中考英语试题真题分类汇编书面表达含解析

1、中考英语试题真题分类汇编书面表达含解析一、英语书面表达1你有没有因为没能好好管理时间而影响了学习的经历?请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你的看法。内容包括：1.你没完成学习任务的经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对如何管理好时间给出几点建议。作文要求：1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。3.词数 80 个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。once, i couldnt make good use of time and it had a bad influence on mystudy._【答案】 once, i couldnt make good use

2、of time and it had a bad influence on my study.i had an experience like this. last weekend, my good friend, jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. it was interesting. so i spent more time on it. i forgot to do my homework in the end. my teachers and parents were angry with me. i was also

3、 upset.how to make good use of our time? i think we should make a weekday plan. we should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. it can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式

4、和短语，为文章增色不少，如make good use of ， lastweekend， how to do ， play a game， a kind of ， spent more time on ， forget to do ， in the end， be angry with ， be going to do ， on the paper ， put up 等。而特殊非谓语动词结构 jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. 和 i think we should make a weekday plan. /we should

5、 write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /it can help us to remember what we have to do next. 等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文

6、。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式，尽可能使用高 和 复 的句式 构以便得到 高的分数。2“ 帆起航新学期，学姐学 提建 ”。你 上就要 了，在初中的学 和生活中你一定有很多收 ， 学弟学妹 提几点建 吧！要求： 1. 内容完整， 言流 ， 写 范清晰。2. 短文中不能出 正式姓名，校名。100 左右。【答案】 im going to graduate from junior high school. as your senior, i have some suggestions to

7、the young.as old saying goes, all work and no play makes jack a dull boy. to begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.moreover, you should get along well with others. to have more friends, not enemies.last but not least, you could be active in school team work. ability is as

8、important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as welli hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.【解析】【 解】 篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短 ， 文章增色不少，如be going to ，graduatefrom ， to begin with ， both and，get along well with others ， be active in， as important as ，

9、 as well 等。而 to begin with,/ moreover,/ last but not least, 等短 的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多 化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。在学 中注意 牢 一些固定句式及短 ，写作 就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有 性，也更富有条理。【点睛】 面表达 既不是 英，也不是可任意 的作文。它要求将所 定的材料内容 整理后展开思 ，考 运用所学英 知 准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能 漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式，尽可能使用高 和 复 的句式 构以便得到 高的分数。3 面表达假定你是李 ，最近你 班就低碳生活方式 行了 ，你的

10、英国朋友peppa 向你来信 情况。 你用英 写封回信， 介 以下 果：1 水 2垃圾分 3少用 巾，重拾手帕4步行、 自行 或公交出行、参考 ： low carbon 低碳； tissue 巾 数： 100 左右。开 和 尾已 你写好，不 入 数。dear peppa,thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. here issomething about it _best wishes,yours,li hua【答案】 dear peppa,thank you for

11、 your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. here issomething about it we can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. first, welights if possible and spend less time watching tv or surfing the internet. saving water alsomatters much. besides, we s

12、hould sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some,which will surely benefit us a great deal. in addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead oftissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. more importantly, when we goout, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should

13、be our first choice, which contributes to acleaner world.best wishes,yours,li hua d bett【解析】【分析】 是一篇 材料作文，向我的英国朋友peppa 写信，介 我 班就低碳生活方式 行的 情况。【 解】 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人称 第一，三人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系表 构，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：we can do， wedbetter ，we suggest ，which contributes to 等句式的 用。写作中注意运用代 ，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙

14、述 序，符合 关系。【点睛】本文 构 凑， 言 。开 我要介 我 班就低碳生活方式 行了 ，接下来介 我 低碳生活可以做的事。此 ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of,contribute to等 些 的运用也 文章增色不少。4最近一份学生体 健康 果 示，学生近 率仍 持在高位水平，且越来越低 化。 根据下表所提示的内容，用英 写一篇短文，并 表自己的 点。现 状大 70%学生眼睛近 1. 睡眠不足主要原因2. 看 、做作 、用 等1. 做眼睛保健操，多 行体育活 防方法2. 养成正确的用眼 你的 点 .（至少一条）参考

