高中英语 module 5 the great sports personality section ⅴ writing-通知教学案 外研版必修5

Module 5 The Great Sports Personality Section Writing-通知一、基本结构通知是一种安排活动、传达事情或布置工作时使用的文体。它包括书面通知和口头通知。1书面通知即以书面的形式表达通知的内容。要写清事由、时间、地点、活动内容等，时态以一般将来时为主。常用下述格式：(1)通知上方正中间应写上Notice 或NOTICE。(2)发通知的单位可以放在正文的右下方，也可以放在标题的上方，有时也可省去。(3)书面通知无称呼语，发通知的单位或通知对象一般采用第三人称，写作时要简明扼要。(4)通知的日期应放在正文的左下方，在单位名称的下一行。2口头通知是以口头形式传达消息，包含四部分：称呼语、开场白、正文、结束语。口头通知一般可以省去发出通知的时间或单位。二、增分佳句通知的常用表达句式：1口头通知常用以下语句：Attention, please!May I have your attention, please?Please be quiet! I have something to tell you.Thats all.Thank you (for your listening)So much for it. Thank you.2书面通知常用以下语句：Were going to have a meeting in .Our school is going to hold a lecture about . at .Anyone who is interested may come.Please meet at 7：30 outside the school gate.Be sure not to be late.Looking forward to your active participation.It is organized by .题目要求为了使更多的人参与体育运动、增强体质，本社区决定在体育场举行体育比赛。请你根据以下有关事宜写一则英文通知。时间：2016年11月1日。要求：1.无论何种背景，均可参加；2.对对手要友好。其他：1.无论是否获胜，都有礼品；2.冠军奖金是5 000元；3当场公布比赛结果。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题 1确定体裁：本文是写一篇通知；2确定人称：本文应以第一、二人称为主；3确定时态：本文应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。二、构思第一段：说明活动的目的、时间和地点；第二段：说明活动的要求、规则，并表示希望；第三段：表示感谢。第二步：核心词汇想周全1on_the_increase正在增加2background背景3stadium体育场4competitor对手5champion冠军6victory胜利7announce宣布第三步：由词扩句雏形现1因为喜爱体育运动的人数在增加，所以我们举办这次比赛。(so连接的并列句)The_number_of_the_people_who_like_sports_is_on_the_increase,_so_we_hold_this_game.2我们旨在使更多的人了解体育知识并且更多地参与体育运动以增强体质。(aim at doing sth., build up ones body)We_aim_at_making_more_people_understand_sports_and_take_part_in_more_sports_to_build_up_our_body.3无论何种背景，都可以参加本次比赛。(whatever引导让步状语从句)Whatever_backgrounds_you_are_from,_you_are_welcome.4但你必须小心，对你的竞争对手要友好。But_you_must_be_careful_and_be_friendly_to_your_competitors.5不管你是否获胜，你都会得到一个礼物。(whether .or not .)And_whether_you_achieve_your_victory_or_not,_you_will_get_a_gift.6获得冠军的人将得到5 000 元奖金。(who引导定语从句)The person who can carry off the champion will get 5,000 yuan as a prize.7我们真的希望越来越多的人关注我们的健康，加入我们！(宾语从句，more and more)We_really_hope_that_more_and_more_people_pay_attention_to_our_health_and_join_us!第四步：句式升级造亮点1把句1改为as引导的原因状语从句As_the_number_of_the_people_who_like_sports_is_on_the_increase,_we_hold_this_game._2用v.ing形式作状语连接句1和句2As_the_number_of_the_people_who_like_sports_is_on_the_increase,_we_hold_this_game,_aiming_at_making_more_people_understand_sports_and_take_part_in_more_sports_to_build_up_our_body.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇NoticeLadies_and_gentlemen，Attention,_please._As_the_number_of_the_people_who_like_sports_is_on_the_increase,_we_hold_this_game,_aiming_at_making_more_people_understand_sports_and_take_part_in_more_sports_to_build_up_our_body.We_will_hold_it_in_the_stadium_on_November_1,_2016.Whatever backgrounds you are from, you are welcome. But you must be careful and be friendly to your competitors. And whether you achieve your victory or not, you will get a gift. The person who can carry off the champion will get 5,000 yuan as a prize. The result will be announced on the spot. And we really hope that more a