高考书面表达-感谢信.ppt

6.感谢信,文体概述 感谢信是指在日常学习和生活中，当收到馈赠、邀请、赴宴、照顾、慰问、祝贺时，给对方道谢的信件。感谢信应写得真诚、具体、及时。 通常包括以下内容：感谢的原因对方给予的帮助或礼物对方的作用和对自己的意义给出细节再次致谢。,常用语块 1. 非常感谢 _ 2. 写这封信是为了表达我对的谢意 _ 3. 请接受我诚挚的谢意 _ 4. 我真的很感激你 _ 5. 你真好 _,It was really kind of you to,Thank you very much for,I am writing to express my thanks for,Please accept my sincere appreciation for,I am truly grateful to you for,6. 我真诚地感激 _ 7. 我想表达我对的谢意 _ 8. 我谨代表我全家，我想 _ 9. 我真诚希望 _ 10. 没有你的帮助，我就不会 _,Without your help, I wouldnt,I sincerely appreciate,I wish to express my appreciation for,On behalf of my whole family, I would like to,I sincerely hope that,11. 在某人的帮助下 _ 12. 由于你的鼓励 _ 13. 无私的奉献 _ 14. 对某人有耐心 _ 15. 宽容的和大方的 _,tolerant and generous,with ones help / with the help of sb.,thanks to/due to/because of your encouragement,selfless dedication/devotion/contribution,be patient with sb. / have much patience with sb.,套用句式 非常感谢你给我寄来的礼物。 2. 我写这封信是为了表达我对你帮我提高英语口语的谢意。,1. Thank you very much for the gift you sent me.,2. I am writing to express my thanks for (your) helping me improve my spoken English.,3. 你太好了，假期照顾我弟弟。 4. 请再次接受我诚挚的谢意。 5. 我谨借此机会感谢您给予我们的及时支持和帮助。,3. It was really kind of you to take care of my brother in the holiday.,5. I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely support and assistance.,4. Please accept my sincere appreciation again.,习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文) Dear Mr. Li, Im very exciting to write to express my thanks to you. I am now a freshman of Wuhan University, which I have been dreamed about it. Mr. Li, I still remember the days which you taught me English.,excited,when,My English have been improved greatly because your creative work. However, at one time, the pressure of examinations, too many homework and the high expectations makes me depressed.,has,much,made,I was tired of a warning that if I didnt do my best, I wouldnt have a chance to go to college. Thanks for your encourage, I wish more and more of your student could go to their ideal colleges. Hoping to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua,the,encouragement,students,1. exciting excited因为主语是人，故用excited。 2. 去掉dreamed about后的it因为which在该定语从句中充当宾语，故about后无须再接it。 3. which when因为在该定语从句(you taught me English)中的成分已完整，故只能用关系副词引导，故用when。 4. have has主语是第三人称单数，故用has。 5. 在because后加of后面是名词短语，故要加of。,6. many much因为homework是不可数名词，故要用much修饰。 7. makes made根据前面的时间状语at one time(曾经一度)可知此处要用过去时。 8. warning前的a the此处是特指。 9. encourage encouragement形容词性物主代词后接名词。 10. student students根据前面的more and more和后面的their可知要用复数。,课堂练习 假定你是李华，现在是华南师范大学(South China Normal University)大一新生你高三时在王老师的帮助下，英语进步很大，为表示感谢，给王老师写一封感谢信。要点如下： 1. 梦想成真，考上理想大学。 2. 因为王老师的辅导和鼓励，英语由差变好。 3. 对老师表示祝福。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。,Dear Mr. Wang, Again, I sincerely thank you for your help!,I am writing to express my thanks for helping me improve my English. Without your help, I would not be a student of South China Normal University. I still remember the days when you taught me English in Grade 3 of senior school. My English was once poor, but you were very patient with me and tried to tutor me after class. My English was greatly improved because of your encouragement.,Without your help, I wouldnt have realized my dream. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Wish you have a healthy body and lead a happy life! Again, I sincerely thank you for your help! Yours, Li Hua,课外作业 假定你是李华，去年是一名交换生(exchange student)去美国学习，得到布朗一家的照顾，回国后写一封感谢信给布朗夫妇，要点如下： 1. 感谢生活上的关心，克服了思乡病。 2. 感谢学习上的帮助，口语进步很大。 3. 欢迎到中国做客。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。,Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brown, How are things going with you recently? Thank you so much for giving me a chance to live in your family while I was an exchange student in America! That was such a hard time for me, but your kindness and warm heart did let me overcome my homesickness. Besides, you tutored me in my spoken English in daily life.,With your help, I made such rapid progress that I won th