地点写作以及练习.ppt

基础写作训练,Basic Writing,写一篇介绍荔湾镇（The Town of Liwan）的文章,根据下面内容提要，用五句话介绍有关加拿大的地理和文化方面的情况：,根据下面内容提要，用五句话介绍有关加拿大的地理和文化方面的情况：,面积 9,976,000平方公里（世界第二大国家） 人口 约3000多万,Canada , which is the second biggest country in the world, has an area of 9,976,000 square kilometers and a population of about 30 million.,首都 渥太华（世界最美丽的首都之一）,Ottawa ,the capital of the country ,is considered as one of the most beautiful capitals in the world.,地理位置 位于北美大陆的北部，东面濒临大西洋，西临 太平洋，南面与美国接壤,It covers the northern part of the North American continent and borders the US on the south, with the Atlantic Ocean on the east and the Pacific on the west.,语言 英语和法语,English and French are official languages spoken in Canada.,文化 1.深受法国文化和英国文化的影响； 2.不同国家的风俗习惯和文化遗产丰富了加拿大文化。,Both French and English cultures deeply influence Canadian culture.Different customs and heritages from different parts of the world enrich Canadian culture., Canada , which is the second biggest country in the world, has an area of 9,976,000 square kilometers and a population of about 30 million.It covers the northern part of the North American continent and borders the US on the south, with the Atlantic Ocean on the east and the Pacific on the west.Ottawa , the capital of the country , is considered as one of the most beautiful capitals in the world.English and French are official languages spoken in Canada and both French and English cultures deeply influence Canadian culture.Different customs and heritages from different parts of the world enrich Canadian culture.,(1). be located in/on Guangdong province is located in the south of China. (2). lie in/on /to +方位名词 +of +地点 Japan lies to the east of China.,1. 表示地点方位的句型,2.描述人口(population)的句型,3.描述面积(area)的句型, has a population of . The population of is , Its area is It covers an area of It has an area of ,4.气候特征：there is a variety of climate in, so in the east it is warm/ cold/ wet/ windy, while in the west it is 5. 历史文化名胜：，in which 6. 特产（或其他特殊之处）is famous for/ the special character ofis,写一篇介绍荔湾镇（The Town of Liwan）的文章,位置 广东省东北部的名镇 Located in the northeast of Guangdong Province, the Town of Liwan is one of the famous towns.,面积 2830.54平方公里 人口 630，478 It covers a total area of 2830.54 square kilometers With a population of 630478.,气候 终年温暖、潮湿、夏季多雨 It is warm, wet all the year around here with a lot of rainfall in summer.,特产 西瓜、桔子 经济状况 旅游业起重要作用 The town has varieties of fruits, such as water melons and oranges and tourism plays an important role in its economy.,历史 将近2000年 名胜 建于1200前的普宁寺，温泉中外闻名，吸引中外游客。,Having a history of nearly 2000years, the Town of Liwan has many places of interests, among which the Puning Temple, which was built 1200years ago, and the Hot Spring attracts a good many tourists from every corner of the world.,基础写作 西藏是中国领土不可分割的一部分，这块具有神秘和传奇色彩的土地也引起了世界的关注。 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter打算今年暑假来中国西藏旅游，请你根据下表内容甩英语向他简单地介绍有关西藏的一些基本情况。,写作内容 归属 中华人民共和国 地理位置 中国西南方，被誉为世界屋脊（Roof of the world) 人口 约2,800,000 面积 120多万平方公里 省会 拉萨(Lhasa)，被誉为世界上最高的城市 特征 700多年的悠久历史；风景秀丽有很多享誉海内外的名胜古迹，如布达拉宫。 发展 1951年5月23日解放以来，西藏在政治、经济(economy)、文化等方面都取得了很大的进步。