【精品】综合写作 三战作文汇总 托福考试复习资料.docx

综合写作150-225单词，独立300+综合写作一级页面、二级页面听力阅读一定相反。但三级页面细节，不行。听。阅读时，把文章主要层次分离出来把一二级页面提炼出来。把所有生词提炼出来，试着读出读音，不能形成听力障碍。要点有twins句型，所以要点听出来一定要记。有连读、生词都不怕，联系阅读找对应的反驳细节。考场要做的几件事：综合写作考场处理程序：阅读找出基本结构和生词的音和意，记阅读笔记，在三点之间留空白。听力记在空白处补充细节。瞬时回忆听力要点，1min以内。先打模板。空的地方打回车。填要点做检查。独立写作：文章内容还是以例子为主，尽量避免大量的说理。同时尽可能多引用一些proverb，名人名言。独立写作前两段总时间控制在10min 以内，这样才能出效果。其实不需要太多字数，450撑死，420就很好。多留时间检查润色。目录20100115na220100115na改320091031narevised520110304na620110304narevised7tpo4综合写作8tpo5 综合写作920110211na920110211narevised1020101009na1120101009narevised1220101022na1320101022narevised1420101030na1520101030narevised1620101203na1720101218na18三战准备19201003121920100312-revised2020100821na2220110821na-revised2320100828na2420100828na-revised2520100924na2720101009na2820101022na2920101030na3120101218na3220110115na3420100211na3520110304na3720110311na_revised3820110402na3920110402na-revised4120110625na4220091031na4420101203na4520110415na46tpo22综合写作4720100115natopic: some people think that a university professor should focus time on doing research; while others think that the main role of a professor is to educate students in a university. which one do you agree with? use specific reasons to support your answer.if the university was a flourish tree, the professors would be the foundamentsfundaments of it. as students and researches would be all leaves grow upon the fundaments, professors considerabllyconsiderably influence the degree of success of the university. nowadays, it becomes an argument that whether professors should spend their limited time on teaching students or on doing researching. in my point of view, doing researching is more important.first of all, i need to admit that it is a significant role professors should play in the university as a teacher to educate students. professor often has a deeper understanding of the courses and a wider point of view in the relative fields than any other people. students are able to gain benefits from these without any doubt. for instance, if a professor is teaching digital signal processing, in his class, he may not only metionmention basis and basic methods of processing the digital signal, but also talk about his experience and reflection of doing this, which will give students more accessible understanding of the course. above all, the advantages of using time on educating students isare obvious.however, more time should be spent on researching filed. it is known to all that universities have the unique environment to do research. professors have the most advanced equipments, which allow them have the leading experiences. in my university, professors often show off their equipments in front of experts from other fessions plus, universities are not as so utility as other place. there is 去掉？some certain researches are not useful in this day and age, but will be crucial in ten or twenty years later. only the universities can offer the suitable atmosphere to doing these researches. take the noble prize for example, professors in the university won all the prizes beside the peace prize this year. in addition, their foundingsfindings be awarded are most mostly beingdone in five to ten years ago. these evidences all lead the conclusion that the development of science and technology depends on the professors efforts in the universities.as educating students and doing researches are both important, why i say professors should focus more time on researches? because i think every individuals time is limited, and no one can alternate the professors in research filedsfields, however 不能用在这，whilesomeone can play the same role as professors in the educating areas. in the universities, there are also common teachers besides professors. they are employed to teach students. because students are majormainly focus on the basic knowledge in their undergraduate periods, common teachers are knowledgeable enough to educate students. in addition, as teachers focus on teaching, they may have more teaching methods, which may lead to them more favorable in students even than professors.all in all, though teaching students and doing researches are both important to the professors, i think it is wiser to spend more time on the later one.20100115na改topic: some people think that a university professor should focus time on doing research; while others think that the main role of a professor is to educate students in a university. which one do you agree with? use specific reasons to support your answer.if the university was a flourishflourishing,vigorous tree, the professors would be thefundaments l1of it. as 直接一个“and”省得语法问题。students and researches would be all leaves growgrowing upon the fundaments, professorsconsiderably l2influence the degree of success of the university. nowadays, it becomes an argument that whether professors should spend their limited time on teaching students感觉这里最好不加上students; teaching已经可以表达“教学”的意思。 or on doing researchingresearch can be used as a noun, so ing here is not necessary. in my point of view, doing researching is more important.first of all, i need to admit that it is a significant rolethat professors should play in the university as a teacher to educate students. professor often has a deeper understanding of the coursesand awiderpoint of view in the relative fields than any other people. students are able to gain benefits from these without any doubt. for instance, if a professor is teaching digital signal processing, in his class, he may not onlymention l3basis andbasic methods of processing the digital signal, but also talk about his experience and reflection of doing this, which will give students more accessible understanding experience, reflection, understanding 都是不可数！