广东高考英语作文万能模板炮制法则

广东高考英语作文万能模板炮制法则广东高考英语作文万能模板炮制法则 xx高考英语作文完美炮制法紧扣高考英语作文评分标准高考作文采 用总体评分方式 集中在以下四个方面 覆盖了题目提出的所有内 容要点和要求 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 内容比较丰富 在使用复杂结构或高级词汇时允许有些许错误 有效地使用了 语句间的连接成分 全文结构紧凑流畅 高考英语作文完美行文四步骤STEP1确定文章框架 包括时态 语 态 格式 展开方式 开头结尾等 STEP2确定内容要点 包括主要人物 时间地点 重要细节 合理发 挥等 STEP3正式开始写作 思路成篇 行文连贯 STEP4及粗心犯下的错误 高考英语写作技巧汇总 一 掌握技巧 1 注意篇章结构 合理布局开始部分 opening paragraph 说出文中的要点 核心问题 正文部分 Body paragraphs 围绕主题开展叙述 讨论 结尾部分 concluding paragraphs 对全文的总结和概括 要做到全文中心突出 段落之间必须是有机地联系 内容完整 连 贯 前后呼应 祛除与主题无关的内容 详细可以参情况考ESL资源网站 ESLbay 里面的writing部分 2 确定主题句主题句是对全文的概括 是文章的主旨 它能在文章中起到 画龙点睛 的作用 通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头 而后 全文对主题句所提出的 内容进行解释 扩展 写主题句应注意以下几点 归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点 提炼 出一句具有概括性的话 主题句应具有可读性 抓住 吸引读者 二 巧用连接词要想使文章有整体性 连贯性 就要学会正确使 用连接词表示罗列增加First second third First then next afte r that next finally For one thing for another On the one hand on the other hand Besides what s more in addition furthermore moreover another also Especially In particular 表示时间顺序now at present recently after afterwards after that after awhile in a few days at first in thebeginning to beginwith later next finally immediately soon suddenly all of a sudden at thatmoment as soon as the moment form nowon from thenon at the same time meanwhile till not until before after when while as during 表示解释说明now in addition for example for instance in thiscase moreover furthermore in fact actually表示转折关系but however while though or otherw ise on thecontrary on the other hand in contrast despite in spiteof even though except for instead of course after all 表示并列关系or and also too not only but also as well as both and either or neither nor表示因果关系because bec ause of since now that as thanks to due to therefore as aresult of otherwise so that such that表示条件关系as so long as on conditionthat if unless表示让步关系though although as even if even though whether or however whoever whatever whichever whe rever whenever no matterhow who what which where when whom 表示举例for example for instance such as take for example表示比较be similarto similarly the sameas in contrast pared with to just like just as 表示目的for thisreason for thispurpose so that in orderto so asto 表示强调in deed in fact surely certainly no doubt without anydoubt truly obviously above all 表示概括归纳in aword in short in brief on the whole generally speaking in myopinion as faras Iknow As weall know as has been stated as I have shown finally at last in summary in conclusion 三 掌握常用句型台湾 esl tw里面有很多 下面只列 举比较常用的 1 in orderto为了实现他的梦想 他学习非常努力 He workedvery hard in orderto realizehis dream 2 in order that她拼命干活以便到六点时把一切都准备就绪 She workedhardinorderthateverything would be readyby6o clock 3 so that他们太累了 除了伸懒腰什么都做 不了了 They wereall sotired that they coulddo nothingbut yawn 4 such that天气非常冷 以致于街上一个人都没有 It wassuch acold daythat therewas nobodyon thestreet 5 would ratherdo than do他宁愿听他人讲而不愿自己说 He wouldrather listento othersthan talkhimself 6 prefer doingto doing他宁愿在精心准备后去做报告 He prefersmaking speechesafter carefulpreparation 7 