六级作文心得,轻轻松松拿高分

作文其实并不需要花费太多的时间去复习，就到最后一段时间准备模板就好。 我听过几个老师的讲座，也看过很多作文书，其实老师讲的或者书上都差不多。 在模板中我们要运用各种手法长难句，运用对比、举例，发表观点、提出措施 等等。以下是个人心得总结 一、 作文章法 话题 keeping pets 写作分析：第一段 第一句：引出现象 第二句：引出例子或原因 第三或四句： 阐述例子 It is universally acknowledge that keeping pets is increasingly popular nowadays. There are a variety of examples illustrating this phenomenon . For one thing, there are a growing number of pet hospitals . For another , more and more pet foods are available in supermakets . 第二段 第一句:引出原因 第二或第三句 ：阐述原因 There are enormous numbers of factors that can be easily found ,but the following ones are sufficient. The fact is mainly attribute to the factor that pets can reduce peoples loneliness. It also results from the factor that pets bring happiness. 第三段 第一句作评论 第二三句做出分析 第四句 展望未来 As far as I am concerned , keeping pets will give rise to a host of problems . On one hand ,pets make noise that we can not bear ; one the other hand . it is waste of money in that we have to buy special foods .In conclusion ,it seems to me that keeping pets will fail to be popular in the future . 点评方法 ： 1 开头多变化，文章里面的开头变化多样 1 )形式主义 it 开头 2 )there be 结构开头。 3 )介词开头 in conclusion 此外还有 4) 从句开头 如 if 引导的从句 5)动词分词开头 6)名词开头 开头还可以使用谚语或引言 2 个别句子复杂化 方法 找名词加定语从句 找逻辑加因果关系 如文章中的 On one hand ,pets make noise that we can not bear （定从） it is waste of money in that we have to buy special foods .In conclusion ( in that 因为) 3 越来越多的词组替换 被 increasingly a growing numbers enormous of 代替 more and more 4 许多的替换 a variety of a host of 总结：单词的力量不及词组的力量，建议多 用 5 给分单词 illustrating 代替 explain factor 代替 reason Attribute 代替 reason reduce (减少) 6 mainly attribute : 副词加动词（给分点）也就是动词前加副词 另外 名词前加形容词 如 many people- the overwheming majority of people 再者 of +名词= 形容词 如 important - of great importance 7 展望未来 8 句子 1）串句 如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式： Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. 短语： 3 besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover 2）转折 The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition. The coat was thin, but it was warm. 短语： despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding 六级阅卷老师在语言方面主要从两个方面进行评判： 1、基本正确 四、六级考生的最大问题不是写得太简单，而是严重错误太多。基础一般的同学即使使用小学 或中学词汇和句型，只要使用得基本正确，也可以得到及格分数。考生最常犯的语言错误有三类： 语法、拼写、标点。最常犯的语法错误包括：时态、冠词、主谓一致、名词单复数等。 2、丰富多变 基础较好的同学，要想取得四、六级写作高分，应做到丰富多变。丰富多变体现在词汇和句型 两方面。同一词语在一句话、一个段落乃至一篇文章中最好不要重复出现，应尽量使用同、近义词 替换（无法替换的关键词除外） 。例如：think 可以替换为 reckon, assume, argue 等词。如果想不 到同、近义词，可以使用上义词进行替换。此外，句型也应富于变化，不要拘泥于主谓宾句型，可 以使用主系表、过去分词和现在分词短语作状语、不定式短语作状语、状语从句等多种句型。 四级作文如果量化成句数，只需写 10 句左右；六级只需 12 句左右。全文应以短句为主，长短 句相结合。所谓短句是指 10 个词左右的句子，不能全篇都是 5、6 个词的短句。同时，全文应有一 定数量的长句，一般 1520 词即可，太长则易冗赘。有的同学以为只写长句不写短句，就能取得高 分，实际上老师看长句会觉得很累，以为你不会写短句，通常不会给高分。如果一篇中文作文每句 都 30 多个字，定然晦涩难懂，英文也不例外。精炼的短句可以放在段首表示强调； 复杂的长句可 以进行具体的论证、举例或描述。 高分真经 （一）背诵 背诵是提高英语综合能力的法宝，可分为以下 5 个层次：（1）精彩词汇；（2）精彩句型； （3）精彩句子；（4）万能框架；（5）经典范文。注意句子和句型不一样，精彩句子应作为单词来 记忆。背诵前，确保自己已充分理解所有内容。 语言学习有两个关键词输入（INPUT）和输出（OUTPUT） 。听力和阅读属于输入，考生处于 被动状态，只需在考场上将听到和看到的东西弄懂。应对这种题目的技巧很多，容易在短期内提高。 但口语和写作属于输出，考生必须变被动为主动，这很难在短期内突破。没有大量的输入，很难进 行自由输出。 四、六级写作需要在 30 分钟内完成一篇短文，共计 120 或 150 余字，很多同学叫苦不迭。但若 将其改为中文作文，大家就会觉得易如反掌。原因何在？