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,writingapicturestory,06/28/06,1.读图。即分析图画所提供的信息，充分发挥自己的想象力，正确理解图中内容的确切含义。如图1所示：父母亲和“我”去公园。图2：在公园里划船。图3：“我”抓鱼时不慎掉入水中。图4：母亲跳出水中把“我”救起。2.试写。即根据图中情景及汉语提示来表达文章内容，充分发挥自己的实际水平，避难就易，一法不成，另找它途。如图1所示：MyparentsandIwenttothepark.图2：Wewentboatingonthelake.图3：IwascatchingthefishwhenIfellintothewater.图4：Mymotherjumpedintothewaterandsavedme.3.扩写。即适当增加情节和过渡性词语，把上述句子连贯起来。这里的扩写并不是毫无根据地简单地通过想象把试写内容拉长，而是紧紧围绕图片中心把试写内容进行扩充。使内容更丰富、人物活动更形象、事情过程更具体，因而增强文章的感染力。力争做到合理想象，用词得当，句子结构及语法运用正确，条理清楚。,LastSunday，myparentsandIwenttothepark.Wewentboatingonthewater.Thereweresomebeautifulfishinthewater.Icouldnthelpcatchingthem.Suddenly，Ifellintothewater.IwassofrightenedthatIcriedloudly.Mymotherjumpedintothewateratonceandliftedmeoutofthewater.Iwassaved.Howdangerousthetripwas！该文章转载自无忧考网：,假定你是TOM,请根据下面的图画内容写一篇日记.,1.Style:2.Tense(generally):3.Person:,1.Goovertherequirement,Adiary,pasttense,I,TuesdayDecember6,2005FineIhadaverybaddayyesterday.Everythinggowrong.Inthemorning,myalarmclockdidntringsoIwokeupanhourlate.IaminsuchahurrythatIburnedmyhandwhenIwascookingbreakfast.,Correctanymistakes,went,was,ThenIrunoutofthehousetocatchthe8:30bus,butofcourseImissit.IwasveryunhappybecauseIknowmyteachergotangryifanyonewaslateforclass.SoIranthreemilestotheschool.ButwhenIarrivedthereintheend,IfindthatitwasSunday,Correctanymistakes,ran,knew,found,missed,根据下列图画中Tom骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇故事。短文要写得连贯、完整。,Sample1,1.topic:2.Tense(generally):3.Person:,1.Goovertherequirement,Astory（atrafficaccident),pasttense,Tom,he,Tom/rideabikeAlongthestreet/roadAfewdaysago/theotherday/oneday,2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how),Acar/runfastto/runintohimTom/falloffhisbikeSuddenly,2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how),Thedriver/frightened/runaway,2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how),Awoman/rememberthenumberofthecarThepoliceThedriver/catch,2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how),Keywords,sentences,Awomansawtheaccidentandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepolice.Thedriverwascaught.,rideabike/runfastto,seetheaccident/rememberthenumber/callthepolice/becaught,befrightened/runaway,hithim/falloffhisbike,WhenTomwasridingalongthestreet.Acarranfasttohim.,Thecarhithim.Andhefelloffhisbike.,Thedriverwassofrightenedthatheranaway.,Tomwasridingalongthestreet.Acarranfasttohim.Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverwasfrightened.Heranaway.Awomansawtheaccident.Sherememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepoliceman.Thedriverwascaught.,Passage1,3.Writingapassage,Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreetwhenhesawacarrunfasttowardshim.Heturnedleftquicklybutitwastoolate.Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverofthecarwassofrightenedthatheranawayasfastashecould.Hewassoonoutofsight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.Fortunately,awomanhappenedtoseeitandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepolicemanandtoldhimwhathadhappened.Finally,thedriverwascaughtandpunishedforhiswrongdoing.,passage2,Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreetwhenhesawacarrunfasttowardshim.Heturnedleftquicklybutitwastoolate.Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverofthecarwassofrightenedthatheranawayasfastashecould.Hewassoonoutofsight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.Fortunately,awomanhappenedtoseeitandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepolicemanandtoldhimwhathadhappened.Finally,thedriverwascaughtandpunishedforhiswrongdoing.,Passage2,Usingconnectives,并列转折3.因果4.其他,and,bothand,but,however,though,while,so,therefore,because,when,suddenly,immediately,assoonas,unfortunately,sothat,finally,asaresult,Whatwasworse,Goovertherequirement（person,tense,style）,Summary:Howtowriteapicturestory?,Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how),Writeapassage（usingconnectivesandaddingdetailsandspecificinformation.),基本篇章结构点题（时间、地点、人物、事件）事件的起因事件的发展/过程事件的结果扣题,2004年辽宁,下面4幅图片描述的是星期天上午在中山公园里发生的一件事。请根据图片所提供的信息用英语为你校的“英语园地”写一篇短文。注意：短文须包括所有图片的主要内容。短文的内容要连贯、完整；短文单词数：100左右（已给句子中的单词不计入总词数）；参考词汇：货摊stand(n.);抢夺snatch(v.);逮捕arrest(v.),1点题（时间、地点）星期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊旁2事件的起因年轻妇女的包被抢3事件的发展/过程人们追赶抢包者；长排椅上坐着一位老人；抢包者从老人身旁跑过，老人用伞将他绊倒4事件的结果两名警察逮捕抢劫者：5扣题妇女感谢老人，人们称赞老人的机智,审题,描述过去个人经历,第三人称,一般过去时,星期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊OneSundaymorning,；inZhongshanPark.；Atanice-creamstand年轻妇女的包被抢snatchherhandbagaway人们追赶抢包者runafterthesnatcher在附近长排椅上坐着一位老人Therebesb.sittingonthebenchnearby,提纲,从老人身旁跑过Runpasttheoldman拿起伞；将伞放在他两腿之间；pickuphisumbrella;putitbetweenthetwolegsofthesnatcher;摔一大跟斗falldownonthegroundheavily,两名警察来到并逮捕抢劫者Cameinapolicecar;arrestsb.感谢老人的帮助Thanksb.forhishelp称赞老人的机智Praisetheoldmanforhiscleverness,1、几天前theotherday;severaldaysago2、使人感到意外toonessurprise3、就在这时atthatmoment;atthattime,常用关联词,副词：suddenly,unfortunately,luckily,immediatelyasaresultso/suchthattwohourslater,and,1.Itwas(天气)2.Whilesb.wasdoing/sb.wasabouttodowhen3.sb.didand4.see/hearsb.Doing5.withthehelpofsb.,一些可能用到的句型和词组,OneSundaymorning,manypeoplewenttoZhongshanPark.Asitwasveryhot,somepeoplegotthirstyandweretryingtobuysomeice-cream.Suddenlyawomanatthestandshoutedbecauseayoungmanbehindhersnatchedherhandbagaway.,Seeingthis,immediatelyafewpeoplebegantorunafterhim.However,thesnatcherransofastthatitwasnoteasytocatchhim.Luckily,therewasanoldmansittingonabenchnearby.,Asthesnatcherwasrunningpasthim,theoldmanquicklypickeduphisumbrellaandputitbetweenthesnatcherslegs.Theyoungmancriedandfelldownonthegroundhard.,Afewminuteslatertwopolicemencameinapolicecarandarrestedhim.Thewomanthankedtheoldman,andthepeoplearoundpraisedtheoldmanforhiscleverness.,Homework,finishyourwritingandhanditintomorrow,ClearideaCorrectgrammarCompletepassageBeaut