高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验20.doc

2015届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验201v. 书面表达假设你是你们班的英语课代表，在第一次去语音室上课时，老师让你向你们班同学宣布如下注意事项：课前5分钟到达语音室，以便准备设备；对号入座，不得随意更换座位；按老师指令操作，不要乱动仪器；（你对同学们的要求）。注意：1、词数：120左右；2、可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。参考词汇：permission允许；instruction指示2基础写作（共1小题，满分15分） 妈妈的怀抱父母对子女的爱护永远是那么的贴心温暖，动物世界亦然。阳光明媚的一天，水獭妈妈打算带宝宝到河对岸去，但是困倦的宝宝可不愿辛苦游着过河。于是，水獭妈妈把宝宝放在了肚皮上，“仰泳”抵达河对岸，水獭宝宝全程酣睡。这一幕被拍摄了下来，上传到网上后，温暖了无数人的心。写作要求：请用五句话描述上图情景并写下你的感受。【参考词汇】水獭 otter ; 仰泳do backstroke; 【写作要求】1、使用5个句子表达全部的内容；2、文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 句子结构的准确性和复杂度；信息内容的完整性和连贯性。_3请阅读下面的名言，并谈谈自己对友情的看法。“a friend in need is a friend indeed.”谈感想 结合自己一次经历 以此为题要求：1.内容必须包括：2.词数：120词。4假如你是新华中学一名高三毕业生。请根据以下要点给某英文报写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对高三生活的看法。 (1) 对获得的帮助表示感谢； (2) 对将来生活的规划； (3) 对学弟、学妹的建议。要求：1词数：不少于80(开头己给出，不计入总词数)； 2在答题卡上作答。high school is regarded as the best time in a persons lifeas a senior 3 student，it wont take long before i graduate_5最近在你校做过一次调查，结果表明有很多学生从未跟父母道过谢, 理由不尽相同。请你根据下表说明调查情况并对此发表你的看法。被调查学生理由你的看法1/4抚养孩子是父母的责任不必言谢？1/2不习惯言谢1/4有代沟注意：1. 词数120 150； 2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。参考答案1 (one possible version)my dear classmates, may i have your attention, please? i have a few things to tell you.as you know, we are going to have classes in the language lab from now on. when you have classes there, you are supposed to be there five minutes before the class begins in order to get the machines ready. once you are in the language lab, please take your seat according to your number and dont change seats without permission. please follow the teachers instructions and dont touch the machines without permission. please try not to make any noise during class, or you will disturb others. please try to speak english in class. when class is over, turn off your machines and make sure everything is fine before you leave the language lab one by one.thats all. thank you!【解析】2one sunny day, mother otter decided to take her baby to the other side of the river. however, baby otter, being too tired, was not willing to do the swimming at all. therefore, mother otter carried her baby on her belly and did backstroke all the way until they got to their destination while baby otter was soundly asleep. the touching scene, which was filmed and uploaded to the internet, warmed the hearts of a large number of netizens, with me included. love from mother is always there, even in the animal world.【解析】3friendship is a kind of human relations. when in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement. with success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys.friendship is also one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy. no man can make the most of his life without friends as he goes along.knowing how valuable friendship is, we should be very careful in making friends. real friends are those who have good character, superior ability and kindness of heart. real friends can share all our sorrows and doubts all our joys.while making friends, we should take care to select those who have such fine qualities. then we should treat our friends with honesty. we should forgive their failures and do our best to help them. in short, when we have established friendship, we ought to treasure it by means of words and deeds. only in this way can we develop real friendship in our life.【解析】试题分析：考查开放性作文。开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。【亮点说明】friendship is a kind of human relations. when in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement. 这句话是用了省略句，with success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys.这句话用了with复合结构， friendship is also one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy. 这句话用了定语从句， knowing how valuable friendship is, we should be very careful in making friends. 这句话用了现在分词做状语，real friends are those who have good character, superior ability and kindness of heart.这句话用了定语从句， while making friends, we should take care to select those who have such fine qualities. 这句话用了省略句only in this way can we develop real friendship in our life.这句话用了倒装句。考点：考查开放式作文4one possible version：high school is regarded as the best time in a personlife. as a senior 3 student, it wont take long before i graduate. now, i have much to share with my fellow students. firstly, i would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. without their help and advice, my life would be different. secondly, ive made up my mind to make every effort to study at college,for i believe hard work is the key to success. meanwhile,physical exercise and recreational activities are also dispensable. life without sunshine and laughter is bound to be a failure. finally i hope that all the younger fellows always keep your dream in mind, by which you will be highly motivated all the time, without doubt or hesitation. even if sometimes you slack off, tell yourself that tomorrow holds the miracle. just one more day may be all it will take to realize your dream.【解析】试题分析：本文属于要点作文。1. 写作可以分为四部分。提出写作目的部分，表示感谢部分、对将来的规划部分和个人建议部分。2表示感谢的短语有be thankful to sb for sth; should appreciation to sb for sth ；表述决心计划的短语有make up ones mind to do sth ; make every effort to do sth ;3在表述三个要点时要用适当的过渡词，使文章衔接紧凑。4尽量使用高级词汇和多种句式，比如定语从句，状语从句等，以提高文章档次。【亮点说明】作者开门见山提出文章的写作意图，即要和同学们分享高中生活的感想。然后在下文分三个方面分别讲述，中间使用firstly、secondly和finally等表顺序的连接词，使文章层次分明，段落清晰。其中，作者使用了多种句型结构，比如虚拟语气without their help and advice, my life would be different.；状语从句even if sometimes you slack off, tell yourself that tomorrow holds the miracle.；定语从句finally i hope that all the younger fellows always keep your dream in mind, by which you will be highly motivated all the time, without doubt or hesitation.这些句型的使用反应了作者深厚的语言功底。此外，在文中作者还使用了大量的高级词汇，如appreciation，recreational，is bound to，slack off，keep sth in mind 等这也显示了作者丰富的词汇知识，总之这是一篇优秀的范文。考点：考查提纲作文。5according to a recent survey, many students have never said “thank you” to their parents who have done all they could to bring them up the past years.the interviewed students claim such reasons as follows. first, a quarter of then regard it as parents duty to support them. spiritually and financially. and it is not necessary to express appreciation to them. half of them are aware of their parents tender love but are not accustomed to saying “thank you”.another quarter even find a generation gap between themse