2016届高考英语-专题十七-短文改错(全国通用).doc

专题十七 短文改错A组20152013模拟基础题Passage 1(2015曲阜4月)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Hello，everyone.Its nice to speak about that we can do for our school，and I think small actions can make big difference.The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautifully.Every one of them may plant a tree in the school or to organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.We can also form a good habit of putting rubbishes into trashcans.Never forget to turn off the lights and close the doors.We should not leave the tap water run or waste any materials in the laboratory class.In that case，I believe well turn our school in a better place to study and live in.How I wish we can enjoy a better school life!Thank you for listening!答案Hello，everyone.Its nice to speak about we can do for our school，and I think small actions can make big difference.The first thing we can do is to make our campus more.Every one of may plant a tree in the school or organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.We can also form a good habit of putting into trashcans.Never forget to turn off the lights close the doors.We should not leave the tap water or waste any materials in the laboratory class.In that case，I believe well turn our school a better place to study and live in.How I wish we enjoy a better school life!Thank you for listening!Passage 2(2015潍坊3月)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Jack，Welcome to my school！Upon your arrival，there will be a party for you organizing by my classmates.You may attend to English classes to feel a differently learning style.After that，you can go to your host family that you can experience the Chinese way of life.You can have meals together chatting about whatever interest you.The host family will also show you off some famous scenic spots.You can see people selling kites everywhere because our city was home to kites.There are varieties of kites to choose.So isnt that a good idea to buy some for your friends？Write to me unless you have any questions about the schedule.Yours，Li Hua答案Dear Jack，Welcome to my school！Upon your arrival，there will be a party for you by my classmates.You may attend English classes to feel a learning style.After that，you can go to your host family you can experience the Chinese way of life.You can have meals together chatting about whatever you.The host family will also show you some famous scenic spots.You can see people selling kites everywhere because our city home to kites.There are varieties of kites to choose from.So isnt a good idea to buy some for your friends？Write to me you have any questions about the schedule.Yours，Li HuaPassage 3(2015淄博模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。I am very happy that you are interested in the protection of antelopes in China，so Id like to tell you everything about it.In the past，some people kill antelopes for their free fur which can be made into many beautiful things that are very expensive.As the result，the number of antelopes was decreasing day by day.Now things are begun to change.The government and the local people take powerful measures to protect antelopes so that they will not die in the future.They had taken many effective measures，such as making strict laws to protecting antelopes，setting up several reserves for the antelopes，and so on.Of course，its strong prohibited to buy or sell anything made of antelopes fur.Nowadays，to our joy，there are much more and more antelopes in China.Whats more，their living conditions have greatly improved.答案I am very happy that you are interested in the protection of antelopes in China，so Id like to tell you about it.In the past，some people antelopes for their free fur which can be made into many beautiful things that are very expensive.As result，the number of antelopes was decreasing day by day.Now things / to change.The government and the local people take powerful measures to protect antelopes so that they will not die in the future.They taken many effective measures，such as making strict laws / antelopes，setting up several reserves for the antelopes，and so on.Of course，its prohibited to buy or sell anything made of fur.Nowadays，to our joy，there are more and more antelopes in China.Whats more，their living conditions have greatly improved.Passage 4(2015大连一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。In the summer holiday，we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there.Its a long and bored journey.But the moment I arrived，I fall in love with the city.Its such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue.If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind to blowing on your face.The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship.You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted.Moreover，I think the driver there drive too fast in the street.You can never be too careless when crossing the street.答案In the summer holiday，we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there.Its a long and journey.But the moment I arrived，I in love with the city.Its beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.The streets are and the sky is blue.If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind blowing on your face.The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship.You may also do some fishing as as it is permitted.，I think the there drive too fast in the street.You can never be too when crossing the street.Passage 5(2015山东省实验中学模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。As we all know，everyone have a dream.I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school.Nowadays with modern life go rapidly，many people suffer from different kind of diseases，both mentally and physically.As a result，doctors are in great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become successful doctor，helping to save peoples lives.Although to be a good doctor was very difficult，I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health.To make my dream come true，I have told me over and over again that Ill concentrate more to studies.After all，only by working hardly can one succeed.答案As we all know，everyone a dream.I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school.Nowadays with modern life rapidly，many people suffer from different of diseases，both mentally and physically.As a result，doctors are in great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become successful doctor，helping to save peoples lives.Although to be a good doctor very difficult，I will do whatever I can to keep everyone.To make my dream come true，I have told over and over again that Ill concentrate more studies.After all，only by working can one succeed.Passage 6(2015枣庄一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。We all have dreams，but not all these dreams can come true.People give up his dreams for this or that reason.Those who dreams have come true have at least one thing in common，which is，they always hold fast to their dreams.Marie Curie set us the good example.In 1898，Marie has found a new element.In order to prove her discovery，she had to get it and showed it to the world.Then to get the new element become her dream and goal of her life.After four years hard work，Marie and her husband last saw the dim blue light of the new elementradium.Hold fast to your dreams，no matter how big and small they are.The path to your dreams may not be smoothly and wide，even some sacrifices are needed，but hold on to the end.