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Therefore,it is not difficult to imagine what life will be if in a world whitout smoking.On the contrary fall in love with get along withThe price of a good health is above rubies.They come to realize that _ is important / harmfulThey seldom come to realize that _ is important / harmfulThey fail to recognizeGovernment make plans help them1）人们思想意识pay attention to due attention to be awear of consequenceThey seldom pay due attention to smoking.They are not fully awear of consequence of smoking.attach important todo ones best to do sth try ones best to do sth take actionsactive concrete swift action To begin with, some smorkers dont (pay due attention to seldom come to realize that) not fully aware of the consequence of smoking, as a result, they seldom do their best to get rid of smoking.Second, government does not make plans that tailor to smokers need. Third, effective drugs and dozes have not been found yet.In order to protect non-smokers from becoming smokers, measures should be taken to reduce the appeal of smoking. （1）It is generally believed that_. When people have _, they offer _ to others. On the contrary, when people are deprived of _, they feel _. Therefore, it is not difficult to imagine what life will be if in a world devoid of _. （2）When it comes to the topic of _(When _ is discussed,) it is presumably proper (reasonable, appropriate, suitable, justified) to cite an old saying (a proverb): _. This remark (statement, comment, observation) is naturally linked with (be associated with, ) a golden rule (a universal truth, a fundamental principle, a glittering rule) in an ever-changing society, that is, _（1）When asked about an ideal place to live, the vast (overwhelming majority of/quite a few) people believe that a city may be a wise choice but other people dont think so, insisting that countryside be a comfortable and peaceful place to live in.（2）When it comes to private cars, peoples views/notions vary from one to another. Some people maintain that _. Although it does contain an element of truth, the opposite is probably true.（3）Whenever the debate of _ is raised among the general public, some people tend to exaggerate any benefit that may arise. However, through years of practice, it turns out that this statement has many restrictions.（1）因果兼顾What has brought about this debate? Personally, I believe that three primary reasons may account for this. To begin with, as a result of _, _. So _. In addition, _ in order to _, Then _. Finally, coupled with _ is _ that contributes to _（3）因果取舍When it comes to the issue of _, some people are more likely to ascribe its emergence to _. However, it is not the primary reason at all. Rather, _.（1） 建议列举 It is imperative for us to take severe measures to put it on hold. For one thing, we must appeal to authorities to make (initiate, launch) strict (severe) laws to control _. For another thing, we should enhance peoples awareness that _ is vital for us. Still, we are obliged to take broad actions to start an anti-_ campaign. Only in this way can we have a bright future.（2） 设问What measures should be taken to arrest and reverse this grave situation? All nations round the world are expected to launch comprehensive projects that tailor to local situation. Although these plans are geographically and culturally specific, they must contain two key elements: protection and education. By protection I mean up-to-date measures to keep track of any destructive activities that may arise. By education I mean common understanding among people at all ages that _ is an indispensable part in _. Many options still exist, and human beings can still have a bright future. 例子The graph below shows the changes of consumer price index in a certain country from the year 1929 to 1975. Write a short composition of about 120 words to describe the changes and offer your own reasons for the changes. 范文This graph gives information about the changes in consumer price index from the year 1929 to 1975. After studying the information in the graph we may conclude that prices increased greatly over the time span despite fluctuations. Although the consumer price index reached its bottom in 1933, the index almost tripled from 1929 to 1975, growing from 50 to 150. The most possible reason for the rise of prices was economic development. As is known by everyone, when one economy becomes prosperous, it usually needs a larger amount of circulating money. And since the overall economic development of most countries between 1929 and 1977, including the country in question, was for the better, it was understandable that more and more bank notes had been added to circulation, and this almost inevitably caused inflation, which brought about the rise in prices. 例子The bar chart below shows the tendencies of infant mortality and peoples life expectancy in a developing country. Look at the graph and write a composition of about 120 words making reference to the following points.The bar chart below shows the tendencies of infant mortality and peoples life expectancy in a developing country. Look at the graph and write a composition of about 120 words making reference to the following points. 1. The changing tendencies in infant mortality and life expectancy. 2. Possible reasons for the changes. 