prefer to do rather thando比起女人 男人总是宁可在家睡觉也不愿花那么多时间来购 物 Compared withwomen men alwaysprefer tosleep at home ratherthan spendso muchtime shopping 8 not only but also在短短的三年的时间里她不但完成了所有课程 而且还获得了 博士学位 In justthree years she hadnot onlyfinished allthe lessons but alsoreceived herdoctor s degree 9 either or如果考试过关 你可以买一个MP3或去云南玩 一趟 You couldeither buyan MP3or goto Yunnanfor avisit if you passthe exam 10 Neither nor他是一个无聊的人 既不爱娱乐 也不爱读 书 He is a boringman He likesneither entertainmentnor reading 11 as wellas他善良又乐于助人 He waskind as wellashelpful 12 as well这个小孩活泼又可爱 The childis activeand funnyaswell 13 One theother你看见桌子上有两只笔吗 一支是 红色的 另一支是黑色的 Have youseen twopens on the desk One isred theotheris black 14 Some others每个人都很忙 有些在读书 有些在写作 Everyone isbusy inclassroom Some arereading others arewriting 15 make adj n我们所做的可以让世界更美丽 What we do willmake the world morebeautiful 16 not until直到他告诉我发生的事 我才了解真 相 I didn t knowthe truthuntil shetold mewhat happened 17 as if他夸夸其谈好像什么事都知道 He talksa lotas ifhe knowseverything 18 It is no use good doing 假装不懂规则是行不通的 It snouse pretendingthat youdidn t knowthe rules 19 find it adj to do 我觉得作听力时有必要作笔记 I findit necessaryto takedown noteswhile listening 20 It is time since 我已经有两年没见他了 It istwo yearssince Ilast methim 21 It is time when 我到电影院时已经八点钟了 It was8o clock whenI gotto thecinema 22 It is time before 不久我们就会再见面的 I won t belong beforewe canmeet again 23 It is that 我最珍视的是友谊 It isfriendship thatI valuemost 24 It is n adj that todo 每个人都必须懂得如何使用计算机It isa mustthat everybodyshould knowhow touse puters 写作辅导写作核心句型核心句型1 开头1 The arguermay beright about but heseems toneglect fail to mention take intoaount that fact that 2 As opposedto Contrary to widely monly generally held aepted belief ideas views I believe argue that 3 Although many people believethat I doubt wonder whether theargument bearsmuch analysis close examination 4 The advantagesof Boutweigh anybenefit wegained from carry moreweight thanthose of are muchgreater than A 5 Although it is monly widely generally held felt aepted agreed that it isunlikely to be true that 6 There isan elementof truthin this argument statement but itignores adeeper and more basic important essential fact reason that 7 It is true that True To besure Admittedly but this is notto say it isunlikely it doesn t follow it doesn t mean it won t be the case that 8 The main obvious great problem flaw drawback with in this argument view remark is thatit isignorant of blind to the basic bare fact that 9 It wouldbe possible natural reasonable to think believe take theview that but itwouldbe absurd wrong to claim argue that 10 In allthe discussionand debateover one important basic fact isgenerally overlooked neglected 11 There isabsolutely in fact no every reason forus tobelieve aept resist reject that 12 Logical Valid Sound a s thisargument and I wholeheartedlyagree withit it appearsinsignificant absurd when is takeninto consideration aount 13 To assume suggest that is farfrom beingproved to missthe point 14 A close careful inspection examination