广东省天河区高考英语二轮复习 语法精讲精炼 短文改错01.doc

短文改错精讲精炼01 1. 下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号【】，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线【】划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者【从第11处起】不计分。the first time i decide to leave home was when i was upon graduation in high school. i was having trouble get along with my parents. i had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and so i thought about leaving home. it took me only two weeks away from home while i started to feel homesick. living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. because of im on my own, i get to deal with my duties without being told. i have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. in the other hand, i could make my own future plan. i have made rules for me to follow.短文改错the first time i decide to leave home was when i was upon graduation in high school. i was decidedhaving trouble get along with my parents. i had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and so i thought getting dollarsabout leaving home. it took me only two weeks away from home while i started to feel homesick. whenliving on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, totallymore decisive and more creative. because of im on my own, i get to deal with my duties without being told. i have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. to advicein the other hand, i could make my own future plan. i have made rules for me to follow.0n my2. rose wanted a job. she went to many offices and she didnt like any of them. one day she saw a board in an office read: “this office needs a typist whom can type 200 words a minute.” rose was exciting. when rose went to the managers office, the man was writing something. rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head. “do you need a typist?” asked rose. “yes!” he said. rose clapped her hand. she couldnt help saying, “ok! how much will you pay for me every month?” the manager thought for a while and said, “i will pay you 77 dollars for first three months. then i will pay you 30 dollars every month.” rose smiled and answer, “great! i will come and work here three months late.” the manager was speechless.短文改错:rose wanted a job. she went to many offices and she didnt like any of them. butone day she saw a board in an office read: “this office needs a typist whom can reading whotype 200 words a minute .” rose was exciting. when rose went to the managers office, excitedthe man was writing something. rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head. “do you need a typist?” asked rose. “yes!” he said. rose clapped her hand. his handsshe couldnt help saying, “ok! how much will you pay for me every month?” themanager thought for a while and said, “i will pay you 77 dollars for first three the months. then i will pay you 30 dollars every month.” rose smiled and answer, “great! answeredi will come and work here three months late.” the manager was speechless. later3.假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。dear wei fang,it s a long time since i heard from you in last limenow i d like to tell you a impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching careera boy, li ming, whom father died a month ago, was late for schoolhe stood outside the classroom silenti smiled to him and let him comeafter a while, he began to cryseeing this, i walked to him and asked what has happenedhe told me his mother was ill but he had to get some medicine for herat the same time, he apologized to me for his latenessmoved by his word, i praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named mother for the studentsfrom then on, i began to realize we should respect our parents and did our best to help themdo you think so? im looking forward to your reply4.i went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer. it was good trip at te beginning and something unexpected happened half way. one of my friend suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and be couldnt move any far. nobody knew what to do it. one girl tried to call her mum in her mobile pone, but there was no signal in the mountain area. lucky we had brought a tent with us. we put it up and let him rested in it. he took some medicine. then he drink some water, and ate some food. after while, he felt much better and we walked on. we all enjoyed us on the top of the mountain.5.the winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. i have been looking forward at relaxing myself. id like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. i think i can play the basketball with my classmates. how a wonderful time ill have during the winter holiday! however, my parents think different. they dont want me go out. they are afraid ill be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. besides, they are afraid i will lose my way. i hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. to get more freedom, so i will try to persuade them.the winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. i have been looking forward at makes to relaxing myself. id like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. i think i can play movies the basketball with my classmates. how a wonderful time ill have during the winter holiday! the what however, my parents think different. they d