范文These two graphs describe respectively the development tendency of infant mortality and life expectancy in a developing country. As is show in the graphs, there has been a marked decrease in the infant mortality rate between the year 1960 and 1990, whereas the life expectancy zoomed from 40 in the year 1960 to 90 years in 1990. In the year 1960, the infant mortality rate was about 225 in 1000, as compared to about 100 in the year 1990. There are multiple reasons for the decrease in infant mortality rate, the most important of which, I would propose, is the development of medical care for children and expecting mothers. The increase in life expectancy is due to several reasons. Better chances for personal development, better education and better economic environment which the development of the country has provided are all contributing factors, in addition to the development of medicine, which greatly reduced the chances of dying from diseases.1. 原因分析段落:开头方法(1) : 因果兼顾What has brought about this debate? Personally, I believe that three primary reasons may account for this. To begin with, as a result of _, _. So _. In addition, _ in order to _, Then _. Finally, coupled with _ is _ that contributes to _开头方法(2) 无果有因There are many reasons for it, the most important of which, I would propose, is _. Additionally, _ is a contributing factor accounting for _. Finally, _ can be traced to _.开头方法（3）因果取舍When it comes to the issue of _, some people are more likely to ascribe its emergence to _. However, it is not the primary reason at all. Rather, _.例子Whenever the debate of _ is raised, some people are prone to attribute its expansion to _. Nevertheless, it is nothing more than a tip of the gigantic iceberg. As a matter of fact, _.结论段的写法：1. 结论段：用to sum up, to wit, in a word, in conclusion进行观点重述2. 预测趋势段：好趋势：on the basis of analysis, we can confidently predict that great changes have taken place in the past _ years. This tendency, I believe, will be going on in an exciting direction.不好趋势：On the basis of analysis above, it is reasonable to conclude that _ has posed tremendous threat to our life. Worse still, this tendency will be going on in a disturbing direction. Therefore it is high time that we took drastic actions to put it on hold. As an old saying goes, “Dont fix your roof on a rainy day.”3. 建议措施段：开头方法（1） 建议列举:It is imperative for us to take severe measures to put it on hold. For one thing, we must appeal to authorities to make (initiate, launch) strict (severe) laws to control _. For another thing, we should enhance peoples awareness that _ is vital for us. Still, we are obliged to take broad actions to start an anti-_ campaign. Only in this way can we have a bright future.开头方法（2）设问What measures should be taken to arrest and reverse this grave situation? All nations round the world are expected to launch comprehensive projects that tailor to local situation. Although these plans are geographically and culturally specific, they must contain two key elements: protection and education. By protection I mean up-to-date measures to keep track of any destructive activities that may arise. By education I mean common understanding among people at all ages that _ is an indispensable part in _. Many options still exist, and human beings can still have a bright future.第一段: 起始段:1. 观点对比选择题： 开头方式（1）：When asked about an ideal place to live, the vast (overwhelming majority of/quite a few) people believe that a city may be a wise choice but other people dont think so, insisting that countryside be a comfortable and peaceful place to live in.开头方式（2）When it comes to private cars, peoples views/notions vary from one to another. Some people maintain that _. Although it does contain an element of truth, the opposite is probably true.开头方式（3）Whenever the debate of _ is raised among the general public, some people tend to exaggerate any benefit that may arise. However, through years of practice, it turns out that this statement has many restrictions.第二段: 拓展段观点论证：开头方式（1）引出主题，正向复述找出利益，反义词重述找到缺陷，反问结束 It is generally believed that_. When people have _, they offer _ to others. On the contrary, when people are deprived of _, they feel _. Therefore, it is not difficult to imagine what life will be if in a world devoid of _. 开头方式(2) 引用推出观点.When it comes to the topic of _(When _ is discussed,) it is presumably proper (reasonable, appropriate, suitable, justified) to cite an old saying (a proverb): _. This remark (statement, comment, observation) is naturally linked with (be associated with, ) a golden rule (a universal truth, a fundamental principle, a glittering rule) in an ever-changing society, that is, _1. 原因分析段落:开头方法(1) : 因果兼顾What has brought about this debate? Personally, I believe that three primary reasons may account for this. To begin with, as a result of _, _. So _. In addition, _ in order to _, Then _. Finally, coupled with _ is _ that contributes to _开头方法(2) 无果有因There are many reasons for it, the most important of which, I would propose, is _. Additionally, _ is a contributing factor accounting for _. Finally, _ can be traced to _.开头方法（3）因果取舍When it comes to the issue of _, some people are more likely to ascribe its emergence to _. However, it is not the primary reason at all. Rather, _.Whenever the debate of _ is raised, some people are prone to attribute its expansion to _. Nevertheless, it is nothing more than a tip of the gigantic iceberg. As a matter of fact, _.2. 举例说明开头方法（1）双例排比: Numerous cases exist to illustrate how important _ is. When _, _. Or when _, _. By doing so, _.开头方法（2）单例叙述Numerous cases exist to illustrate my point, but one will suffice. When_, _. By doing so, _.As an example of the power of love, we should trace back to _ when _.Numerous evidences exist, but this one will suffice.I can find no better illustration than this one_ is a case in point. 开头方法（3）夹叙夹议 Naturally enough, the statement above always reminds people of a similar circumstance that is prevalent in the general republic (an ever-changing society, the contemporary society, in our ear, in our epoch), that is, when _, _. Similarly, people never lack evidence when they attempt to demonstrate the power of _. When _, _.As an old saying goes, _.