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1、托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:peopledothingsthattheydonotenjoy 托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:people do things that they do not enjoy托福写作难点话题一览should people sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing?do you agree or disagree with the following statement? people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy

2、 doing. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析大家要注意审题,不是一直做自己不喜欢的事,这个statement里面的限定词是sometimes。所以这个话题其实两个观点并不是很对立。个人建议可以选择同意这个观点会比较好展开。比较经典的理由是most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future。另外大家也可以从成功学的角度去写,比如most s

3、uccessful people have one thing in common: they are capable of doing things that they virtually do not enjoy doing.本话题高分范文赏析we live in a world in which every one wants to be successful. nothing is wrong about the desire to be no. 1, and there is no doubt that being successful is enjoyable. neverthel

4、ess, it is somewhat childish to think we can be finally successful by only doing what we enjoy doing. people often are amazed by the glorious appearance of a skyscraper, however they at the same time forget the fact that the skyscraper had taken a long time to construct, maybe much longer time to de

5、sign, and possibly even cost peoples lives during the constructing process! we may categorize things into two groups, the enjoyable and the unenjoyable; at the same time, another category can be made: the necessary and the unnecessary. the point is, things that are necessary are not always enjoyable

6、 and things that are enjoyable sometimes may be unnecessary. doing things that are necessary rather than those that are merely enjoyable is not only helpful, but might also be indispensable for individual success. we all admire even envy those who now have attained great achievements, such those fam

7、ous stars as jacky chen, jet li. we should, however, be aware of the exorbitant prices they have paid for their present glories. jacky chen once told that when he was still a teenager, he and his partners were required to practice more than 12 hours a day; and it was said that jet li was sent to be

8、an apprentice when he was hardly four years old! apparently, those seemingly cruel hardships have turned out to be the best gifts years later. but for yesterdays struggle, todays glories could not exist. things that are both enjoyable and necessary or both unenjoyable and unnecessary virtually seldo

9、m exist. we may dislike some curriculums in university, such as mathematics or history, but they are necessary; we may prefer leisure times to work days, but the latter are indispensable. pursuing a successful life is nothing more than making wise decisions, and by wise we mean the choice of doing t

10、he necessary first.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:transportation vehicle changes peoples lives托福写作难点话题一览a transportation vehicle that has changed peoples liveschoose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed peoples lives. automobiles?bicycles?airplanes?use specifi

11、c reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析没有明显倾向性的题目,选择3个都应该可以拓展出不少可以细说的点。这里选择了automobiles。注意,这里不是要你说这种交通工具的好处,重点在于怎样改变了人们的生活。大家可以说汽车改变了人们的时间、空间观念,进而改变了人们的生活;汽车使货物的远程运输成为可能,进而使人们可以购买更多的商品;汽车使汽油变得格外重要,直接间接导致了很多中东地区的战争;汽车使空气污染更加严重,导致人们的健康受到影响等等。本话题高分范文赏析automobiles, as the exponent of mo

12、dern transportation vehicles, virtually have contributed to modern life more than most people have imagined, even though automobiles, as is true of all other technologies, have also created many problems. the advancement of modern transportation, certainly including that of automobiles, has made mor

13、e goods available in local markets. for example, in china, some fruits are only cultivated in the southern part of the country and not in the northern, such as litchi, sugarcane, pineapplepartly due to sheer gradient of temperature. thanks to the advancement of modern transportation system, people i

14、n the northern part of the country can now get those southern cultivated fruits readily available in almost every local market. in the far past when such system didnt exist, when goods could be transported only by primitive tools such as carts, some fruits such as litchi were the privilege of imperi

15、al household. at the same time, the development of modern transportation has also made goods in local markets much less expensive. take litchi for example again. two decades ago, litchi was pretty expensive, and was a luxury. but the development has made the transportation easier and the cost lower

16、and lower.on the other hand, due to previous factors, more merchants are engaged in the business that simultaneously intensified the competition, which certainly affected the prices. thus, the price of litchi subsequently dropped. the same goes for other goods as well. today, people are able to buy

17、almost any goods they want no matter where the origin of the goods is, and to make choice among more counterparts, and the best of all, to take the goods home with less expenditure.moreover, advanced transportation vehicles such as automobiles have to some extent made people more independent than be

