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广西柳江县2016高考英语(二轮)短文改错实效训练（3）短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。dear elli， im a senior student. i like making friend with people and i do my best to get on well for everyone. but in last week i found that one of my friends wrote in her english diary that shedislikes me. he doesnt want to my friend any longer. now she has started making fun of mebecause of im fat. i am kind to her but why cant she be friend towards me? my other problemis trying to lose weight. do i do more exercise? use pills? and do you know any other way?please give me some advices. yours, mary 【参考答案】1.dear elli， im a senior student. i like making friend with people and i do my best to get on well for friends witheveryone. but in last week i found that one of my friends wrote in her english diary that shedislikes me. he doesnt want tomy friend any longer. now she has started making fun of medisliked she bebecause of im fat. i am kind to her but why cant she be friend towards me? my other problemfriendlyis trying to lose weight. do i do more exercise? use pills? and do you know any other way? or please give me some advices. advice yours, mary 【2016模拟题】第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用()划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。(2015山西省四校联考)ladies and gentlemen， welcome to our english corner. this corner was set up three years before. every sunday morning, students from different schools and some foreigners often took part. gather around here, we practise spoken english by talking about everything we are interested. we also exchange my experience in english study. we all have a good time here. thousand of people have been here when it was set up.we think that they have learned a lot by taking part in activity here. it is a really supplement to our english class and it is welcome by students, their parents and teachers. they all think it is of helpful. if you want to know much about the corner, you may talk to the students here. 答案：ladies and gentlemen，welcome to our english corner. this corner was set up three years . every sunday morning, students from different schools and some foreigners often part. around here, we practise spoken english by talking about everything we are interested . we also exchange experience in english study. we all have a good time here. thousand of people have been here it was set up.we think that they have learned a lot by taking part in here. it is a supplement to our english class and it is welcome by students, their parents and teachers. they all think it is of . if you want to know about the corner, you may talk to the students here. 1beforeago三年前three years ago。before与完成时连用。2tooktakeevery sunday提示我们要用一般现在时。3gathering考查非谓语动词，句子的主语we是gather的逻辑主语，且是主谓关系，故用现在分词。4interested后加inbe interested in, in 不能省略。5myour人称保持一致，主语是we，故用our。6whensince自从建立起，数千人就来到这。since后的从句用一般过去时，主句用现在完成时。7activityactivities要用可数名词activity的复数形式。8reallyrealaadj.名词。9of去掉 或者helpfulhelp用主系表结构，去掉of; 或者be of help有帮助。10muchmore如果你想了解更多关于英语角的信息，你可以来这里和学生们交谈。短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）1. 请按标准格式改错，每处错误及其修改均限一词。2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。though great progress has made in science these years, there are still many people lived in poor conditions. they make their livingby collecting and selling used thing. their children cannot go to schoolbecause they have no enough money to send their children to there.why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?the answer lies on the population explosion. a president of a developing country once said: “it is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to produce child without limit.” although these few words sound simple enough,but they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.【参考答案】2.though great progress has made in science these years, there beenare still many people lived in poor conditions. they make their living livingby collecting and selling used thing. their children cannot go to school thingsbecause they have not enough money to send their children to there.why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now? dothe answer lies on the population explosion. a president of a developing incountry once said: “it is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to weproduce child without limit.” although these few words sound simple enough, childrenbut they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion. clearly短文改错。we are all busy talk about and using the internet 76. _which set up in the 1960s. at first, the internet was 77. _only used by the government, but in early 1970s, 78. _the universities, hospitals and banks were allowed to 79. _use it, too. otherwise, computers were still very expensive 80. _and the internet was difficult to use it. by the 81. _start of the 1990s, computers become cheaper and easier. 82. _today it is easily to get on-line and it is said 83. _that millions of people use the internet every day. 84. _send e-mail is more and more popular among students. 85. _it has now become one of the most important parts of peoples life.【参考答案】3.76. talk-talking 77. set 前加was78. early 后加the 79. 去掉the80. otherwise -however81. 去掉it 82. become 前加had83. easily-easy 84. 85. send 改为sending【西南师大附中】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：每行只有一个错误，请按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加