结论段1. 结论段：用to sum up, to wit, in a word, in conclusion进行观点重述2. 预测趋势段：好趋势：on the basis of analysis, we can confidently predict that great changes have taken place in the past _ years. This tendency, I believe, will be going on in an exciting direction.不好趋势：On the basis of analysis above, it is reasonable to conclude that _ has posed tremendous threat to our life. Worse still, this tendency will be going on in a disturbing direction. Therefore it is high time that we took drastic actions to put it on hold. As an old saying goes, “Dont fix your roof on a rainy day.”3. 建议措施段：开头方法（1） 建议列举:It is imperative for us to take severe measures to put it on hold. For one thing, we must appeal to authorities to make (initiate, launch) strict (severe) laws to control _. For another thing, we should enhance peoples awareness that _ is vital for us. Still, we are obliged to take broad actions to start an anti-_ campaign. Only in this way can we have a bright future.开头方法（2）设问What measures should be taken to arrest and reverse this grave situation? All nations round the world are expected to launch comprehensive projects that tailor to local situation. Although these plans are geographically and culturally specific, they must contain two key elements: protection and education. By protection I mean up-to-date measures to keep track of any destructive activities that may arise. By education I mean common understanding among people at all ages that _ is an indispensable part in _. Many options still exist, and human beings can still have a bright future. 信件作文写作流程：开头段：1）问候收信人：Dear sir/madam2） 解释写信的原因：申请：I am writing for a precious opportunity to work in your company that enjoys years of reputation邀请：I am writing to invite you to attend (take part in/participate) a dinner party (a reception/a seminar/a conference) that is to be held on August 18, 2006.感谢：I am writing to extend my heartfelt thanks (sincere gratitude) toward _.投诉：I am writing to complain about the poor service (quality) of a product that I purchased from your store two weeks ago.祝贺：I am writing to extend my sincere greetings, wishing you a happy New Year, your career greater success and your family happiness.中间段的写作步骤1）阅读题目要求，找到可以用到的名词或动词Write a letter of application according to the following situation. You saw an advertisement in this mornings newspaper. A company needs a typist and you are interested. Write an application letter to that company. In your letter, provide the necessary information about yourself, tell them that you are qualified for that job.2）写作顺序：背景介绍 + 情况咨询 + 原因分析 (名词具体化, 动词寻找近义词替换)I read todays Beijing Youth this morning, pleased to discover that your company is looking for a typist. I wonder if you could be free to have a pleasant talk with me, for all the requirements specified in your advertisement tend to fit my present situation. First, my typing speed is as high as 200 words per minute, which is the definite weight for a qualified typist. Second, I can speak and write English fluently, so I will be capable of typing both Chinese and English. Third and last, a warm-hearted woman who is always ready to help other people, I dont think I have any problem while work with other colleagues. Under these circumstances, I firmly believe that I can contribute to prosperity of your company. On the other hand, a foreign company with an international background will certainly enrich my working experience and broaden my mind, thus paving a way for my prospective career.结尾段：三句话I would appreciate your assistance in this matter. If you have any questions, please dont hesitate to contact me. Look forward to your reply.Sincerely Yours 1) Thank you very much for _ 2) Ive got to meet a new client in Holiday Inn this evening3) We would be happy if you could come to dinner with us at the canteen at 6:00 PM on 26, August.3) 向对方表示祝福或者提醒注意事项Merry ChristmasWell be glad if you could be with usI hope you will be thereI hope you will enjoy it.Please feel free to bring an escort if you choose第七课时例题：求职You are Zhang Li. You are about to graduate from a university in the coming month. Right now you are doing some job hunting. Write a letter of job application to a Japanese bank in your city.Your letter should cover the following points:1) a brief introduction about yourself, your study, ie. Your major, the number of years of study and self-evaluation2) your motivation of working in a foreign band3) your expectations.Dear Sir/Madam,Im writing for a precious opportunity to work in a bank that enjoys years of reputation. I read todays Beijing Youth this morning, pleased to discover that your bank is looking for a cashier (an accountant). I wonder if you could be free to have a pleasant talk with me, for all the requirements specified in your advertisement tend to fit my present situation. For one thing, as September closes in, I am going to graduate from college with a Bachelor Degree. For another thing, after four-year study at college, I received extensive training in Accounting, Analytical thinking and Business planning. All of them are considered definite weight for a qualified bank clerk. Still, Speaking Japanese fluently, I dont think I have any problem while working with other colleagues. Under these circumstances, I firmly believe that I can contribute to prosperity of your company because I am a self-motivated person. On the other hand, a foreign bank with an international background will enrich my working experience and broaden my mind, thus paving a way for my prospective career.I would appreciate your assistance in this matter. If you have any questions, please dont hesitate to contact me. Look forward to yo