scrutiny of thisargument wouldreveal howflimsy groundless fallacious it is 15 On thesurface At firstthought it this may seema sound an attractive suggestion solution idea but carefulweighing onthe mind on closeranalysis on secondthought we findthat 16 Too muchemphasis placedon attention paidto importance attachedto may obscure overlook neglect other facts 17 The danger problem fact truth point is that 18 What thearguer failsto understand consider mention is that 19 We don t have to lookvery farto see find out the truth validity of thisargument proposition 20 However just logical sound valid thisargumentmay be it onlyskims thesurface of the problem 2 正文1 Although thepopular beliefis that a current new recent study survey poll investigation indicate s shows demonstrates that 2 Common sensetells usthat 3 The increase change failure suess in mainly largely partly res ults from arises from is becauseof 4 The increase change failure suess in is dueto owing to attributable to the factthat 5 Many peoplewould claimthat 6 One mayattribute ascribe owe the increase decrease change to but is notby itselfan adequateexplanation 7 One of the reasons given for is that 8 What isalso worthnoticing is that 9 There aremany different several a numberof a varietyof causes reasons for thisdramatic marked significant growth change decline incre ase in First Second Finally 10 There is no evidenceto suggestthat 11 Why are is do did Forohing For another 12 Another reasonwhy Idispute theabove statementisthat 13 It givesrise to lead to bring create a hostof problems consequences 14 There arenumerous reasonswhy and Ishall hereexplore onlyafewof themost importantones 15 It willexert have produce profound far reaching remarkable considerable beneficial favorable undes irable disastrous effect influence on 16 A multitudeof factorscould aountfor contribute to lead to result in influence the change increase decrease suess failure development in 17 I n1999 it increased rose jumped shot up from5to10percent of the total to15percent by15percent 18 By parisonwith1998 it decreased dropped fell from10to5percent to15percent by15per cent 19 It aountfor15percent of the total 20 There were100traffic aidentsin April and increaseof5percent in a five month period 21 By1999 only less than more than almost about over as manyas three quarters 40percent of one outof five one infour college population graduates housewives as against as paredwith last year 1998 preferred to liked 3 结尾1 From whathasbeendiscussed above Taking intoaount allthese factors Judging fromall evidenceoffered we maysafely draw reach e to arrive at the conclusion that 2 All theevidence analysis supports justifies confirms warrants p oints to a n unshakable unmistakable sound just conclusionthat 3 It ishigh timethat weplace lay put great special considerable emphasis onthe improvement development increase promotion of 4 It ishigh timethat weput anend to the deep seated unhealthy undesirable deplorable situation tendency phenomenon of 5 We mustlook search