of the course. above all, the advantages of using time on educating students isarel4obvious.however, more time should be spent on researching filed. it is known to all that universities have the unique environment to do research. professors have the most advanced equipments, which allow them have the leading experiences. in my university, professors often show off their equipments in front of experts from otherprofessions. l5plus, universities are not as so utility as other place.there arel6some certain researches which may not be useful at the present day, but will be crucial in ten or twenty years. only the universities can offer the suitableatmosphere to doingdo these researches. take the noble prize for example, professors in the university won all the prizes beside应为except for。 beside 意为“在旁边”，besides意为“除之外还有”，而except for意为“除了”。 the peace prize this year. in addition, theirfindings l7being awarded were mostly done in five to ten years ago. these evidences all lead to the conclusion that the development of science and technology depends on the professors efforts in the universities.now that educatingstudents and doing researches are both important, why do i say professors should focus more time on researches?感觉这句话在这里出现不太符合逻辑。因为在第一段和第三段已经明确表达了此文的立意作者认为doing research is more important，而且第三段已经提出了论据来支持论点，此处再次设问有点重复。 because i think every individuals time is limited, and no one can alternate the professors in researchfields l8, while someone can play the same role as professors in the educating areas. in the universities, there are also common teachers besides professors. they are employed to teach students. because students mainly focus on the basic knowledge in their undergraduate periods, common teachers are knowledgeable enough to educate them. in addition, as teachers focus only on teaching, they may have more teaching methods, which may enable them to be more favorablein studentseventhan professors.all in all, though teaching students and doing researches are both important to the professors, i think it is wiser to spend more time on the later one.words in yellow are revised or added; those in red are to be deleted.比较长的句子要注意从句的连词，否则可能出现两个谓语动词；另外注意动词的变化。第四段开头：in addition, every individuals time is limited. the achievements people obtain depend on the depth people focus on the thing. while someone 结尾： all in all, only by spending more time on doing researches instead of educating students, can professors benefit most to the university and the whole society.fundamentsconsiderablymentionareprofessions去掉？不可数？fields20091031narevisedtopic: do you agree or disagree with the following statement? it is often not a good thing for people to move a new town or a new country because they will lose their friends. use specific reasons to support your answer.with the development of the global economy and transportation, more and more individuals make a choice of moving to a new place to study ofor work. some people point out because of losing friends it would be aan unwise decision. however infrom my point of view, we can actually gain a huge amount of benefits, instead of losing friends, from the moving.first of all, living in another place does not mean lose the old friends. thanks to the rapid development of the communication methods, people can contact with each other conviencely convenientlythrough the internet or telephones. in the past, when we want to discuss about a news不可数，所以没有a with our friends in another town or country, we need to write a letter. after a long waiting for the reply, the news may be out of date. however, in this day and age, all we need to do is to click on the mouse, operaopen? operate?operate 运行opera 歌剧 a communication software and make a topic with people we want to talk. then even though we are thousands miles away in distance, we can talk as if in front of each other. without any doubt, with the convenience and frequent communication, moving can rarely lead to the consequence of losing our old friends.family familiarsecondly, we can make new friends with people in the new place. new place means new environment, new individuals around. as we work and study together with those unfermiliarunfamiliar people, we can becomes new friends with them. take myself for example, when i was in junior high school, our family movingmoved to a new community because of my mothers work. 可以删so i needed to transfer to a new school in the new community. firstlyat first i was unhappy because i was afriedafraid of studying with a group of unfamiliar (new) people. but only after one day, i had made friends with many students in the new school. whats more, i even found a good friend from my primary school, whom i did not have contact with after graduated. it was great that i made new friends as well as contacted with old friend from that moving.new place means not only more friends but also more opportunities. through moving, people can go to higher education institutes and acquire more skills which will be benefitbeneficial to their future development considerably. this can easyeasily explain why every year, lots of young people go to boston, step into harvard or mit with eyes full of hopeful. new place also means more work opportunities. in the big cities such as new york, tokyo or hong kong, most people live and workliving and working此处应改为现在分词，作为后置定语，否则与后面的come都是谓语动词，不符合语法了。 