高中英语书面表达精品课件

1、英语写作,高三,山东2007年高考考试说明 第II卷书面表达部分的解读与例证 关于写作 “写作的词数要求提高到120150词汇，既要求表达事实信息，又要陈述个人观点，相对以往试题而言，思维和表达的空间骤然增大，需要考生花大力气进行有关训练。”,齐鲁晚报2006年12月19日B2 版 例证 当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。 有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读 原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?” 为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语 短文：,看电影：省时、有趣、易懂 读原著：细节更多、语言优美 我的看法及理由 注意： 1、词数：100-120 文章题目和开头已 给

2、出（不计入词数）。 2、参考词汇：original work 或 book in the original （原著）,Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. ,Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the

3、original. ,bad beginnings I dont think seeing a film is better than reading a book. b. As for me, c. Others hold the view that,bad conclusions I think both films and books have their advantages. b. I have no preference between the two. c. I first watch a film , then read the book.,Good Conclusions：我

4、的看法及理由： Revised film is just like one tree in the original works forest. I prefer to go across the forest rather than enjoy only one tree.,Through reading, every reader will have a different Hamlet in mind. So dont give up reading. Lets taste the original flavor of art.,Books introduce us into the b

5、est society. By reading a book, we hear what they said and did; we see them as if they were really alive; we sympathize with them, enjoy with them.,给出的参考答案 Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand th

6、e whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow. Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.,Personally, I agr

7、ee with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and whats more, I am able to better understand the authors ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.,高考英语作文模版 对比观点题型 阐述主题题

8、型 解决方法题型 说明利弊题型,对比观点题型 （1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己 的看法。 1有一些人认为。 2另一些人认为。 3我的看法。,（2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点,The topic of -主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of -（支持A的理由一）What is more, -理由

9、二). Moreover, -(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),-（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),-(理由三). From my point of view, I think -（我的观点）. The reason is that -(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my

10、 choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .,（2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点 Some people believe that -（观点一）. For example, they think -（举例说明)And it will bring them - (为他们带来的好处). In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,- (我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, -(反对的理由之二) Form

11、 all what I have said, I agree to the thought that -(我对文章所 讨论主题的看法),阐述主题题型要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提 纲的要求进行论述. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义分析并举例使其更充实,The good old proverb -（名言或谚语） reminds us that - (释义). In deed, we can learn many things form it. First of all,- (理由一). For example, - (举例说明). Secondly,- (理由二). Another case i

12、s that -(举例说明). Furthermore , -(理由三) In my opinion, -(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say-A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, youll necessarily benefit a lot from it.,解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种 途径问题现状怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点,In recent days, we have to face a problem-A, w

13、hich is becoming more and more serious. First, - (说明的现状)Second, - (举例进一步说明现状) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, - (解决方法一). For another -(解决方法二). Finally, - (解决方法三).Personally, I believe that - (我的解决方法). Consequently, Im confid

14、ent that a bright future is awaiting us because -(带来的好处).,说明利弊题型这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状， 再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从 一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求 考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）. 说明事物现状 . 事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）. 你对现状（或前景）的看法,Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen

15、as follows. First - (的优点之一). Besides -（的优点之二）. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that -(的第一个缺点) To make matters worse, -(的第二个点) Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. There

16、fore, I would like to -(我的看法),Asisshown/indicatedbythefigure/percentage in the table (graph/picture/chart),_作文题目的议题_hasbeenon rise/decreasesignificantly/dramatically/steadilyrising from_in _to_in_.Fromthesharp/marked decline/riseinthechart,itgoeswithoutsayingthat_.There are at least two good reasons

17、 accountingfor_. On the one hand,_.On the other hand, _is due to the fact that_.In addition,_is responsible for _.May be there are some other reasons to show_. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, Iholdthepointofviewthat_ .I

18、am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.,图表作文的框架,Studying Abroad Attending schools abroad has many advantages. Firstly, by looking at our own country form outside, we can widen our vision and broaden our minds. Secondly, we can visit famous scenic spots and make friends with the local peo

19、ple. thirdly, we can use the foreign language quickly. However, there are also some disadvantages in attending a foreign school. The most serious problem is the language barrier. Most students do not have adequate knowledge of language spoken there. On arriving there, they find it difficult to under

20、stand what the teachers are saying. Furthermore, the cost of living is much higher than that in our country, so most students have to find part-time job to support themselves. On the whole, it is a good thing to study abroad. However, one must not lose sight of the disadvantages.,说明利弊型,On punctualit

21、y Punctuality means observing regular or appointed time. There is no doubt that punctuality is of great importance in modern world, and to be punctual is not only a good quality, but it is also to show respect for others and to win trust. As far as I am concerned, failure to be punctual in keeping o

22、nes appointment is invited to a dinner and arrives later than the appointed time, he keeps all the others guests waiting. This is great discourtesy towards both the guests and the host. As a proverb says, “ Time flies never to be recalled”, this is true. If we lose something, we may find it again. B

23、ut lost time can never be regained. In fact, time itself is life. Therefore, wasting others time is the same as taking away time from others lives.,阐述主题题型,Is the only way out to go to college We had a discussion about whether it is the only way out for senior students to go to college. Views vary fr