all cry for animmediate action method measure because thepresent current situation phenomenon tendency state atti tude of if permitted allowed to continue proceed will surely certainly lead to result in the end destruction heavy cost of 6 There isno easy immediate effective solution approach answer remedy to the problem of but might beuseful helpful beneficial 7 No easymethod solution recipe remedy can beat hand found guaranteed to solve resolve tackle the problem of but themon general public recognition of realization of awareness of mitment to the necessity importance significance of might bethe firststep towardschange ontheright way in theright direction 8 Following thesemethods suggestions may notguarantee thesuess in solution to but thepay off willbe worththe effort 9 Obviously Clearly No doubt if weignore are blindto theproblem there isevery chancethat 10 Unless thereisamon realizationof general mitmentto it isvery likely the chancesare good that 11 There islittle doubt no denying that serous special adequate immediate further attention mustbe called paid devoted to theproblemof 12 It isnecessary essential fundamental that effective quick proper action steps measures remedies shoul d betaken toprevent correct check end fight the situation tendency phenomenon 13 It ishoped suggested remended that great continuous persistent sustained corporate efforts should be maketo control check halt promote the growth increase rise of 14 It ishoped thatgreat effortsshould bedirected to expended on focused on finding developing improving 15 It remainstobe seen whether but theprospect outlook is notquite encouraging that rosy 16 Anyhow wider more education publicity should begiven tothe possible potential grave serious pernicious consequences ef fects of 17 To reverse check control the trend tendency is nota lighttask an easyjob and itrequires demands involves entails a differentstate ofmain towards attitude towards outlook on 18 For thesereasons I stronglyremend that 19 For thereasonsgivenabove I feelthat 英语写作十字真经研习 背诵 默写 互译 模仿英语 的书面表达一直以来就是英语学习的瓶颈 在此 笔者向各位学习者提供突破英语写作的十字建议 即研习 背诵 默写 互译 模仿 概括出培养写作能力的五个方面 如能 严格遵循 定能柳暗花明 研习 没有规矩 不成方圆 对于一般英语学习者而言 写出优秀的文章有赖于后天习得 但并 不意味着机械背诵 生吞活剥 或者照搬照抄 人云亦云 所谓研习 需要有独立思考和个人的判断 本着 他山之石 可以 攻玉 的精神 汲取文章的精华部分加以研究 研习主要侧重两个方面 包括文章章法和语言表达 文章章法指文章的行文思路 布局谋篇 结构安排 逻辑顺序 许多学习者面对一个话题 可能存在两种不同的困惑 一是下笔千 言 但离题万里 二是思绪万千 却无从落笔 导致两种困惑的根源皆在于欠缺思考问题 组织思路的恰当方式 以至于文章不得要领 章法紊乱 这就要求我们从全篇脉络角度多研习范文 之后领悟如何以演绎法 行文 怎样用归纳法谋篇以及如何围绕特定话题拓展思路等等 此外 研习还要侧重于语言表达 包括遣词造句和句子 段落之间 的各种衔接手段 以期在自己日后的写作中派上用场 因为英文写 作皆通一理 只有善于借鉴 勤加研究 才会借他人的优势和长处 提高自己的 写作水平 背诵背诵是提高写作的又一有效途径 要学好写作 首先要处理好语言输入与输出之间的关系 前者是后者的前提条件 如果头脑空空如也 就根本谈不上写出像模像样的文章 只有读过大量东西 并且有意识地将其中精彩部分储存于记忆之中 mit thehighlights tomemory 才能保证下笔流畅 文通字顺 因此 背诵对于写作极为重要 但背诵不是机械记忆 而是有选择性的背诵 是有意义的记忆 因为机械背诵的结果要么是记忆很快就荡然无存 了无痕迹 要么 是无法活学活用 付诸实践 背诵包括五个方面重点词汇 常用套语 精彩句子 优秀段落 经 典篇章 重点词汇美妙的用词及搭配皆在此列 像fall victim 受害 stand afair chance 大有希望 这种地道的动宾搭配要勤加记忆 为了积累写作词汇 应将文中同属一个话题的用词汇总归纳 组成 主题词族 topic family 归类记忆可以使自己日后即写即用 得心应手 下文是一篇阐释爱心的优秀文章 多处用词精巧 现将文中关于爱 