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1、中考作文集锦1.作文写作思路中考常考问题及形式:1. 中考作文常见文体:夹叙夹议2. 中考作文常见形式:写回信;中英提示写作,话题类作文。写作原则:1231原则(1句问候,2句概括来信中的问题,3条建议及建议原因,1句祝福3. 写作能力之外的得分因素:字迹、分段4. 写作注意以下几点:避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。注意长短句交错,几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板长短句交错使用( 注意:应突出主题句 ;长句子并非越长越好)。【阅卷关注】阅卷关注哪几点、要点:全部图片或问题(要点决定分/语言准确);、单词:提示词语全用上+单词拼写(字数达标/标点符号和大小写/ fourteen等
2、数三、语法:高级(多用句型字);/适当加点谚语)+语法出错(三单、时态、避免Chi nglish);四、卷面:书写规范(过渡词可使上下文连贯)+不要求漂亮但要求工整。作文分类击破【一、写人记事类】(感恩/感谢朋友老师父母、难忘经历、微笑、鼓励、毕业感想、暑期计划等)【01参考范文-适用于感恩/感谢、难忘经历、最喜欢的老师/朋友等:】Mylife in middle school will cometo the end soon. During the past threeyears, my English teacher gave me so muchheIp that I will neve
3、r forget her.couldn tI was not good at En glish, I tried my best to lear n it but Iget good grades, so I decided to give it up. My En glish teacher knew that,she not only encouraged meto go on learning but also helped mewith myEnglishafter class. With her help, I made great p rogress.I was moved by
4、her and I was really tha nkful to her. Now I feel morecon fide nt tha n before. I msure I can lear n En glish very well in the future.【02参考范文-适用于难忘的学校活动,、鼓励、合作、坚持不懈的精神等:】During the three years, our school has held various activities, among which the activity of climbi ng Xian gsha n leaves me the de
5、e pest memory.bag for me so that I could climb ” every one en couraged me. At thatLast term, my classmates and I had a school trip to Xiangshan Park. There, we were divided into groups and the first group that topped the mountain would win a big p rize. Our group tried our best to climb as quickly a
6、s po ssible. But soon I felt dizzy and was out of breath. Notic ing this, my teammates came to me immediately. Some of them gave me can dies so that I could get more en ergy. Others carried the the mountain easily “ You can do it!mome nt, I felt dee ply moveda nd really po werful. At last, we were t
7、he first to top the moun ta in.This activity not only gave us a cha nee to kee p our body fit and enjoy the beautifulscenery, but also let mefeel the power of teamwork. A unitedgroup can bring us warmth and stre ngth and can lead us to success.parents have given me a lot since I was born. WithSo I t
8、hink it is necessary to do something special【03参考范文-感恩父母:】music. So it would be a great idea to buy a wonderful CD for them. LastSun day, I went to a bookstore and chose one among the top 10.While we were hav ing dinner together, I pl ayed the CD. It was beautiful. With great joy, they gave me a war
9、m hug and a big smile. I felt very sweet.I was really proud that I did something for my parents. Their smiles were the best en courageme nt for me. I made up my mind to do thi ngs like this more ofte n.【04参考范文-帮助他人、志愿活动:】There s no doubt that their care, I grow up happily. for them to show my gratit
10、ude.Both of myparents loveI think helping others is important and necessary. Taking part in volunteer work is one of the greatest ways to give a hand to those who n eed help. And I like it very much.I remember I helped the old people in the old people s homelast Saturday. First, I cleaned the room a
11、nd the windows for them because it was not convienient for them to do such thins. Whaf s more, I told them someinteresting stories, sang some En glish songs for them and they moved to tears. Whe n it was time to say goodbye, I hugged them and pro mised to see them aga in.Every one may have trouble i
12、n life and our little kind act can make a big differe neeI will do the samell tell you aboutin their life. In fact, helping others is helping ourselves. in the future because it can bring me and other people happin ess.【05参考范文-喜欢的hobby、活动:】At my school we have many fun activities to take part in. ba
13、sketball,badminton, and ping pong. Myfavorite activitywith my friends every day after school. Basketball isIt is good to lear n about your school activities. Now I mine.isWe have swimmi ng, basketball. I p lay a team sport where team-mates p ass the ball to each other to throw it into a hoop for poi
14、n ts. The team with the most points at the end of the game wins. In basketball it is good to be tall because it is easier to score poin ts.I like to p lay basketball because it is a team sport and it is also a good way to get exercise. Basketball is also a good game to lear n how to work well with o
15、thers.【06参考范文-Hobby、读书类:】I have great interest in reading magazines because I like reading manykinds of articles in them, such stories, n ews, scie nee, jokes and so on. The stories give me life lessons, the jokes makeme laugh and the news keep me knowing what hapens around me. I can get lots of in
