2013年3月02日托福独立写作考题 精讲.doc

TOEFL写作五分 The world is busy and crowded; we should not expect people to be polite to others. 由于世界很繁忙，礼貌变成奢望的讨论。题型：利弊分析方法：拆分立场：不同意生词：part and parcel 一部分hustle 匆忙rhythm 节奏indifference 忽略pedestrians 行人adolescence 青少年期trustworthy 值得信赖的appeased 平息appreciation 感恩concede 不得已承认justified 合理的impoliteness 无礼hastiness 匆忙构思图：“2013年3月02日托福独立写作考题构思.pdf”好的礼貌行为是日常生活的一部分。有一个关于由于世界很繁忙，礼貌变成奢望的讨论。我们是不是越来越仓促了呢？诚然，我们中有的人声称无论世界如何快速运转，当个绅士是很重要的。Good manner is part and parcel of daily life. There is a heated discussion on whether we should not expect people to be polite to others, for the world has been busy and crowded. Do we hustle more often than usual in those days? Admittedly, some of us may claim that we should not be an absolute gentleman, since the world is spinning surprisingly fast. However, I find the statement unconvincing in several aspects. 我们都同意，现代人或许会行为鲁莽。因为快节奏的生活会导致忽略的态度。我们可能经常忘掉更好交流的基本。比如，一个经商的人可能由于开会，而忘记回家人的电话，或者短信。 再比如，车辆闯交通灯也能说明问题。结果，会对司机和行人造成麻烦。 继而，人们可能选择牺牲礼貌，来维持有条不絮的生活的举动，很有可能遭到抱怨。We all agree that individuals probably act rudely in modern times. It is because that fast rhythm of living pace and hastiness leads to indifference. We probably forget about some essential things which contribute to a better communication. For an example, a business person might fail to return several phone calls or text back messages from home because of attending to meetings. For another example, a car that breaks traffic lights in order to be on time would be a case in point. Consequently, it would cause trouble to other drivers and pedestrians. Therefore, people who tend to sacrifice politeness to keep their lives organized are much more likely to be complained. 但是，上面提到的抱怨可以通过道歉解决，道歉的姿态在任何地方都会被接受。很多人都会接受道歉，以此显出大方的心态。其外，无论我们如何忙碌，都要对前辈有礼貌。事实上，孩子要对家长有礼貌，因为他们对孩子的童年、青少年、以及成年的培养，做了很大的贡献。其次，学生要尊重老师。不然，无论学生多么有天赋，少了老师的启蒙都会被禁锢。最后，一个雇员应当尊崇他的雇主。在某种程度上说，一个雇主可以是老师，也可以是朋友。我们可以从他们那里学习领导技能，并且对他们的建议心存感激。However, the above mentioned complaints can be resolved by apologizing, which is a polite gesture and welcomed everywhere. Many people would accept apology to show generosity. Besides, no matter how busy we are, we need to be polite to the elder. As a matter of facts, a child should be polite to his parents, for they have made great contribution to the growth and development of a child childhood, adolescence as well as adulthood. Moreover, a student should show respect to his teacher. Otherwise, no matter how talented a student might be, his potential will stay unlocked without a teachers enlightenment. The truth is that between two students with different attitudes, a teacher is unlikely to choose the ungrateful one to educate. Lastly, an employee should look up his employer. At some point, an employer can be a trustworthy teacher or friend. We can learn leadership from them and be grateful to their helpful pieces of advice. 总结，不得不承认的是人们为了不打乱计划，或许会不礼貌。但是，因此而产生的抱怨，可以被道歉平息。并且，人们应当礼貌行事。在大部分情况下要尊重和感恩。总而言之，我不同意苍莽是无礼的正当理由。In sum, I concede that people choose to be impolite without disturbing their schedule. However, complaints caused by impoliteness of behaviors can be appeased by apology. Moreover, peop