there come from other places of the country or the world. it is true that these cities offer them more opportunities. so why not to move?all in all, not only we may not lose our old friends but also we can get other new friends and benefits from the moving to a new place. so i totally disagree with the topic.20110304natopic: do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the most important problem affecting our society today will be solved in our lifetime.during the development of our society, people have faced numorousnumerous problems from individuals health to countries relationship. seeing some difficult problems have been solved within a short period of time, some people claim that the most important problem will be solved in our lifetime. however, i strongly disagree with this statement.first of all, i need to admit that we have worked out a huge number of questions within a couple of years and we can do the same thing in our lifetime. for example, in the past, fire is used to light rooms, make warm and even power the train. but people found the problem that fire was not efficient and not safe enough to use. then with the development of science and technology, today electricity takes the place of fire. people use it to power lights, air conditions and trains. all problems are solved. in addition, thanks to the rapid development of science and technology, more and more inventions came out to solve peoples difficulties. when people suffered from communication, mobile phones came out to solve. when people suffered from calculating, computers came out to solve. when people suffered from the long distance transportation, air planes came out to solve. now we are facing the risks of the aids, and how to do with it? i think we will find the answer within our lifetime.however in the problems we are now facing, which one is the most important? i think we cant draw to one conclusion. because of the differences in region, country, degree of wealth and etc, people have different situations in their life as well as different perspectivitiesperspectives to the society problem. for instance, to an individual habit in an island of indonesia, the global warming is the most crucial problem. to a poor family in africa, they will consider about how to get enough food day and night. in contrast, for a business man in new york, he may treat the world economy recovery as the most important issue instead of food or environment problems. so, frankly to say there isnt the most important problem, as every question may be notably significant to a certain group of people.plus, many questions will remain unclear in our lifetime as peoples knowledge is still limited to some areas. take the outer space for example, is there any creature exist? this is a question had been asking for many hundreds years. however, though people already have some probes exploring the outer space and stepped into the land of moon, no one can give a clear answer. also, in our daily life some questions are hard to solve. the relationship between contriescountries is a proper example. as every country wants to get more benefits, how to keep peace? in the history of human development, wars made numerous kills and damages. however wars still occur every year, and how to stop it is the question need to solve. but, who can?all in all, through we have worked out many difficult problems, we cannot solve the most important one in our lifetime. solve 同义词 work out, resolve, answer, decipher, decode, interpret problem difficulty, question, troublenumerous plentiful several variousface confront deal with cope with encounter 20110304narevisedtopic: do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the most important problem affecting our society today will be solved in our lifetime.with the development of human civilization, peoples knowledge on technology and society becomes deeper and deeper. during the development of our society, people have faced numorousnumerous problems from individuals health to countries relationship建议改为relations，多指国家之间的关系。. seeing some difficult problems have been solved within a short period of time, some people claim that the most important problem will be solved in our lifetime. however, i strongly disagree with this statement. human-civilization first of all, i need to admit that we have worked out a huge number of questions within a couple of years and we can do the same thing in our lifetime. for example, in the past, fire is used to light rooms, make warm and even power the train. but people found the problem that fire was not efficient and not safe enough to use. then with the development of science and technology, today electricity takes the place of fire. people use it to power lights, air conditions and trains. all problems are solved. in addition, thanks to the rapid development of science and technology, more and more inventions came out to solve peoples difficulties. when people suffered from communication, mobile phones came out to solve. when people suffered from calculating, computers came out to solve. when people suffered from the long distance transportation, air planes came out to solve. now we are facing the risks of the aids, and how to do with it? i think we will find the answer within our lifetime.however in the problems we are now facing, which one is the most important? i think we cant draw to one conclusion. because of the differences in region, country, degree of wealth and etc, people have different situations in their life as well as different perspectivitiesperspectives to the society problem. for instance, to an individual habit in an island of indonesia, the global warming is the most crucial problem. to a poor family in africa, they will consider about how to get enough food day and night. in contrast, for a business man in new york, he may treat the world economy recovery as the most important issue instead of food or environment problems. so, frankly to say there isnt the most important problem, as every question may be notably significant to a certain group of people.plus, many questions will remain unclear in our lifetime as peoples knowledge is still limited to some areas. take the outer space for example, is there any creature existing? this is a question that had been asked for many hundreds years. however, though people already have some probes exploring the outer space and stepped into th