山西省平遥县高考英语一轮起航短文改错（6）.doc

山西省平遥县2015高考英语短文改错（6）及参考答案短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词作斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。i have many friends so my best friend is called li hao. i met him about five years before in a class we attended together. though we didnt know each other before, but we have lots of things in common. at that time, thepressure with us to study was quite heavily. we both hoped to pass the national college entrance exam and entered university. she was very diligent and we both studied hard. i was good at maths while she good at english. finally, we both did very well in the exam. in fact, she gave me a lot of helps with my study. ourfriendship has growing a great deal over the last five years.【参考答案】4.第一行so改为and/but; him改为her; 第二行before改为ago; 第三行去掉but; 第四行with改为on; heavily改为heavy; 第五行entered改为 enter; 第六行good 前加上was; 第七行helps改为help; 第八行growing改为grown。5.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。例如：it was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you. luckily i was the amcompletely free then, so ill to say “yes”. ill arrive in bristol at around 8 pm in friday evening. onon the day before yesterday, my classmates and me went to the park near my school. can you guess that what we did there? not for amusement but to participate in a volunteer labour. they reached the park on nine oclock. the whole class divided into three groups. group one planted trees and watered flowers. group two was told to pick up litter(垃圾) leaving by the tourists and cleaned all the benches. group three wiped all the equipments on the childrens playground. all of us worked hardly. before noon we finished working. each of us feel a little bit tired, so we were happy because we had done a good deed.【参考答案】5.the day before yesterday, my classmates and me went to the park near my school. can you iguess that what we did there? not for amusement but to participate in a volunteer labour. they wereached the park on nine oclock. the whole class divided into three groups. group one planted wastrees and watered flowers. group two was told to pick up litter(垃圾) leaving by the tourists and were left cleaned all the benches. group three wiped all the equipments on the childrens playground. all equipmentof us worked hardly. before noon we finished working. each of us feel a little bit tired, so we hard felt butwere happy because we had done a good deed.4.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。an old man whose eyesight was failing comes to stay in a hotel, a bottle of whisky in his hand. on the wall was a fly he took for a nail. the moment he tried to hang the bottle on it, they fell and broke. when the landlady discovered what had been happened, she decided to do him favor. the next morning when he was out, the hotel worker hammered a nail exact where the “fly” had been. before the old man came back, the smell of the whisky reminded him the accident. looking at the spot what he thought the “fly” was again, he was so angry that he slapped it with all his strengths. on hearing the loud cry, the landlady rushed in. to her surprise, the poor old man was sitting on the floor with his teeth clenched(咬紧) and the palm of his hand bleed.【参考答案】4.an old man whose eyesight was failing comes to stay in a hotel, a bottle of whisky in his camehand. on the wall was a fly he took for a nail. the moment he tried to hang the bottle on it, they itfell and broke. when the landlady discovered what had been happened, she decided to do him 去掉 been favor. the next morning when he was out, the hotel worker hammered a nail exact where the a exactly“fly” had been. before the old man came back, the smell of the whisky reminded him the when ofaccident. looking at the spot what he thought the “fly” was again, he was so angry that he slapped whereit with all his strengths. on hearing the loud cry, the landlady rushed in. to her surprise, the poor strengthold man was sitting on the floor with his teeth clenched (咬紧) and the palm of his hand bleed. bleeding5.短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。a recent survey show that most students often communicate with our parents. but there are still some think it embarrassing to share their ideas with them. actually everyone should attach importance to family communication. it can be strengthen the bond of the whole family or bridge the gap between children and parents. besides, share your personal problems and emotions will greatly help reduce the pressure on you and build up your confidence. as for my family, we had a special dinner together every saturday evening, over that everyone takes turns to share one problem. then others try to suggest solutions. in this way the whole family can enjoy every single bit of life. i think my family will stick out the tradition forever.【参考答案】5.a recent survey shows that most students often communicate with our parents. but shows theirthere are still some think it embarrassing to share their ideas with them. actually thinking everyone should attach importance to family communication. it can be strengthen 删掉bethe bond of the whole family or bridge the gap between children and parents. besides,and share your personal problems and emotions will greatly help reduce the pressure on sharingyou and build up your confidence. as for my family, we had a special dinner together haveevery saturday evening, over that everyone takes turns to share one problem. then which theothers try to suggest solutions. in this way the whole family can enjoy every single bit of life. i think my family will stick out the tradition forever.to6.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及每一个单词的增加、删除或或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 mrsmith had neither wife nor childrenhe liked nothing but drinkinghe almost spent all of his money drinkssometimes he went hungry, but he had to borrow some money to buy some foodone evening he met a friend of him in the streetthe man invited him to have dinner in a restauranthe was very happy that he drank too muchhis friend stopped a taxi and ask the driver to take him homesoon they reached in the door of his housethe driver drove awaybut mrsmith couldnt insert the key into the keyholejust then a policeman went up, offering to help him but he refused, saying the house is circled nowif you can keep it moving, i can open the door myself”【参考答案】6、1. wife前加 a2. money 后加on 或者 drinks 改为 drinking3. but改为and 或so4. him改为his5. very 改为so6. ask改为asked7. in 删掉8. went 改为came9. circled 改为 circlingkeep改为stop或者prevent，或在moving前加 from3.短文改错文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在此处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出修改的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。ten years ago, i had worked as a night guard in a factory. on a rainy night, all the lights of factory went out all of a sudden. i rushed out and could see nothing. lucky for me, the warning system was directly connected wit