《如何写好建议信》PPT课件.ppt

How to write a letter for advice 如何算是一篇好文章？ 覆盖了所有的要点 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用了语句间的连接成 分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯 ，条理清楚。 要 点 全 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法 多样化（较复杂）语言地道 连 接 词 根据下列要求和提示，完成审题谋篇、遣 词造句、连句成篇等写作过程。 Miss wang has received a letter from Xiao Dong. He is also asking for some advice. Read the letter on Page 7 in your textbook and help Miss Wang answer it. 第一步：审题审题 思考的问题问题样题样题 分析 person Writing style？ topic order when 第二人称 一封信 小东在交友过程中遇 到了困难，给其建议 说理逻辑性 现在时 Structure for an advice letter Para1 background and purpose Para2 advice Para3 proper ending Attention: be polite. Dear Bob, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题题). However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips for you. First, why not，which can. Secondly, it also helps to .If you do this,. Thirdly, it should be a good idea to . That way,. (此 三句不同的句式提出建议议并陈陈述理由) I hope you will find these ideas useful. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 适当运用模板 第二步：搜索相关词组或句型 1. 词汇： (1).很难与他人交流 have trouble/difficult in communicating with others (2).感到孤独 feel lonely (3).采纳下面的建议 take the following advice/suggestions (4).了解他人的兴趣 learn about their interest/hobbies 第二步：搜索相关词组或句型 1. 词汇： (5).积极参与 be active to take part in/actively take part in (6).耐心听他人说话 be patient to listen to others (7).随着时间的流逝 as time goes by/ with time going by (8).和交朋友 make friends with Before writing, work with your partner and think about some ways to change the situation. (1).你在信中说，你与别人交流时有困难。 A.In your letter, you said you were not good at communicating with others. B. In your letter, you said you had difficulty/trouble in communicating with others. C. In your letter, you said it was hard to communicate with others. 2. 句式练习 一句多译 (2).我相信你可以克服的，只要你能遵循一下 几点建议。 A. I believe you can just overcome it so long as you can adopt the following advice . B. I think you can get over it_ so long as you can follow/take the advice . 2. 句式练习 一句多译 (3).在班级举行讨论的时候，你要积极参加，并且积极 表达自己的观点。 A.In a class discussion, youd better actively take part in it and express your views/opinions actively. B. When taking part in a class discussion, you should take part in it and tell others what you think actively. C. You should participate in the discussion positively and make your voice heard actively. 2. 句式练习 一句多译 (4).这样你就可以结识更多的人。 A.In this way, you can make friends with more people. B. Then you can make acquaintance with more people. 2. 句式练习 一句多译 (5).必要时给别人以帮助也是个好主 意。 A. It will also be a good idea to help others when necessary. B. It is also a good idea that you can help others when necessary. 2. 句式练习 一句多译 Dear Xiao Dong, In your letter, you said you are not good at communicating with others and often feel lonely. I think you can just make it so long as you can follow the advice below. First, you should learn about your classmates likes and dislikes. Second, you should take an active part in the discussion held in your class and show your own opinion actively, and at the same time, learn to listen to others patiently. Then you can make friends with more people. Third, it will be a good idea to help others when necessary. With time going on, people will know you better and like to make friends with you if you can do the above. I