16、formatio n as well as enjoy a lot of beautiful pi ctures in the magaz in es.I enjoy read ing magaz ines because they can not only help me study better and but also make me relaxed and happy every day.【二、给予建议类】山星少建议类作文写作思路(1231)(一句问候、两句问题) 第一段:很高兴收到来信针对问题回答或体谅别人的感受 主动提出给别人建议第二段:3条具体建议及原因 第三段:提出希望和祝愿
17、开头句:表达同情理解+主动提建议I understand your feelings because I once had the similar problem as you do now.It s very commorfor stude nts to do sth. and many stude nts have the same problem like you.Let me?offer?you?some?useful?advice.Here s my advice.My suggesti ons are as follows.建议类句型:? You are suppo sed to
18、do.? Youd better do .? Why not/ dont you do.? Its a good idea to do.? If I were you, I would do.结尾句:? I hope what I said can be of some help to you.? Just have a try. I m looking forward to hearing good news from you!? Try your best, and youll make great p rogress!【07学习类-参考范文:】Dear Lucy,s very com m
19、onI m very happy to hear from you. Don t worry too much. It for students to dislike memorizing and many students have the same problem like you. Here s my advice.First of all, you had better p review the new less ons and write dow n the difficult p oi nts before less ons, which can make you become i
20、n terested in what the teachers say in class. Whaf s more (Besides), you should listen carefullyll find that English andand try to take part in the class activities. You history are not as bori ng as you thi nk. Last but not least, you also n eed to review the lessons regularly after class. In this
21、way, you can understand better and memorize more quickly. If you still feel unhappy, why not have a talk with your teacher and ask for help?I really hope my advice can help you make great p rogress with your study.Yours,Zhang Fang【08解决与父母矛盾-参考范文:】Dear Alice,As a tee nager, I met the same p roblem as
22、 you. But now I can get on/ alongbetter with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.First of all, whe n facing this kind of situati on, its very important foryou to keep calm instead of arguing with your parents, which can only makethingsworse. Whats more, to solve the p roblems, youd better make a
23、schedule, setup a goal for each day and show them to your paren ts. Besides, we are supposedto try to have a heart-to-heart com muni cati on with our parents in order to gettheir understanding and support. Last but not least, why not ask your teacherfor help in stead of argu ing with your paren ts?
24、Your teacher may have some goodideas.I hope what I say here can help you a lot.【09运动/健康类-参考范文:】All of us want to be healthy. But some of the stude nts/people ofte n have acold. Wesometimes have a fever and feel tired. In order to have a healthy body,we can do many things.First of all, we should pay
25、atte nti on to our diet or meals. We should eatmore fruit and vegetable to kee p ourselves healthy and strong. Whats more,we should often wash our hands and open the windows to keep the air inthe roomfresh. Then, we n eed eno ugh slee p or rest. Stay ing up too late is bad for ourhealth. Last but no
26、t least, its also a good habit for us to do more sp orts,such as playing ball games, running, swimming and so on. Because it cannot onlyhelp us kee p fit but also improve our health aga inst ill ness.In a word, if we all do these thin gs, I believe we will have a strong body.So why not find some fri
27、e nds to do exercise and have fun together? I hope youare healthy and enjoy your life.【三、环保类】【10治理空气污染-参考范文:】The air p olluti on is worse and worse today. Not on ly does it affect the pl ace we live, it also has a great in flue nee on our health. Therefore, ittime for us to pay more atte nti on to i
28、t.The first thing we can do is to take buses or ride bikes in stead of driv ing private cars. It helps to reduce the dirty gas produced by the cars. What smore, we can plant more trees and flowers because they can pro vide us with more fresh air. Last but no t least, our gover nment can also take ac
29、tions to p reve nt factories from p roduci ng too much smoke.In fact, eve n the simp lest everyday activities can makea real differe nee to the environment.I believe as long as we try our best to protect theen vir onment, we can make the world a better p lace to live in.【11低碳生活-参考范文:】Nowadays, a new
30、 lifestyle called low carb on life is sp read ing every corner of our country which mea ns there is low en ergy and no waste.Low-carb on lifeis good for every one. To help with the en vir onmen t, I have someideas. First, we had better walk or ride a bike to school in stead of tak ing a car. Sec ond
31、, we had better not use p lastic bags any more. No one can sta ndthe white pollution.So, it is wise to use bags which can be reused again and aga in. Third, we should try to use things that can be recycled and we should reuse books as long as po ssible. Whats more, we should n ever forget to turnoff