24、om person to person. The majority of students consider it necessary to go to college. They think it can widen their knowledge and improve their qualities. Only in this way can they find better jobs after graduation. Very few students think it unnecessary to go to university, because the tuition is t

25、oo high for their family to afford. Whats more, its rather hard for college graduates to find satisfactory jobs. Thirty percent of the students, however, believe “ All roads lead to Rome.” Therefore, it doesnt make any difference whether they go to college or not. In my opinion, we can receive a bet

26、ter education at college so that we can sever our motherland.,图表作文,怎样写好一篇英语作文,写作中需要注意的问题 了解短文写作的内容及要求 把握好写作步骤 写作时要注意“三忌” 形式上要一致 避免犯小的笔误（语法，拼写） 书写规范，工整,形式上的一致也是运用英语进行表达时需要十分注意的 a.主谓一致 Twenty percent of the students in our class is from the suburb. b. 人称、指代要一致 Bring your books here tomorrow and I will

27、 return it to the library. c. 平行(对称)关系要一致 My teacher, Mr Wang, is patient as well as imagination. d.时态（语态）的起点要一致 Mary got up and dressing quickly.,书面表达注意衔接与连贯 表示转折关系的词：but, while, however, yet, rather than, not but, whereas, 表示选择关系的词：or, eitheror, 表示原因，结果关系的词：for, thus, because, since, 表示并列关系：not on

28、ly but also, and, both and, as well as. neither nor., 表示时间关系的词：when, while, as, before, after, . 表示目的的词：for this purpose, so that, in order that, 表示让步关系的词：although, though, even though/ if 表示条件的词：if, unless, as/ so long as,eg: Therefore, its very important for us to form healthy eating habits._, bad

29、 eating habits are still very common among us students. ( 2006 福建卷),_ you didnt speak clearly, _ I didnt listen well.,However, others prefer to go out for traveling, _ it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. (2006陕西卷) However, this change has bad _ good effects, especially depend

30、ence on the Internet. (2006 广东卷) _ he got home, he said to his grandpa, “Birds also need friends!” (2006 辽宁卷),However,as well as,since,Either,or,When,写好主题句： 一. 主题句在段落中常出现的位置由两种。 1. 段落开端: 后面的句子提供支持信息或论证。 Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The rea

31、son is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting and it is easier to follow. 段落结尾：前面提供细节的支持句，最后用一句总结性的主 题句加以概括。 Im a high school students in Beijing, where the Winter Asian Games will start. My spoken English is good and I can communicate wi

32、th foreigners fluently. And I have other virtues. I like sports and Im familiar with Beijing. So I think Im suitable for serving the WAG.,写好段落主题句的三原则 概括全段主要内容，既不能以偏概全，也不能随意扩大范围 如：在一段介绍“我在英语学习听说读写方面发生的变化”的 段落中，主题句应该是： My spoken English has improved a lot. Great changes have taken place in my English

33、study. 2. 有体现中心思想的关键词或短语。 3. 以简洁明了的句子为主，避免为追求使用 复杂结构而导致理解错误或主题不鲜明的句子。,请根据下面选篇的结构形式和内容确定一个主题句。 _ Firstly, the tuition is reasonable. Secondly, the university can help the students get a sum of loan from the banks, which reduces the load of peasant families like mine. Thirdly, its program in computer

34、is recognized as the leader in the country. Why do I choose to major in computer science in this university? B. There are several reasons why I have decided to attend this university.,Learning a foreign language has changed. Not so long ago students would sit with pens in hand, writing the basic for

35、ms of a language, and the learning structures they would never be able to speak. In that same classroom today, pens and notebooks have been put away. The spoken sounds of foreign language fill the room,写好段落扩展句 扩展句是主题句的具体例证或有力支持。写好扩展句要注意 以下三点: 扩展句要紧扣文章中心和主题句的内容。扩展句是主题句的 补充和支持。 2. 扩展句的层次很重要。一个主题句可以从以下

36、几方面展开，每 一个方面就是一个扩展句。这些扩展句只有按照时间，空间， 因果等逻辑顺序展开，文章才能层次分明，条理清晰。 3. 关联词对扩展句来说很重要。汉语注意思想相联，英文强调 形式相联。从属于一个主题句的几个扩展句不能简单地堆砌 在一起了事，而要用丰富多采的连词连接起来。,阅读下面的文段，并为所给的扩展句排列顺序： I think Im fit for the job. _ _ _ _ So Im sure I can do the job well if I get the position. Im fond of English and do well in both speakin

37、g and writing. B. As a student, I have read a lot and have much knowledge in many fields. C. Above all, I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station. D. Besides, Im easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others.,B AD ,写好结尾句 结尾句要紧扣段落主题，有要有所扩展。结尾句要力求简洁 有力，意味隽永。 结尾句可以借鉴一下几种方法： 总结法 如04 年湖北试题关于英语学习的讨论，范文用“ In short, the students have not arrived any agreement.” 结尾。 2. 引用法 引用名人名言是使作文大放异彩的好方法。如05 广东 “守株待兔” 的结尾用“ No pains, no gains.” 显现了作者的良好 功底。 3. 反问法 05