15、 ：近 的shortsighted要求：（ 1） 数： 80 100 个。（ 2）开 已 出，不 入 数。（ 3）要点 全，行文 ，可适当 。the survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. at present,_【答案】 the survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age.at present, about 70% of the students are shortsi

16、ghted. here are some main causes.some students may not have enough sleep. some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. some students even like to watch tv or use computers for a long time.in order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. we ca

17、n also try to do more sports in our spare time. we should have the good habit of using our eyes.i think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.【解析】【 解】 是一篇 表作文。根据 干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般 在 写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近 原因：1.睡眠不足（not enough） 2. 看 、做作 、用 等

18、（for a long time）防止近 的方法：1.做眼睛保健操，多 行体育活 （eye exercises） 2.养成正确的用眼 （have the good habit of）个人 点：如：我 ，我 了解保 眼睛的重要性，尽最大努力保 我 的眼睛。（i think ?； tryones best to do sth. ）。常用的重点句型和短 有：sb. spend some time doing sth.， in order to do sth. ， try to dosth.， the importance of等。5 面表达根据要求完成短文写作， 将作文写在答 卡指定的位置上。每年春

19、 ，每个孩子都能收到来自 的 （lucky money ）。随着生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多的 ，有些甚至通 微信（wechat）或支付宝（alipay）收 。同学 如何管理自己的 ， 自己的 用得更有意 ？ 合自己的 写一篇文章， 数 80 以上，文中不能出 真 校名和人名。内容包括如下：1. 你的压岁钱的来源和用途；2. 对合理使用压岁钱的建议（至少3 点）；3. 呼吁大家节约用钱，把自己的压岁钱用在最需要、最有意义的地方。【答案】 every spring festival i receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and r

20、elatives. now i even get it through wechat or alipay. i usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. sometimes i also buy some gifts for my parents.in order to make good use of the lucky money, i think we can do the following things. first, we should save part of the

21、money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. what is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? helping others makes us happy.all in all, let us manage

22、 our lucky money properly. we should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【详解】每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱（luckymoney ）。随着生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（wechat）或支付宝（alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱，让自己的钱用得更有意义？这是一篇给材料作文，本题所给材料比较详细，写作中注意将所给内容表达出来，不能逐字翻译。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，注意谓语动词的变化。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出

23、简单提纲，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。【点睛】文章使用了很好的短语和句子： in order to make good use of the lucky money, i think we can do the following things. first, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. 这些给文章增色不少。6近年来雾霾天气在中国许多城市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大的关注。请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾的短文向校刊“英语角

24、 ”投稿 ,内容包括：1. 雾霾的危害2. 雾霾产生的原因（2 个）3. 应对雾霾的措施（3 个）提示：雾霾smog poisonous 有毒的注意： 1. 词数 110 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。in recent years, many cities in china have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people._【答案】 in recent years, many cities in china have been h

25、it by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.smog has a bad effect on peoples health. many le,peopchildren and the old in particular,suffer from illnesses caused by smog. consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.how does it come about? scientists h

26、ave found that it is human activity that has caused this.the poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of people s burning coal, driving cars,industry production and so on.what should we do to stop the situation from worsening? first, cleaner fuels for cars andstricter emission standards

27、for factories are of vital importance. second, for us individuals, living agreen life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice.also plantingmore trees to increase green areas is necessary. i believe every contribution counts. only if we work together will smog weather disapp

28、ear completely.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍有关雾霾的情况，题目中给出了写作的内容，我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一个写作的难点。最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。7书面表达

29、假如你是李明，你的英国笔友jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail 。内容如下：1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气；2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生；3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。参考词汇：雾霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3. 词数 80 左右，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。dear jack,i m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your cari

