done some voluntary work before. ._Activity 3 Correct c

11、ommon mistakes Please correct the mistakes (1-2) in each sentence.（请纠正下列每句中的1-2个错误。） 1. I believe I can make my dream come ture.拼写错误 2. On a Friday afternoon, I surfed the internet at home.大小写错误 3. I think do more exercise is good for our health.主语错误 4. My mother always tidy up my room.主谓一致错误 5. The

12、 more we exercise, the more healthy well be.比较级错误 6. In my fathers help, I made a progress.固定搭配错误 7. We played snow in front of the house.漏词错误 8. I felt very boring.选词错误 9. There have many ways to relax ourselves.中式英语Summary“Four-step Policy”Step One _Step Two _Step Three _Step Four _Consolidation 假

13、设你是李华，一周前你的美国朋友Jack给你发了电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算。你因为忙于准备口语考试（oral English test）未能及时回复。请你根据以下要点给他回封电子邮件：（1）未及时回信的原因；（2）你假期的打算（去张家界旅游，练习篮球，做志愿者帮助残疾儿童等）；（3）邀请对方来中国旅游。要求：（1）补全所缺要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（2）词数：60-80词（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；（3）信中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。“四步成文”：列出要点 扩充要点 美化句子 检查改错 定稿Beginning（开头） B 原 因： o d 计 划： y 正 文 邀 请：Ending（结尾）：Dear Jack,Im so sorry that I didnt write back to you soon. You k