外研版八年级写作课件.ppt

一、认真审题，明确要求 1、审文体。体裁有记叙文、说明文、应用文等。应 用文包括书信、通知、日记、便条等。动笔之前，审好文体。 2、审格式。每种体裁都有其固定的格式。在近几年考卷的书面表达体裁中，以书信、求职信、通知、 演讲稿和看图作文为主。 3、审人称。弄清书面表达要求用何种人称，第一人称、第二人称还是第三人称。 4、审时态。弄清这篇文章用什么时态。,二、紧扣文意，组织要点。 书面表达的评分凭据之一是内容要点。因此在认真审题，弄清题意的基础上，应逐个地、完整无缺地把内容要点列出来。对于图画内容的提示，要注意仔细观察图画内容。,三、选词造句，表达准确。 1、多用短句。 2、写有把握的句子。 3、尽量使用主动语态，少用被动语态。 4、避免用中式英语。,四、整理成篇，行文连贯 根据要点完成连词成句后，分清文章的层次， 先说什么，后说什么，把这些句子重新排列组合起来，使之前后成为一篇完整的短文，内容连贯，中心突出。同时句子与句子之间的过渡要自然，即在需要处加上适当表示并列、递进、因果、转折等关系的连词，使文章文理通顺。,Useful Conjunctions(常用连词) So , and, but, if , when, such as, because, since, even though, sothat, as soon as , not onlybut also,五、计划时间，检查复核 审题、拟腹稿、打草稿、写成文、检查等各环节 要合理安排时间，以防止因时间不够而草率了事。,各档次的给分范围和要求： 第六档：（14 15分）包含全部要点；语言基本无误； 行文连贯，表达清楚。 第五档：（1113分）基本包含 点，遗漏少量次要点；语言有少量错误；行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。 第四档：（810分）包含部分要点；语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。 第三档：（ 5 7分） 要点不明确；语言错误多， 影响意思表达。 第二档：（ 3 4分） 只抄写了提示词；错误百出，不知所云。 第一档：（ 02 分)白卷或文不对题。,写作六步法,审审试题,圈圈要点,注注短语,写 写 全文,改改病错,誊誊美观,Writing skills:,时态一致 必须注意所用时态符合上下文。如果用过去时叙述一个故事，就要保证通篇都用过去时，不要在作文中间变成现在时。同样，如果是在谈论普遍问题、现状或日常习惯，就要用现在时，而不要用过去时。 e.g. Yesterday I did my homework. It takes me three hours. His father thought he is good at math. She started her new job last week. She liked it. We didnt go to the party. We arent invited.,took,was,likes,werent,Writing skills :,2.人称一致 应该保持全文人称一致，这样读者才能跟随一个逻辑思维顺序。否则读者会感到困惑。 e.g. Although you may fail the exam, he can still be useful to the country. It not only provides you with lots of knowledge but also develops his interests.,you,your,Writing skills :,3. 主谓一致/人称一致,确保语法正确。 e.g. Things I hate to do is doing homework. What I hate to do is Every people start to learn English. Every person starts to learn English. The activities can relax ourselves. The activities can help us relax ourselves./We can relax ourselves by taking part in the activities.,Writing skills:,4. 词序/语序 它能够帮助准确表达作者本意并并避免意义含糊不清。注意要让句子尽量保持英语的表达习惯。 e.g. I already have had lunch. She with her mum traveled to Italy. I always be the winner of the piano contest. In China, he knew there were big floods. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do.,have already,She traveled to Italy with her mum.,am always,He knew there were big floods in China.,I just wonder what my father likes and what I should do.,Dear sir: Im a middle school student. I very like your program And I like yours English song program best. I usually listen your program if I free. Im often busy study. When I tired, I turn on the radio listen English songs. I learn many word from those songs .I like “My Heart Will go On” the song best. I hope can get the words of the song.,like,studying,to,your,am/feel tired,words,listen to,to listen,hope to get 或hope I can get,the song “My Heart Will Go On”