32、 the lights whe n we leave the room and turn off the tap in time.I think it s our duty to live a low-carb on life. And eve n the sim plestactivities can makea real differe nee to the en vir onment. All in all, if every one does someth ing for the en vir onment, I believe the earth will be a better p
33、l ace.Let s do it now.【四、介绍北京类】【12介绍北京旅游-参考范文:】I m glad to hear from you. The best time to come to Beijing is during the spring. The weather is not too hot or too cold, so it is the p erfect time of the year to be outside. During the spring in Beijing everything seems fresh and n ew.I advise you to
34、visit the Summer P alace, the Great Wall, and the Tem pie of Heave n. The Great Wall is one of the won ders of the world and it is an amaz ing pl ace to visit. The summer P alace and The Tem pie of Heave n are beautiful too. There are royal buildi ngs, fan tastic artwork, and sce nic views for peopl
35、e to enjoy.Before you come to Beiji ng, you should know that Beiji ng is a very crowded and big city. So it is n ecessary for you to travel with a map and you must be p atie nt about wait ing in line or large crowds.I hope you will have a nice trip.【13介绍北京-参考范文:】Our country has a long history, and B
36、eiji ng, the cap ital of Chin a, is one of the largest cities in the world. There are many p laces of in terests, such as the Summer P alace, the Forbidde n City and the Great Wall. All of them are beautiful and well-k nown to the world.Now, people pay more atte ntio n to the en vir onment. More tre
37、es and flowers have bee n plan ted. For the traffic, it is very convenient for people to travel around Beiji ng, because several new subway lines have bee n built. If you cometo Beiji ng, you will find people here are veryfrie ndlyand helpful/warm-hearted. Besides, a lot of people can speak English.
38、 Whats more, there are a lot of fun you can do. Beiji ng opera is famous in the world, not only Chinese but also foreigners like it. Beijing duck and dumplings are popular in Chi na, and many foreig ners like them too. Beiji ng is really an attractive city with a long history. I am proud of being a
39、Chin ese.rm look ing forward to heari ng from you soon.【五、暑期计划类】【14参考范文-暑期计划:】My Summer Holiday PlanAfter three years of study, I feel happy but very tired. Now I show you my summer holiday plan.First I will have a trip with my paren ts. My parents say I should relax myself in the sea with someof ou
40、r friends. Then I ll exercise as usual to keep healthy and read some books. I thi nk read ing books is a good hobby because we can get useful in formatio n for both work and study. And I will help my parents do some housework, such as cook ing, shopping and clea ning.A good plan can make our holiday
41、s meanin gful and in terest in g/colorful.I m looking forward to the camp. I believe it must be excitingand will helpme a lot on my way as I grow up.I hope I will have a good time in the coming vacatio n.【15参考范文-暑期计划和志愿活动结合:】The summer vacation is coming and all students have made great plans, such
42、as learning English, reading books, going traveling and so on. We can t waitto hug it.Asfor me, I amgoing to volunteer my time to help others. First, I amgoingto visit an old people s hometo cheer them up. I amgood at singing and dancing, so I can put this love to good use by spending time with thes
43、e elders. Helping childre n with their En glish at an after-school teachi ng cen ter is also a good choice for me. En glish has always bee n my favorite subject and I am among the best English learners in myclass. Not only can I take the chanee to do something meanin gful, but I can improve my own E
44、n glish by teach ing others. I am sure I will have a busy and won derful win ter vacatio n.If you have more questi ons, p lease ask me.【六、其他类】【15参考范文-做家务类:】Nowadaysmanystudents say they are too busy with their study and they don t have time to help their parents with the housework. I don t think the
45、y are true, that s all excuses.In myopinion, doing somehousework such as wash ing our own clothes and making the bed can make us independent and we can take care of ourselves better whe n we grow up. Shari ng the housework is helpful for us to set up good relati on shi p with our parents. On weekday
46、s, I often help myparents clean my bed rooms every morning and wash dishes after supper. At weekends, washing clothes and mopping the floor is my duty. And I also help myparents carry something heavy from the sup ermarket.As the saying goes ,One cant make a big success without being self reliant.so I think that stude
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