2019-2020版高中英语新教材人教必修第一册Unit-3：Section-Ⅶ-Reading-for-Writingppt课件

1、Section Reading for Writing有关身心健康的比较说明文,本单元的写作任务是读一篇关于健康的文章后，写一篇有关身心健康的比较说明文,Pre-writing ()Learning to write after the model GOING POSITIVE,I always wanted to look like the slim girls on TV even though I knew that it was impossible.I worried about my weight and tried every new diet I read about onli

2、ne.I tried no-fat，low-fat，5：2，only bananas，no bananasI almost went bananas，too,Then I read an article that said instead of asking “Am I fat？” I should be asking “Am I fit？” I had no idea a letter could make such a difference! Once I started thinking about fitness rather than weight，things began to c

3、hange.Instead of saying “I want to lose three kilos”，I would say “I want to run two kilometres in eight minutes” or “I want to be able to do 30 push-ups”.Rather than cutting out the foods I enjoyed，I added healthy foods to my meals.I could still have a burger now and then，but I would add a salad or

4、an apple. Finally，I stopped comparing myself with actresses and models and looking for things that were wrong with my face or body.Instead，I made a list of the things I liked about myself.By being positive about myself and my body，I became both happier and healthier,Preparation for writingWords and

5、phrases,_ adj.健康的 _ adj. 不健康的 _ 绿色食品 _ 健康饮食 _ 不健康的饮食习惯,healthy/fit,unhealthy/unfit,green food,healthy food/diet,unhealthy eating habit,_ 良好的生活习惯 _ adj. 肥胖的 _ 强身健体 _ 充足的睡眠 _ 进行运动 _ 减肥 _ 对有益处 _ 节食 _ 养成一个的饮食习惯 _ 身体健康/不健康 _ 对某人的健康/视力有益/害,good living habits,overweight/fat,build up ones body,enough sleep,

6、take exercise,lose weight,be good for/do good to,go on a diet,form a.eating habit,be in good/poor health,be good/bad for ones health/eyes,While-writing,写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍你自己是如何平衡学习和休息的。 内容包括：1.以前无法平衡学习和休息；2.现在已经做到二者平衡；3.你的做法,Step 1List the outline of the passage,Paragraph 1：_ Paragraph 2：_ Paragraph 3：

7、_,I couldnt balance rest and study before,How to balance rest and study,I can balance rest and study now,Step 2List the words，phrases and sentences,1.Words and phrases,_ adj. 劳累的 _ v. 认识到；意识到 _ 平衡休息和学习 _ 忙于 _ 休息一下 _ 结果 _ 生病 _ 一直 _ 打篮球 _ 落后,tired,realize,balance rest and study,be busy with,have a res

8、t,as a result,fall ill,all the time,play basketball,fall behind,2.Sentences,我经常忙于学习，因此没有时间休息。(so) _ 不是整天学习，而是我开始抽时间休息。(rather than) _ 我不是整天做作业，而是一天打一个小时篮球。(instead of) _,I was often busy with my study，so I had no time to have a rest,Rather than studying all the time，I began to spare some time to hav

9、e a rest,Instead of doing my homework all the day，I went to play basketball for an hour a day,Two years ago，I couldnt balance rest and study.I was often busy with my study，so I had no time to have a rest.As a result，I often felt tired and stressed.At last I fell ill and had to stay in hospital for 3

10、 weeks. After I recovered from illness，I began to think about my problems.I got to realize the importance of balancing rest and study.Rather than studying all the time，I began to spare some time to have a rest.Instead of doing my homework all the day，I went to play basketball for an hour a day. Fina

11、lly，I got to balance rest and study.I became quite healthy.I didnt fall behind; instead，I studied better than before,Post-writingpolishing the passage Exchange your passage with your partner，and pay attention to the following points,1.Does the writer explain why he/she changed/wanted to change? 2.Do

12、es the writer tell how the changes have improved or will improve his/her life? 3.Is the text well-organised? 4.Does the writer use words and expressions to show similarities and differences? 5.Are there any grammar or spelling errors? 6.Does the writer use correct punctuation,写作要点,The past：I worried

13、 about my weight and tried every new diet. The changes：I focused on fitness rather than diet and weight. The present：I became positive and I became both happier and healthier,常用词汇,like，so，too，still，similarly，similar to，the same(.as.)，in common(with)，both.and.，instead，than，however/but/though，differen

14、t from，rather than，instead of，the difference is,亮点表达,1.Taking exercise is closely related to health. 运动与健康息息相关。 2.We should get into the habit of keeping good hours. 我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。 3.Smoking has a great influence on our health. 抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。 4.According to a recent survey，four million people die e

15、ach year from diseases linked to smoking. 依照最近的一项调查，每年有4 000 000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病,5.Unless you keep a balanced diet，you will put on weight. 除非你保持均衡的饮食，否则将会增加体重。 6.Early to bed and early to rise，makes a man healthy，wealthy and wise. 早睡早起会使人健康、富有和聪明。 7.The wall depends on the foundation，and the body depends on exercise. 墙靠基础坚，身强靠锻炼。 8.A