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1、How to improve a chart writing,Writing,What activities do you usually have after school,Survey,每天所用时间（分钟,假如你是李华，最近你学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中一两个数据中反映的情况写出你的个人看法。标题和开头部分已给出，词数120左右,Chart 1: 学生主要课余活动及所用时间,Chart 2: 学生各项业余活动所占课余时间比例,After-school activities in our school Recently

2、, I have done a survey about the daily average amount of time the students in my school spend on different after-school activities.,每天所用时间（分钟,学生主要课余活动及所用时间,How to describe a chart,The chart/graph above shows/describes that From the chart/graph we can that can be seen from the chart/graph that. is sh

3、own/described in the chart/graph (根据）the chart/graph,find out/learn/see,It,According to,As,学生各项业余活动所占课余时间比例,Translate the following sentences. 1. 学生每天花96分钟做作业。 2. 看电视占用了72分钟。 3. 24分钟花在了电脑上,4. 学生花了10%的课余时间用电脑。 5. 锻炼身体只占用了课余时间的5,Task 1,Task 2,1. 我们学校的学生每天花96分钟做作业。 2看电视占用了72分钟。 3. 24分钟花在了电脑上。 4. 学生花了10

4、%的课余时间用电脑。 5. 锻炼身体只占用了课余时间的5,The students in our school,Watching TV,The students spend their spare time computers,Translate the following sentences,Doing sports,spend 96 minutes every day in doing homework/on homework,takes up/occupies 72 minutes,on,takes up/occupies only 5% of the spare time,How to

5、 describe a chart,10 percent of/ one tenth of,24 minutes,is spent on the computer,Task 2,Chart 2: 学生各项业余活动所占课余时间比例,Give your opinion about Chart 2,in my opinion, to my mind, From my point of view, I hold the view/opinion that As far as I am concerned, Personally, I think,From Chart 1, we can learn t

6、hat the students spend 96 minutes in doing homework. Watch TV takes up 72 minutes. They spend 36 minutes listen to music. 24 minutes are spent on the computer. They only spend 12 minutes on sports. Which is shown in Chart 2, the students only spend 5% their spare time on sports and they spend 30 per

7、centage of their spare time on TV. I think they spend too much time on TV and too few time on sports. Thats not good for our healthy. I think the students should do more sports in their free time to build up their body,A first-time writing,Proofreading,Task 3- pair work,From Chart 1, we can learn th

8、at the students spend 96 minutes in doing homework. Watch TV takes up 72 minutes. They spend 36 minutes listen to music. 24 minutes are spent on the computer. They only spend 12 minutes on sports,A first-time writing,Watching,listening,is,Proofreading,Which is shown in Chart 2, the students only spe

9、nd 5% their spare time on sports and they spend 30 percentage of their spare time on TV. I think they spend too much time on TV and too few time on sports. Thats not good for our healthy. I think the students should do more sports in their free time to build up their body,A first-time writing,of,per

10、cent,health,their,bodies,Proofreading,little,As,From Chart 1, we can learn that the students spend 96 minutes in doing homework. Watching TV takes up 72 minutes. They spend 36 minutes listening to music. 24 minutes is spent on the computer. They only spend 12 minutes on sports. As is shown in Chart

11、2, the students only spend 5% of their spare time on sports and they spend 30 percent of their spare time on TV. I think they spend too much time on TV and too little time on sports. Thats not good for their health. I think the students should do more sports in their free time to build up their bodi

12、es,The first revised writing,Modification,Is it a good writing,Task 4,Words & Sentences,They spend 36 minutes listening to music. 24 minutes is spent on the computer. They only spend 12 minutes on sports. . the students only spend 5% of their spare time on sports and they spend 30 percent of their s

13、pare time on TV,Modification-rewriting,They spend 36 minutes listening to music 24 minutes is spent on the computer,it,the students only spend 5% of their spare time on sports (然而，强调对比）they spend 30 percent (of the time) on TV,and,However,takes them 12 minutes to do sports,while,Task 4,I think they

14、spend too much time on TV and too little time on sports. Thats not good for their health. I think the students should do more sports in their free time to build up their bodies,很明显）that many students watch TV do sports after school, is not good for their health.（定语从句,连词表“因此”）， , the students should

15、(充分利用课余时间）to do more sports to build up their bodies,It is obvious,prefer to,rather than,which,Therefore/So/Thus,in my opinion,to my mind,I hold the view that,as far as I am concerned,make good/full use of their free time,Modification-rewriting,Task 4,would rather than /would rather than,make the be

16、st of their spare time,Recently, I have done a survey about the daily average amount of time the students in my school spend on different after-school activities. From Chart 1, we can learn that the students spend 96 minutes in doing their homework. Watching TV takes up 72 minutes. They spend 36 min

17、utes listening to music and 24 minutes is spent on the computer. However, it takes them only 12 minutes to do sports. As is shown in Chart 2, the students only spend 5% of their spare time on sports while they spend 30 percent of the time on TV. It is obvious that many students prefer to watch TV ra

18、ther than do sports after school, which is not good for their health. Therefore, I hold the view that the students should make good use of their free time to do more sports to build up their bodies,The second revised writing,What should a good writing be like,As is shown in Chart 2,From Chart 1, we

19、can learn that,good for their health,I hold the view that,Therefore,However,spend,in doing,takes up,is spent on,it takes them,to do,while,prefer to,rather than do,which is not,make good use of,build up,It is obvious that,and,Conclusion,Well-organized (clear outline, linking words) Proper & beautiful

20、 sentences. ( good expressions & various sentence patterns,A good writing should be,however, therefore, so, and, while,From Chart 1, we can learn that As is shown from Chart 2,.,prefer to do. rather than do. make (good/full) use of. build up,Complexed sentences It is obvious that ,which is not good

21、for their health I hold the view that and/while,spend. on sthspend. (in) doing sth .takes up. It takes sb.+一段时间+to do,下面两幅图表反映的是最近调查你校学生的有关信息,Task 5: Learn to write,写作要求 请根据以上两个图表介绍你校在校学生结构情况和中学毕业生去向调查情况， 并谈谈你自己的毕业意向及理由。（讲话的开头和结尾已为你写好）。参考词汇： 职业学院：vocational college 外来务工人员：migrant workers Ladies and

22、gentlemen, Im Li Hua. Today, Im honored to share with you the survey in our school. Thats all. Thank you,学生人数百分比,在校学生结构图,中学毕业生去向示意图,Well-organized and Proper & beautiful sentences,percent of./ 分数（ one third of, three fifths of, one quarter )/the majority of the students take up/occupy/account for pe

23、rcent (占百分之,选择,choose to do/plan to do/ intend to do/would like to do/prefer to do,百分比,In my opinion/To my mind/From my point of view/I hold the view that./As far as I am concerned/Personally, I think,Sentence patterns for reference It is obvious that There are 分数/百分数+ who There are 分数/百分数 + doing 简

24、单句+while（然而）+简单句 简单句+and +简单句,我认为,Linking words besides / whats more/ in addition / furthermore/ moreover In a word/ in short/ To sum up,Expressions & Sentence patterns for reference,Finish Task 4 Review what you have learned today,Homework,Ladies and gentlemen, Im Li Hua. Today, Im honored to share with you the result of the survey in our school. As is shown from Chart 1, the students in our school are made