30、ng for the weather and my health. now i d like to tell you something about the haze._yours,li ming【答案】 dear jack,i m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. now i d like to tell you something about the haze.the hazy weather has occurred a lot of time

31、s in my hometown since last year. it was bad for our daily life. more and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. a great number of people have to stay at home .people all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. the govern

32、ment suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.as for me, i will go to school by bike or on foot. in addition, i will tell the people i meet to protectthe environment. would you like to tell me some good ideas? i m looking forward to your reply. yo

33、urs,li ming【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信，告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提示，来组织语言，充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重；然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施；最后介绍一下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主要分成三段，一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情况不一，时态不能统一，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，写完整的句子，利用简单句的基本句型，使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和

34、复合句；语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况，并结合自身的实际情况，讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章结构清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明确，意思表达清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的 和人称，作者根据表达需要使用了一般 去 、一般将来 和一般将来 ， 形式 化准确， 法 范。短文中 言得体，句式表达符合英 的 。句子 构以 句 主，也使用了一些并列句和复合句， 短句 合，使文章富有 奏。短文中 好的句式有more and more peo

35、ple have to go tosee the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze 、 people all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、 the government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway 、 in addition, i will tell t

36、he people i meet to protect the environment. 等。8你是一位九年 的学生李明，你用英 写一封 件 你的笔友amy，感 她 你关心，并告 她目前你在全力以赴 中考而学 ，并与她交流一下目前的学 和生活情况。要点如下：（ 1） . 然你大部分功 你都学得比 好，但是你 自己不 意。你 自己学 上 要多花工夫。（ 2） . 你的父母 你 格要求，但是也很关心你。（ 例 明，适当 23 句） （ 3） . 老 很 意帮助你 。他 希望你 自己的理想。他 （适当 23句） 注意：（ 1） . 要求 句通 ，意思 。（ 2） . 第 2 要点和第3 要点要用23

37、 句 作适当 。（ 3） . 数 90 个左右， 件开 和 尾已 出，不 入 数。hello!dear amy, thank you for caring.now i am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination._how about you? i am looking forward to hearing from you.yoursli ming【答案】例文hello!dear amy, thank you for caring.now i am working hard for the senior hig

38、h school entrance examination. i have got good results in most of my subjects, but i am not happy with myself. i think i must spend more time on my studies.my parents are really strict with me. however, they care for me as well. once upon a time, i failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad

39、. they had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.my teachers are also ready to help us. they hope that we can realize our dreams. they tell us to try our best and not to give up. life is always full of ups and downs. its important not to be afraid of any ki

40、nd of difficulty.how about you? i am looking forward to hearing from you.yoursli ming【解析】【详解】本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get good results, spend+ 时间+on sth, be strict with, howeve

41、r, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, beready to, tell sb to do, try one s best to以do,及 beitisfulladjofto do sth 等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择

42、恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。9书面表达假如你是英语俱乐部的cathy,上周五你们收到了外教angel 为同学们网购的英文书籍。俱乐部的同学们很喜欢网购图书这种便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流读书后的感受。请你根据以下信息 ,

43、给 angel 写一封电子邮件，告诉她俱乐部的活动情况，并说说网购图书的好处。写作要点：1 表达收到图书后的喜悦与感激之情。2 介绍活动的情况：（ l ）上周五，俱乐部成员们一起读英文书。（ 2）本周五的下午 3 点，大家将共同交流读书的体会。（3）同学们将在下个月网购其他的英文书。3 说一说网上购书有什么好处。写作要求：1 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。4 至少 80 词。dear angel,how are you doing?best wishes!yours,cathy【答案】 dear angel,h

44、ow are you doing? i m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. weare grateful to you and all of us are very happy 。last friday， we had a reading party, which was held on friday in our reading room. then we aregoing to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on friday afternoon. all of us arefond of buying books on the internet. we are going to buy some books on