答案We all have dreams，but not all these dreams can come true.People give up dreams for this or that reason.Those dreams have come true have at least one thing in common， is，they always hold fast to their dreams.Marie Curie set us good example.In 1898，Marie has found a new element.In order to prove her discovery，she had to get it and it to the world.Then to get the new element her dream and goal of her life.After four years hard work，Marie and her husband / saw the dim blue light of the new elementradium.Hold fast to your dreams，no matter how big small they are.The path to your dreams may not be and wide，even some sacrifices are needed，but hold on to the end.Passage 7(2015泰安期末)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Id like to give you some advices on how to learn Chinese well.First，it was important to take a Chinese course，as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practising with your fellow students.Then，it also help to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible.It will make you familiar to Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!Besides，it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easy.You can also make more Chinese friends，they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try to speak Chinese as many as possible.答案Id like to give you some on how to learn Chinese well.First，it important to take a Chinese course，as youll be able to learn from the teacher and with your fellow students.Then，it also to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible.It will make you familiar Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!Besides，it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more.You can also make more Chinese friends， will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try to speak Chinese as as possible.Passage 8(2014昆明一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Its pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.I have found that some of my classmates study deeply into the night.Whats more，they did not spare any time to exercise during the day.But they are less energetic than the others in class and cant always stay focusing on their lessons.Worse than that，some of them seldom have breakfast，with which is also a bad habit and will certainly do harm for their health.Obvious，its important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet.We must learn to make wise use of our time，and only in this way can we keep fit and study well.I hope my advices can help you.Thanks for listen.答案Its pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.I have found that some of my classmates study into the night.Whats more，they not spare any time to exercise during the day. they are less energetic than the others in class and cant always stay on their lessons.Worse than that，some of them seldom have breakfast，with which is also a bad habit and will certainly do harm their health.，its important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet.We must learn to make wise use of our time，and only in this way can we keep fit and study well.I hope my can help you.Thanks for.Passage 9(2014西铁一中诊断)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线( )，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Hello，Peter.Im very grateful for your concern about my coming exam.To tell you truth，I have been busy prepare for the exam recently.Some classmates are feeling real stressed due to the exam，but I dont take them so seriously.I always learn in a relaxing mood and Im making a great progress.Now that I had tried my best，it doesnt matter much to me what the result is.In my opinion，we should keep a good balance among our study，rest or exercise.I believe we can be succeeded if we prepare for the exam in a proper way.Id appreciate it if you could give me some good advices.答案Hello，Peter.Im very grateful for your concern about my coming exam.To tell you truth，I have been busy for the exam recently.Some classmates are feeling stressed due to the exam，but I dont take so seriously.I always learn in a mood and Im making a great progress.Now that I tried my best，it doesnt matter much to me what the result is.In my opinion，we should keep a good balance among our study，rest exercise.I believe we can be if we prepare for the exam in a proper way.Id appreciate it if you could give me some good.Passage 10(2013沈阳一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。My mother is very good for raising plants and flowers. We have plants and flowers indoors and outdoors all the years round. Some of our plants were very small several years before, but now they are large and very beautifully. On top of our roof there is a larger glassenclosed greenhouse. All our friends love to come to our house see the beautiful world my mother had made for us. Every morning and evening we see my mother taken care of her plants like little children. As her real children have grown up, and my mother devotes more time to her garden. This is the very good way of spending her free time.答案My mother is very good raising plants and flowers. We have plants and flowers indoors and outdoors all the round. Some of our plants were very small several years, but now they are large and very. On top of our roof there is a glassenclosed greenhouse. All our friends love to come to our house see the beautiful world my mother made for us. Every morning and evening we see my mother care of her plants like little children. As her real children have grown up, and my mother devotes more time to her garden. This is very good way of spending her free time.B组20152013模拟能力题Passage 1(2015青岛一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。The saying that practice makes perfect mean that after you have plenty of practice in what you were doing，you will be perfect in it.If you want improve your study and work，remembering that the most important thing is how to put the knowledge you have learned into practice.For example，when learning a language，though you can make full use for your talent，practice is necessary.If you only learn grammar rules by the heart and dont do enough exercise，its certain that you cant understand the language perfectly.But if you real practise a lot，maybe you will understand them much better.In this way，you can apply that you have learned better.答案The saying that practice makes perfect that after you have plenty of practice in what you doing，you will be perfect in it.If you want improve your study and work， that the most important thing is how to put the knowledge you have learned into practice.For example，when learning a language，though you can make full use your talent，practice is necessary.If you only learn grammar rules by the heart and dont do enough，its certain that you cant understand the language perfectly.But if you practise a lot，maybe you will understand much better.In this way，you can apply you have learned better.Passage 2(2015贵阳模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Im very grateful for my parents.They not only gave me life，but also brought me up with endless love and support，feel so proud of my every improvements.I still remember once I was seriously ill.They were so worrying and almost kept me company the whole night.Now Im Grade 3. Lucky for me，my parents can understand my stressful condition but often communicate with me with encouraging words.Furthermore，they give me enough personal space，which I appreciate it so much.I should study hard.When I grow up，I will become an useful person and make my parents lived a happy life.答案Im very grateful my parents.They not only gave me life，but also brought me up with endless love and support， so proud of my every.I still remember once I was seriously ill.They were so and almost kept me company the whole night.Now Im Grade 3. for me，my parents can understand my stressful condition often communicate with me with encouraging words.Furthermore，they give me enough personal space，which I appreciate it so much.I should study hard.When I grow up，I will become useful person and make my parents a happy life.Passage 3(2015保定联考)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10