李翠丽 书面表达

中考书面表达专题,Howtowriteagoodcomposition?,华宁县第四中学李翠丽,学习目标,1.书面表达常犯错误分析2.书面表达的方法和技巧3.实际训练,第五档:（01分）白卷或文不对题；只抄写了提示词。,第四档：（25分）语言错误多，影响意思表达；错误百出，不知所云。,第三档：（69分）包含部分要点；语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。,第二档：（1012分）基本包含要点，遗漏少量次要点；语言有少量错误；行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。,第一档：（1315分）包含内容要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，能使用修饰词或表示顺序、逻辑关系的连接词，表达清楚。,中考作文评分标准,火眼金睛,1.Thatsanusefulbook.2.Ifelttriedafteralongwalk.3.Hegotoschoolonfooteveryday.4.Myfriendsaskmedontgiveup.5.Weschoolholdasportsmeetinglastweek.6.Theyarechatveryhappy.7.Theapplescheap,Iwilltakesome.8.Theirteacherisstrictforthem.,(a),(tired),(goes),(notto),(Our),(chatting),(happily),(are),(with),(held),Travelingis_,1.Iwilltravelsomeplacestorelaxmyself.2.IthinkTravelnotonlywasteustimesbutalsoitisbedforourstudy.3.ButIknowdothehomeworkisgoodforme.4.firstly,throughgoonvacationwecanmakemorefriend.5.Second.Wewillcanseesightlighandknownworld.6.Youwillmakemuchtoofriend.7.However,theseknowledgecantstudyformtextbook.8.Thesummervacationiscomesourschoollifenow.9.Secondly,weshouldtoreadbookssothattoimproveweChineseknowledge.10.Travelingcanletminerest,forgetsad,forgettired.,Travelingis_,11.Therearetoomanyplacesarefamousverymuch.12.Wellstaytherefourdays.13.Wecangotothecinema,watchingvideosandgotoswimmingpool.14.Whatinterestingtravelingitis!15.Nowadays,themostofpeoplewanttotraveling.Whythisis?16.Wehavestudyhardaterm.17.Travelingisgoodforstudygrewuphealthily.18.SoIveryliketravel.19.Notonlyisabletorelaxbodyandheartbutalsointerestingverymuch.20.Finally,wetookthebusgohome.,1.拼写错误2.语法错误3.缺乏逻辑(句子、文章）4.要点不全5.内容与主题不符6.格式错误,书面表达常犯错误：,Towriteagoodcompositionisjustlikebuildingagoodhouse!,First,weneedagoodblueprintandthematerials,orwecanalsocallitdesign.,Design,1.确定文体书信、日记、便条、通知2.确定时态基调一般现在时、一般过去时3.分析“破”题理解提示语、提炼内容要点、切忌遗漏要点4.罗列词组，避重就轻条条大道通罗马，遇到阻力请绕行,分析例文假设你叫王宏，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。(信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的短文内。80个词左右),DearDavid,ImgladyoullcometoBeijingtolearnChinese._HopetoseeyousooninBeijing.Yours,WangHong,Design,1.确定文体书信2.确定时态基调一般现在时3.分析“破”题内容要点学中文的体会和方法；建议。切忌遗漏要点祝愿,Chinese,be,useful,manyforeigners,learn,now,difficult,bedifferentfrom,itisimportant,listen,talk,read,write,罗列词组，避重就轻,Next,weneedtostarttobuildit.Wecanalsocallitmanagement,Management,1.连词成句、覆盖要点用自己最有把握的表达方式把确定的要点写成句子，不打无把握之战2.巧妙组合、顺畅过度、上下连贯、语意畅达注意搭配、运用恰当的关联词,Then,weshouldknowhowtomakeourcompositionsbetter.WecanalsocallitDecorating,Decorating,1.推敲检查、查漏补缺是否有错别字、是否要点不全、是否主谓一致、是否表达得体、是否句型正确、是否有中文式英语表达2.运用高级表达、提升文章档次高级表达法、西方惯用表达、习语谚语等方法修改润色Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.,Finally,wecanmoveintothehousenow!wecanalsocallitResiding-in,Residing-in,1.注意书写美观、重视细节标点书写是否美观、标点是否正确、全篇是否对齐a-uc-e-lf-th-k-ni-zm-vno-Ur-vt-eu-wrr-w2.边誊写边检查，注意是否词数合格留心拼写、注意词性是否正确；是否词数不够,备战中考：我能行，能行，一定能行！决胜中考：我会赢，会赢，一定会赢！,中考寄语,Thankyou,Travelingis_,1.Iwilltravelsomeplacestorelaxmyself.2.IthinkTravelnotonlywasteustimesbutalsoitisbedforourstudy.3.ButIknowdothehomeworkisgoodforme.4.firstly,throughgoonvacationwecanmakemorefriend.5.Second.Wewillcanseesightlighandknownworld.6.Youwillmakemuchtoofriend.7.However,theseknowledgecantstudyformtextbook.8.Thesummervacationiscomesourschoollifenow.9.Secondly,weshouldtoreadbookssothattoimproveweChineseknowledge.10.Travelingcanletminerest,forgetsad,forgettired.,Travelingis_,11.Therearetoomanyplacesarefamousverymuch.12.Wellstaytherefourdays.13.Wecangotothecinema,watchingvideosandgotoswimmingpool.14.Whatinterestingtravelingitis!15.Nowadays,themostofpeoplewanttotraveling.Whythis