,写作要求 1只能使用5个句子表达全部内容； 2信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人句子总数； 3参考词汇：领土territory布达拉宫the Potala Palace经济(economy)西藏自治区the Tibet Autonomous Region 评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 Dear Peter I am so glad to know that you will come to Tibet for a visit. Looking forward to your coming to ChinaHave a wonderful journey in Tibet! Yours， LiHua,Tibet, known as the “Roof of the World”, belongs to the Peoples Republic of China and it is located in the southeast of China. It has a population of about 2.8 million, covering more than1.2 million square kilometers. The capital city is Lhasa, which is honored as “the highest city” in the world. With a long history of more than 700 years, Tibet has a number of world-famous places of interest, such as the Potala Palace. Since the liberation of Tibet on May23, 1951, it has witnessed significant progress in politics, economy and culture.,学校植物园,历史：20年的历史， 2008年重建,特色：各种花卉、 树木、药用植物,功能： 美化校园 研究植物场所 休闲之地,概况： 校园西南角， 面积1000平方米,其他：观赏至少 需要1小时,Located at the south-west corner of our school, the botanical garden is spread over an area of approximately 1000 m2. The garden is over 20 years old and was rebuilt in 2008. As you walk through the garden, you can see various kinds of beautiful flowers, trees and herbs. If youre planning to explore the garden, set aside at least one hour. The garden makes our school more beautiful and its a fantastic place for students to study and learn more about plants or simply to relax for a while.,三. 基础写作实践,假设你是香港某旅游公司的职员,请根据下面提示内容,使用5个规范的句子写一份演讲稿向游客简单介绍香港的情况： 1. 香港已于1997年7月1日回归祖国, 它是世界重要的贸易(trade)中心和金融(financial)中心。 2.地理位置: 位于我国南部, 与深圳为邻,由236个岛屿组成。 3.人口: 汉朝(the Han Dynasty )以前就有中国人在香港居住,人口不断增长。 4.旅游胜地: 有许多旅游景点,如: 海洋公园, 太空馆,黄大仙庙等,2.Hong Kong, an.of the world, returned to China on July 1, 1997.,1.Hong Kong, which is an.of the world, returned to China on July 1, 1997.,Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to Hong Kong! Hong Kong , an important trade and financial centre of the world, returned to China on July 1, 1997. Lying in the south of China, Hong Kong is made up of 236 islands and neighbors on Shenzhen . The Chinese began to live in Hong Kong before the Han Dynasty and now the population is becoming larger and larger. Hong Kong is a beautiful city with a lot of places of interest, such as the Ocean Park, the Space Museum and Wong Tai Sin Temple. I hope you all enjoy yourselves here!,Steps for writing,1、审题,文字信息,图画信息,（确定体裁、人称、时态、要点等内容),2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出 每 句话的要点。,3、联词成句：用恰当的句型将上述要点的 词语扩展成句子。,4、联句成文。,注意：,主语和谓语,逻辑关系,开头与结尾,5、检查修改，避免失误。,Home work: 你要向外国朋友介绍广东，以下是你介绍的主要内容： 【写作内容 】： 1.地理位置：广东省位于华南,北接湖南江西,南邻香港,西与广西相接； 2. 经济高度发达,人民安居乐业； 3.教育现代化，90%的高中生进入大学学习； 4.历史悠久,风景秀丽,每年都有大量来自海内外的游客观光游览。 【写作要求】： 1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 2.开头和结尾已给出，不算在5个句子中。 Ladies and gentlemen, I would like to introduce my hometown to you. thank you !,基础写作 用5 句话描述荔湾镇 位置: 广东省东北部的名镇 面积: 2830.54平方公里 人口: 630，478 气候: 终年温暖、潮湿、夏季多 历史: 将近2000年 名胜: 建于1200年前的普宁静寺，温泉中外闻名，吸引中外游客 特产: 西瓜、桔子 经济状况: 旅游业起重要作用,Located in the northeast of Guangdong Province, the Town of Liwan is one of the famous towns. It covers a total area of 2830.54