18、fore. it is not hard to imagine that 50 years ago a young widow who lived in a small village and whose husband had died when she was 23 had little chance to get married again, for the sake of the tradition or culture, or whatever. but if that happened in the present day, things would be entirely dif

19、ferent. advanced transportation vehicles being readily available, she could easily get to another city within at most 2 days and by lower expenses, say from the small village located in the north east of china to the far southern city, guangzhou - several thousands of miles away. thats a big city, t

20、hats a new city, and nobody knows her there; she has a brand new start, and she is entirely independent.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:live performance or television broadcast托福写作难点话题一览live performance or television broadcast, which is more enjoyable?do you agree or disagree with the following statement? att

21、ending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.写作思路展开结构分析同意或者不同意都是片面的。大家可以先讨论现场的好处(比如气氛好air of excitement;投入感强 getting involved)和电视转播(television live s

22、how)的好处(比如,有解说commentary/commentator;多镜头various angles of view; 镜头组接 montage),至于选择就要视情况而定了。以足球为例,如果是踢得比较烂的比赛去现场看意义不大,但如果是一场比如世界杯决赛或是欧冠比赛的话,显然去现场看更有价值,同样的情况也可以适用于音乐会之类的表演。本话题高分范文赏析while watching live performances on television is convenient, it cannot compare to attending a i live performance in pers

23、on. live performances, whether artistic, sporting, or entertainment, offer unique sensations apart from the performance itself, and encourage a greater level of participation i as well as a better understanding of the event than a television broadcast could. the wonderful sensory experience of a soc

24、cer match begins before the game starts. the smell of popcorn and street food wafting through the air, the crowd roaring and waving like an ocean, and the excited songs of the fans are all part of the experience that adds to the enjoyment of watching the game in person. a rock conceit is not just he

25、aring the music; it is the feeling of standing in a crowd: that is moving together like one living body to the beat of the drums. these experiences are all important parts of the experience of an event, and cannot be felt when watching the same event on television. when watching a performance in per

26、son, a viewer feels a closer sense of connection to the event. every fan in the stadium will always leap to their feet when they see their favorite team score a goal in a soccer match, while only a few people might jump up watching the same goal at home. watching a music performance on television wo

27、uldnt necessarily make people want to start dancing, but hearing a jazz band play live would start every foot in the room tapping, just itching to dance. live events seem to invite the active participation of the viewing audience, while television is a medium that encourages passivity on the part of

28、 the viewer. the understanding of a performance viewed on television is usually limited. a rock performance viewed live has ear-shatteringly loud music. while some people might not enjoy this, it is a part of the experience that television filters out. at any given time during a sporting event there

29、 are many different things going on at once. because television cameras can only focus on one event at a time; a live viewer can take in a larger field of vision, and potentially understand more about the events. finally, live viewers understanding of live performances is increased because live perf

30、ormances are not interrupted with commercial breaks every 12 minutes.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析:live performance or television broadcast托福写作难点话题一览live performance or television broadcast, which is more enjoyable?do you agree or disagree with the following statement? attending a live performance (for exam

31、ple, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.写作思路展开结构分析同意或者不同意都是片面的。大家可以先讨论现场的好处(比如气氛好air of excitement;投入感强 getting involved)和电视转播(television live show)的好处(比如,有解说commentary/commentato

32、r;多镜头various angles of view; 镜头组接 montage),至于选择就要视情况而定了。以足球为例,如果是踢得比较烂的比赛去现场看意义不大,但如果是一场比如世界杯决赛或是欧冠比赛的话,显然去现场看更有价值,同样的情况也可以适用于音乐会之类的表演。本话题高分范文赏析while watching live performances on television is convenient, it cannot compare to attending a i live performance in person. live performances, whether arti

33、stic, sporting, or entertainment, offer unique sensations apart from the performance itself, and encourage a greater level of participation i as well as a better understanding of the event than a television broadcast could. the wonderful sensory experience of a soccer match begins before the game st

34、arts. the smell of popcorn and street food wafting through the air, the crowd roaring and waving like an ocean, and the excited songs of the fans are all part of the experience that adds to the enjoyment of watching the game in person. a rock conceit is not just hearing the music; it is the feeling

35、of standing in a crowd: that is moving together like one living body to the beat of the drums. these experiences are all important parts of the experience of an event, and cannot be felt when watching the same event on television. when watching a performance in person, a viewer feels a closer sense of connection to the event. every fan in the stadium will alw

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