俗话说：“熟读唐诗三百首，不会做诗也 能吟。 ”同学们从小到大背诵了大量中文佳作，可以随意组合，自由输出。然而，在英语学习中，多 数同学只沉溺于背单词、抠语法、做阅读，很少有人背诵英文文章。正因为没有大量输入，写作才 始终处于“挤牙膏”状态，想一句说一句，说一句翻译一句。 提高英语写作要多读、多背、多写、多改。多读、多背是首要任务，是积累输入的关键。考生 应大量积累经典英文句型、表达和范文，平时勤于背诵。 有的同学问我，说自己背过很多英文文章，但上了考场还是大脑一片空白，什么都想不起来。 这种情况很常见，主要有两个原因：一是没有进行造句的工作，只是盲目背诵。二是背得不够熟练。 学习任何东西都讲究先求质，再求量。大家英语学了很多年，文章看了很多，为什么写作还是学不 好？关键是量铺开了，但质没有上去。一篇文章应背到脱口而出的程度，如果还需要过脑子，就证 明背得不够熟练。一知半解，背得再多也是徒劳。 （二）默写 背完经典范文后，进行默写。然后对照原文纠错，搞清楚错在什么地方。多数同学在写的时候 都会犯小错误，如拼写、单复数、大小写等。这些就是你在写作中的弱点，也是阅卷老师最不能容 忍的地方。培根说过：“Writing makes an exact man.”（写作使人精确。 ）只有默写下来你才 会发现自己常犯哪些错误。 （三）中译英 中译英也是提高写作的好方法。根据范文的中文译文，将其按自己的理解译成英文。译完后， 你就会发现自己的翻译和原文有很大差距，这些差距就是取得写作高分的关键。这时，对照范文， 看看原作者是怎么写的，思考为什么这么写。同样的一句中文，范文中使用了哪些词汇和句型？你 使用了哪些词汇和句型？学习范文使用不同的词汇和句型。通过不断练习，你的写作水平不知不觉 就提高了。 （四）写作 模仿范文写作新的文章，套用范文的精彩词汇、句型、句子和框架。最初套用时可能比较生硬， 但随着不断的积累，组合起来会越来越顺手。 上述的高分策略是提高四、六级英语写作水平最有效的方法。在练习写作的初始阶段, 可勤查 语法书和字典等工具书, 背记常用词和短语，以扩大词汇量，拓展知识面。背单词时要深刻理解所 5 背词语的内在含义，并了解其使用环境。备考时，熟记一些过渡词、句型和范文，并进行仿写。考 试时，使用学习过的、熟悉而有把握的词汇和句型，没有把握的句子，尽量采取“回避政策” ，切忌 自编自造汉语式的英语词组和句型。 二、 描写变化 One of the most fundamental changes that have taken place is how our leisure time is spent. Such changes has exerted tremendous influence on individuals and the society as a whole. 三、 陈述事实 1. Recently, the phenomenon ofhas caused public concern, and 2. is a common occurrence in our daily life 3. has been playing an increasingly significant role in our life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problem as well. 4. It is only during the last few years that man has become generally aware of that 5.with the development of (science and society/ technology/ peoples awareness/ market economy),is more and more common. 6.with the increasing frequent exchanges among different part of our country ,a problem has attracted peoples attention. 7.I dont maintain that it is a must to use traditional character (繁体字) . 8.It isnt uncommon that (双重否定句) 9. With heavier workload and increased responsibilities , 七、 原因 1.Sth is superior in several ways, of which perhaps the most fundamental reason lies in that， 2.there are probably many reasons for this phenomenon. First and foremost, perhaps the main reason is . 3.Some reasons can be responsible for this , and the following are the typical ones. account for lead to 5.One compelling argument involves accounting for this fact contributing to 7.The reasons for are analyzed as follows. 七、 解决问题 1. It is high time that something was done about it. There are several measures for us to adopt. 123 2. Confronted with, we should take a series of effective measures to solve it. For one thing. For another this fact , but to me ,is the key one4.Enormous factors may 6.There are a variety of factors 7 3. people have figured out various ways to deal with the problem. 4. For my part, I think it is reasonable to Only in this way can we 5. In my opinion, we should place much emphasis on (this problem/ the issue/the phenomenon). The key point lies in (everyones awareness of its harm) 6. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of., only in this way can we 7. We may have long way to go before we reach the final goal. But once (we are on the way, the chance to reach it is greater. ) 8. all in all, we can not live withoutBut at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problem (concerned) that would arise. 9. Nowadays, .has become a problem we have to face. Though it is easier said than done, with (the help of modern technology), we may have many means to solve it. 10.Feasible measures must be taken by sb to do sth and improve sth 六、 事物两面性 1. however, just like everything has both its good and dad side,.also has its advantages and disadvantages, such as 2. however, just like every coin has 2 sides is not an exception. It has both advantages and disadvantages. 3.Sth has both positive and negative impact. 七、 表明多方观点： 1. Views vary from person to person. 2. Peoples opinion aboutvary from person to person, but they all agree that 3. Different people hold different attitudes towards ， 4. However, others seriously doubt it 5. Other people hold the opposite point of view 八、 我认为 1.argue 2.maintain 3.consider 4.persist in + that 5.insist on 6.hold the idea 7.take it for granted 2.The further reason why I advocate this attitude is that 九、 在我看来 1. As far as I am concerned, 2. From a personal perspective I prefer I 9 3. In my judgment 4. As I see it 十、 表明赞同一方面观点： 1. As for this issue ,I strongly approve of + n. 2. To be frank, I can not agree with the former (latter) to some extent. 3. Personally, I am on the side of the latter argument 4. On the contrary, there are some people in favor of they believe beneficial 十一、 表明最后观点： 1. In my judgment, both sides are partly right, we should take into consideration all aspects of the problem, and then (find out the appropriate solution to the problem) make the right decision. 2. Taking all those factors (mentioned) above into consideration, we can safely come to the conclusion that 3. In conclusion, 4. Obviously, we can draw the conclusion that 十二、 其他精彩句型 For those who have no interest in such classes ,they are just a waste of time. It serve its purpose perfectly as long as it is used conveniently by others. It well demonstrates its valve Apell sb to do sth There is no denying that is beneficial to both individuals and society. be asked to do sb be supposed to do be expected to do Cater for different peoples tastes 七七、 连接词 1. first and foremost、besides 、lastly but not the least 2. to begin with, then, furthermore, finally 3. to start with, next, in addition, finally 4. on one hand、on the other hand 5. for one thing 、 for another 总结词 1. Admit it or not 2. To conclude 十四、 精彩词汇 1. important significant immense importance is attached to 11 be indispensable to Place emphasis on 2. great Immense、dramatic 、enormous 3. Moan in depression 4. On the part of universities ,no the student part 5. Are expected to 6. Identify 7. Accordingly 8. Figure out 9. Take an open mind about 10. Glorious future 11. Take into consideration 12. Inevitable 13. Similar to 14. Sticking to your principles 15. decline 下降，衰退，谢绝，婉拒 16. adjust sth to sth 调整使适应 17. as a consequence 作为的结果 18. endow sb with 使某人具有 19. flat 直率 20. put more effort into + n. 做出努力 21. firm