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应用类 专题十三 书信 目前，随着对英语学习的实用性、生活性要求的加强，书信已经成了一个热门题材的考查形式，常以提纲式要点作文的形式出现，话题内容也紧紧围绕学生的生活实际，此类考查形式绝不是简单的对要点逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点科学合理地组织成通顺的语句，形成亮点鲜明的高分作文。 常见的写作格式如下：第一段，文章开头：称呼（通常已给出）。第二段，寒暄语句，引出写信的目的：寒暄句主题句（注：寒暄句和主题句可以是同一个句子）。 第三段，根据提纲扩展主体段落：主题句扩展句1+扩展句2+扩展句3。第四段，表明自己的观点，并结束书信主体段落：在最后要他谈自己的看法。第五段，寒暄句+落款。,（2010山东） 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件： 1. 表示歉意； 2. 解释原因； 3. 另约时间。 注意：1. 词数120150； 2. 可适当增加细节。 _,1. 文体信息： 文体：记叙文； 语体：非正式语体； 人称：第一人称； 中心大意：作者和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但因故不能赴约，表达歉意之情，并解释原因，另约时间。 2. 主导时态：一般现在时和一般将来时。 3. 内容要点： 表达因故不能赴约对Tom的歉意； 向Tom详细解释原因； 与Tom约定新的时间。 4. 温馨提示：书信常用的标准格式要正确，语言要简练地道，注意恰当使用关联词语，保证各个要点连贯，行文通顺。,Dear Tom, Im sorry, for I wont be able to pay a visit to Beijing next weekend with you. Because there are many friends of mine facing a coming English exam, which is important for them without doubt. They are looking forward to my giving a hand to them and they hope to get through the exam successfully. As a result, I will be busy helping them at that time. In addition, I will attend a party which aims to raise money for the people of Yushu, who suffered greatly from the big earthquake. In a nutshell, Im afraid Ill have no time to accompany you. So I want to put off our time of the visit until the first weekend of next month. Is it OK? Wish you happiness every day! Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, LiHua,本文做到了格式准确，时态、人称正确。要点齐全，无缺漏，词汇，句式丰富，行文表达流畅。适当地增添了细节描写，如阐述不能赴约的原因贴近学生学习生活实际，让人感觉到非常真实。作者使用了一些高级语法结构和词汇，如定语从句、宾语从句等的穿插使用，非谓语动词及固定短语的使用。 如能把下列句子加以优化则文章能更上一个档次： 1. As a result, I will be busy helping them at that time. 改为As a result, I will be busy helping them at that time, hardly can I spare time to visit Beijing. 2. They are looking forward to my giving a hand to them and they hope to get through the exam successfully.改为They are looking forward to my giving a hand to them, hoping to get through the exam successfully.,常用句式： Im glad to hear from you/receive your letter. 我很高兴收到你的来信。 I miss you very much. How are you? 我非常想你，你还好吗？ I hope everything is fine with you. 我希望你一切都好。 Best wishes/regards！祝好！ Looking forward to your reply！盼复！ Please write to me soon. 盼复! Sincerely yours,/Yours sincerely,（用于熟人之间） Truly yours,/Yours truly,（用于不太熟悉的人之间） Respectfully yours,/Yours respectfully,（用于对上级或长辈）,Dear Tom, Does everything go well with you? I wish I could make an apology to you, because we have to put off our time of visiting Beijing. How I wish you would understand me. I also hope you can patiently listen to my following reasons. Our school has decided by now to hold an important football match with Yucai Senior High School next weekend. As you know, being the vital member of our team, I wont be absent from the match, so I wont be able to show you around Beijing at that time. No matter how reasonable my reasons are, its my fault to change our plan. So I hope from the bottom of my heart you can forgive me. And do you think its OK to change the date to the weekend of two weeks later? Looking forward to your early reply.,模板1 道歉信 Dear _(称呼), Im really sorry to tell you that._（所发生的事情）. Will you please accept my apology?_ (提出希望). Anyway,_ (总结)。 Yours, _(署名) 模板2 感谢信 Dear _(称呼)， Thank you very much for/ thanks a lot for/ Many thanks for_ (具体原因)。 Without your help _(从反面说明) _(总结). I appreciate it more than I can say. Yours faithfully, _(署名),模板3 慰问信 Dear _(称呼)， Were extremely sorry to hear that_ (具体信息)。 Dont worry about your disease because _(原因). Whats more, _(进一步安慰对方). Surely_ (未来预测). Let us hope that it will be _(说出愿望)， for only a very short time, and that you will soon be_ (祝福). Everyone here sends their best wishes to you for a quick recovery. Yours sincerely, _(署名) 模板4 祝贺信 Dear_ (称呼)， I was delighted to hear the news _(具体情况). I congratulate you (表达祝贺之情). _(总结)，We wish to share your honor and joy. Yours sincerely， _ (署名),模板5 推荐信 Dear (称呼)， I take the pleasure in recommending to you one of my_(被推荐人). I hope you will be interested in him/her. He/She graduated from_ (毕业学校). He/She is good at _(擅长和技能). Whats more, _(进一步介绍被推荐者情况). In a word, _(总结). I would be most grateful if you would like to consider my recommendation. Yours truly, _(署名),模板 6 邀请信 Dear_ (称呼)， We would like to you to_ (具体活动名称). At the celebration, we are going to _(说明邀请的原因). Everyone hopes_ . We are going to meet you _(时间，地点，方式). Well, _(总结). I do hope you will be able to come. Sincerely yours, _(署名),假设你是李华。你在美国的朋友David给你发来一封电子邮件，询问你在暑假期间除了做家庭作业以我，还进行了什么有趣、有意义的活动。请你给他回一封电子邮件，向他介绍你在放假期间的主要活动。内容要点如下： 1. 和同学及朋友观看世界杯足球赛； 2. 上辅导课（学习数学、物理、化学）； 3. 在餐馆打工两周，洗碗、洗菜； 4. 到敬老院做义工（打扫卫生、为老人读报）。 注意：1. 不要逐条翻译，可适当添加细节，词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 参考词汇：辅导课 training course；义工 voluntary work；老年人 the elderly；敬老院 nursing home Dear David, Thanks for your e-mail. Now Id to tell you something about my summer vacation. _,One possible version: Dear David, Thanks for your e-mail. Now Id to tell you something about my summer vacation. I finished my homework on time, which I think was the most important. Other than that, I did a lot of interesting things. As you know, the 2010 FIFA World Cup was held in South Africa. I watched almost all the football matches with my friends and classmates. How about you? I also took training courses, including maths, physics and chemistry. I once worked for two weeks in a small restaurant near my home, where I washed dishes and vegetables. It was really a tiring job, but I th