心这一主题的词汇总结如下emotional strength情感的力量the noblest of human emotions人类最高尚的情感no thoughtof gain不计得失the lamp of love爱心之灯help the victims of natural disasters支援自然灾害受害者donate whatever they can倾囊相助help their needy fellow citizens帮助有需要的同胞be ready to give a helping hand随时准备伸出援手When weuse theword love wedonot simplymean anattraction toa personof theopposite sex which isa verynarrow definitionoftheword Love isemotional strength which cansupport usno matterhow darkthe world around usbees In fact throughout historypeople ofmany differentcultures haveregarded loveas thenoblestofhumanemotions As anexample ofthe powerof love we shouldremember howthe Chinesepeople ofall nationalitiesrespond tothe callto helpthevictimsofnaturaldisasters everyyear Although theirines arestill lowby internationalstandards people allover thecountry donot hesitateto donatewhatever they can be itmoney orgoods to helptheir needyfellow citizens Moreover they dothis withno thoughtof gainfor themselves In myopinion the bestway toshow loveis to help peoplewho aremore unfortunatethan weare We shouldalways bereadytogiveahelpinghandto thosewho arein trouble no matterwhether theyare familymembers orplete strangers In thisway we canhelp tomake theworlda better place for thedarker the shadows of sorrow bee the morebrightly thelamp of love shines 当我们用 爱 这个词时 我们不仅仅指异性对一个人的吸 引 这只是对这个词非常狭隘的解释 爱心是一种情感的力量 不论我们周围的世界多么黑暗 爱心都能 支撑我们 事实上 纵观历史 不同文化背景的人都把爱看成是人类最高尚的 情感 说到爱心的力量 我们马上就会想起每年中国各族人民是如何响应 号召支援自然灾害受害者的 尽管按照国际标准他们的收入还处于低水平 全国人民毫不犹豫地 倾囊相助 不管是钱还是物 帮助那些有需要的同胞 而且 他们这么做并不考虑自己的得失 我认为 表达爱心的最好方式是帮助比我们更加不幸的人 我们应该随时准备向有困难的人伸出援助之手 无论他们是家庭成 员还是素昧平生 这样 我们就能够助一臂之力把世界变成一个更美好的地方 因为 悲伤的阴影越黑暗 爱心之灯的光芒就越闪亮 常用套语套语指流行的公式化语言 在写作中适当使用颇有必要 如在商业信函结尾 期望对方早日回复的表达方式就要遵循套语的 基本模式 使表达规范得体 下面试举几个例子Kindly favorus withan earlyreply 请早日赐复 Your prompt reply willbe highlyappreciated 如能及时回复 将不胜感谢 We lookforward tohearing fromyou soon 早日回复 We areexpecting yourpromptreply 急盼回复 Please have the kindnessto answerthis letterquickly 请早日回信 Kindly letus haveyour replyat yourearliest convenience 请在您方便时尽早赐函 We wouldappreciate itifyoucould respondright away 如能即刻回复 将不胜感谢 当前流行应试写作模板 即套语的使用贯穿文章始终 为考生提供 万能公式型的文章主架 每句表达皆由固定套语框定 考生只要背 下套用句型 过渡词语 在考试中根据特定考题填充具体内容 这种应试策略使写出的文章矫揉造作 生硬刻板 虽可以让考生及 格过关 但绝对得不到高分 套语的过多使用不妨可以比作大海中的救生圈 有了它 仅仅可以 让不擅游泳者保全性命 却无法自在畅游 一展泳姿 一般而言 套语较为空洞 如使用过多 文章容易流于空泛 言之 无物 写作宜虚实结合 形式与内容相统一 下例是一篇比较在家学习与入校读书谁优谁劣的范文 文中巧妙地 使用了一些固定句式和过渡词语 不仅增强了表达效果 而且实现 了形式与内容的统一 There aretwo majorarguments thatcan bemade forstudying athome First as advancesin theelectronic mediahave broughtthewhole world ofscholarship intothe homevia theInter andeducational courseson TV the classroomisnolonger theonly placefor acquiringknowledge Second itiswidely heldthat a person studiesbetter in the familiarsurroundings ofhis ownhome andwhen hecan arrangehis ownstudy time But wemust notlose sightofthefactthat there areadvantages tostudying inthe classroom too Being surroundedby peopleof roughlythesameabilities andinterests canbeagreat stimulusto acquiringknowledge whereas studyingin solitudeathomeis boringfor