湖南省衡阳县2020高考英语二轮复习 短文改错基础选练（5）

湖南衡阳县2020高考英语短文改错二轮基础选练（5）短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.To celebrate the end of our exams, my friends and I went to fast-food restaurant for some hamburgers and coca colaWhen our food comeI started walking towards a tableFortunately, I fell over and my dish slipped with my hands and the food landed on a mans white shirtI was frightened and unsure how to do next, but just then all I heard was “Its OK” after the man disappeared into the restroomA few minute later, the man out of the restroom and my heart beat it fastI thought he was going to ask for his parents telephone numberInstead, he simply smiled at me, handed me some money and said“Buy yourself some new hamburgers”, Then he walked away without even finish his food【参考答案】4.To celebrate the end of our exams, my friends and I went to(此处加a)fast-food restaurant for some hamburgers and coca colaWhen our food come(came)I started walking towards a tableFortunately(Unfortunately), I fell over and my dish slipped with (off 或from) my hands and the food landed on a mans white shirtI was frightened and unsure how (what)to do next, but just then all I heard was “Its OK” after (before)the man disappeared into the restroomA few minute (minutes)later, the man out of the restroom and my heart beat it (去掉it)fastI thought he was going to ask for his (my) parents telephone numberInstead, he simply smiled at me, handed me some money and said“Buy yourself some new hamburgers”, Then he walked away without even finish (finishing)his food短文改错下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear editor,Next year I will go to university and becoming a college student, and I have never been away from my parents. I dont know how to adapt myself to my university life. I hear many freshmen are at loss what to do when we are at university. They cant take care of themselves in their everyday life, feel lonely and homesick. Clothes, money or mobile phone are sometimes gone. And because of different climates and the food, they often feel sick. Some even rented rooms outside the campus, but I dont think its so safely. Could you tell me how to deal with these problems so that I will be able to get used the university life in the future?Yours sincerely,Li Hua【参考答案】5.1. becoming改为become2. and改为but3. at后加a4. we改为they5. feel改为feeling或feel前加and6. phone改为phones7. 去掉the8. rented改为rent9. safely改为safe10. used后加to短文改错下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. Its true what honesty is more important than money!【参考答案】6.This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An olddeeplyman was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running andknocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the peopleworse directions/all 改anyaround rush to pick the money up when the old man stood there, not know what to do.rushed knowingSurprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted theupmoney again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot ofmissing /lostnice people in your life. Its true what honesty is more important than money!our that短文改错文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在此处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出修改的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。Ten years ago, I had worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights of factory went out all of a sudden. I rushed out and could see nothing. Lucky for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. Three or four minutes late, four police car arrived at the front gate. They searched for the factory carefully, tried to find something unusual. In the end, I am told that the rain had brought about the short circuit, that caused the accident.【参考答案】3.Ten years ago, I had(去掉had) worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights of（the） factory went out all of a sudden. I rushed out and(but) could see nothing. Lucky (luckily)for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. Three or four minutes late(later), four police car(cars) arrived at the front gate. They searched for(去掉for) the factory carefully, tried(trying) to find something unusual. In the end, I am(was) told that the rain had brought aboutthe short circuit, that(which) caused the accident.4.短文改错文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder a English philosopher considers competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. Therefore, if we stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. In my opinion, all are important and necessary.Lets take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student wont make a remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. Thats because competition, and rather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. On the other hand, if we dont cooperate with each other, its impossible for us learn from each other. And thats why most of the great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the relationship between competition and cooperation.【参考答案】4.In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder a English philosopher considersancompetition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. Therefore, if weproblems Howeverstress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. In my opinion, all are important andstressed bothnecessary.Lets take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student wont make aremarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. Thats because competition, andorrather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. On the other hand, if we dontmakingcooperate with each other, its impossible for us learn from each other. And thats why most oftothe great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with thesuccessfullyrelationship between competition and cooperation.5.短文改错该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctors advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.【参考答案】5.I like eating fruit and vegetables what （改为which/that）are of great benefit to our healthy（改为health）. Not only do they prevent us from falling into（去掉into） ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow（改为following） the doctors advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going（改为goes）, “ An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike（改为disliking或前加who/that） fruit and vegetables. On（加the） contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were（改为are） crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong（改为 stronger）. In my opinion, we must take action to change them（改为 it）.6.短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.To celebrate the end of our exams, my friends and I went to fast-food restaurant for some hamburgers and coca colaWhen our food comeI started walking towards a tableFortunately, I fell over and my dish slipped with my hands and the food landed on a mans white shirtI was frightened and unsure how to do next, but just then all I heard was “Its OK” after the man disappeared into the restroomA few mi