manypeople More importantly there canbe nosubstitute for a goodteacher who mustnot onlybe ableto impartfacts and theories but alsoto appraiseand encouragehis students Given thechoice betweenthese twomethods oflearning I preferthe classroom This isbecause Iam thesort ofperson whofinds itdifficult toconcentrate onstudy inthe midstof householdchores and disturbancesfrom visitorsand telephonecalls The classroomenvironment I feel is theonly onein whichmost peoplefeel fortableapplying alltheir energiestotheall important taskof acquiringknowledge 关于在家学习 我们可以提出两个主要论点 第一 由于电子媒体方面取得的进步把整个世界的知识通过互联网 和电视上的教育课程带入了家庭 教室不再是惟一获取知识的场所 第二 人们普遍认为 在自己家里这样熟悉的环境中 并且能自己 安排学习时间 一个人能学得更好 但是 我们不能忽视在教室里学习也有好处这一事实 周围都是能力相近和兴趣相投的人可能会对获取知识形成巨大的刺 激 而对很多人来说孤独一人在家学习会有些枯燥乏味 更重要的是 没有什么可以替代一个好老师 他不仅能够传道授业 而且能够评估并鼓励学生 如果在两种学习方法中选择 我更喜欢在教室里学习 因为我是那 种很难在家务琐事 客人 电话的打扰下集中注意力学习的人 我认为大多数人只有在教室里才能把全部精力放在获取知识这件十 分重要的工作上 精彩句子精彩句子指文章中句式优美 蕴含哲理的句子 精彩句子的背诵有助于写作时的引用和模仿 如在阅读美国前总统约翰 肯尼迪 John F Kennedy 的就职演说 Inaugural Address 时 可以记住诸如 Ask notwhat your country cando foryou ask whatyou cando foryourcountry 不要问国家能为你做什么 而要问你能为国家 做什么 这样的传世佳句 当你写关于爱国 patriotism 主题的作文时 则可以适时引用 现仍以上面谈 爱心 的文章为例 其中值得背诵的句子为数不少 摘录如下 Love isemotional strength which cansupport usno matterhow darktheworldaround usbees 爱心是情感的力量 不论我们周围的世界多么黑暗 爱心都 能支撑我们 People allover thecountry donot hesitateto donatewhatevertheycan be itmoney orgoods tohelptheirneedyfellowcitizens 全国人民毫不犹豫地 倾囊相助 不管是钱还是物 帮助那些有需要的同胞 The bestway toshow loveis tohelp peoplewho aremore unfortunatethan weare 表达爱心的最好方式是帮助比我们更加不幸的人 The darkertheshadowsofsorrowbee the morebrightly thelampoflove shines 悲伤的阴影越黑暗 爱心之灯的光芒就越闪亮 优秀段落阅读时 我们经常会碰到一些过目难忘的段落 这些段落或者表达流畅 文笔优美 或者逻辑缜密 结构严谨 根据表达需要 有不同的功能段落 如现象说明段 观点陈述段 原因列举段 利弊解释段 结论归纳段 趋势预测段 措施建议段 等 有些优秀段落可以作为写作的功能段落加以背诵 对于我们拓展思 路 规范行文大有裨益 在背诵过程中 熟练掌握各种功能段落的行文规则 自己在表达时 就能驾轻就熟 下面仅举观点陈述段和措施建议段各一例 观点陈述段 陈述 民族文化应该成为世界文化 的观点 A cultureof onenation maybee international which isbeneficial forall mankind Since Chinahas openedits doorswidely tothe outsideworld manypeople from differentcountries wantto visitChina They wille toaept andlove Chinese culture asa whole In addition Chinesecultureshould beshared generouslywith foreignpeople who showgreat interestin it Meanwhile as moreandmoreforeigners eto China they bringaspects oftheir ownculture toshare withthe Chinesepeople In thisway peoplefromvarious nationsintheworld willbe ableto acquireabetterunderstanding ofeach otherand livepeacefully together 一个国家的文化可能成为世界文化 这对全人类都有益 由于中国已经向外界敞开了国门 许多不同国家的人都希望来看一 看中国 他们会开始接受并喜欢整个中国文化 中国文化应该大大方方地让 感兴趣的外国人分享 与此同时 随着来中国的外国人越来越多 他们也把他们自己的文 化带给了中国人 这样 世界各国的人们就能够更好地相互理解 和平相处 措施建议段 建议 人口老龄化 的解决措施 The rapidityofthepopulation s aginghas madeit moreurgent forthe adoptionof countermeasures No doubt the keyis tobuild asolid economicfoundation Meanwhile importance shouldbe attachedto overallsocial progressby changingthe backwardsituation insocial security welfare andservice What s more family careand munityservices shouldalso beencouraged 人口老龄化的加速使采取应对措施变得更为紧迫 毫无疑问 解决问题的关键是建立稳固的经济基础 与此同时 应该重视整体的社会进步