高三英语短文改错专题课件

1、,Proof-reading,短文改错,白雪莹,Learning Aims,Know the steps of correcting a composition. Know the common types of mistakes appeared in proofreading. Be sensitive to these kinds of mistakes while correcting a composition.,The rules,假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改

2、。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。,I can go to home now. 2. I like playing piano. 3. I am fond at English.,the,Wrong word,Missing word,of,Unnecessary word,高考短文改错的考察方式,一、动词形,1.动词的时态和语态错误。,高考链接1： 1. However, my fath

3、er had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday. (2011 全国）,flew,2.About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and became a new number of the school music club. (2017全国3卷),taken,2. 主、谓不一致的错误.,高考链接:,3. I stayed there for one and a half hours and m

4、ade sure that the girl were all right. (2009 全国卷2),was,4.My dream school look like a big garden. (2015全国),looks,3. 非谓语动词 错误,5. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.（2011全国卷2）,buying,6.Skilled workers also combine various hardwoods and metal create special designs. （2016全国卷2

5、）,to,7.In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables .(2017全国2),interested,现在分词 过去分词 不定式,二、名词数,指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。,高考链接2： 1. Besides, they often get some useful informations from the Internet.(2017全国2),information,2.The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.(2

6、016全国3),years,progress, furniture, weather, news, information, advice,knowlwdge,三、还要注意形和副,形容词和副词的误用,高考链接3：,1.Lots of studies have shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.(2015全国1),serious,2比较级和最高级的混用或误用.,2.They were the best and the worse years in my life. (2015全国2),wor

7、st,四、 代词格，细领悟,3. it作形主、形宾或指代时有缺漏 (feel, find, think),高考链接4： 1.With the help of Tina, a roommate of me,I finished my task. (2015 重庆卷）,mine,2.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledge we cannot get from books. (2016全国2）,3.He found difficult to learn math well.,our,it,1. 人称

8、代词，物主代词,反身代词的使用,2. 代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的逻辑错误.,五、介词短语须关注， 习惯用法要记住,高考链接： 1.At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself.(2016全国2),for,2.Now I am leaving home to college.(2015全国2),名词性从句和定语从句中引导词。,六. 句子成分多分析,1.In their spare time, they are interested in planting vegetables in t

9、heir garden， that is on the rooftop of their house.(2017全国2),which,2.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.(2016全国2),what,高考链接,连词but，and，or, so，because,besides和although等的逻辑性用法错误,高考链接7：,七、冠词连词常光顾,1.They lived far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half

10、to go to work every day. (2017全国2),2.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor. (2011新课标卷）,. 冠词a, an和the的用法错误,and,anone,动词形，,名词数。,还要注意形和副。,代词格，细领悟。,介词短语常常考。 习惯用法要记住。,冠词连词常光顾。,A Limerick（打油诗）,句子成分多分析。,解题步骤,1. (浏览全文，掌握大意）,2.（分句阅读，逐行找错）,3.（检查核对，攻克难点）,短文改错应注意的问题: 1. 标点符号不改 2.

11、 大小写不改 3. 次序错误不改 4. 单词拼写不改,实战演练,Yesterday all the students were telling about the safe issues in the class meeting, and then the summer vacation finally came. I had been looking forward it for a long time.I have make some plans for my summer vacation. First, I wanted to visit my grandparents.I miss

12、them all the time and they miss me,either.,told,to,made,want,too,习惯用法要记住,动词形,动词形,动词形,习惯用法要记住,I want to spend much time with them than before.My grandma will cook kinds of dish for me. Second,I want to play the football. I spend little time on it at school because we have to focus on my study.If its

13、tiring,its good for my health.,more,dishes,ThoughAlthough,I,还要注意形和副,名词数,习惯用法要记住,代词格，细领悟,冠词连词常光顾,Never forget why you started, and your mission can be accomplished.不忘初心，方得始终。,Thank you!,5. He used to getting up early to take physical exercise.,were,likes,exciting,get,Not only the students but also th

14、e teacher like the film.,2. When they came here, I will show them.,3. They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions.,4. I found the game excited and my dad explained the rules.,practice,come,1.Dont lose hearts, youll be successful in time. 2.I need some more informations.

15、3.These machines look the same,but they are of different kind.,heart,information,kinds,practice,绝不可数名词,progress, furniture, weather, fun, news, information, advice ,1. He asked angry if we had finished the work. 2. Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is quite different from mine. 3. Hi

16、s father looks much more happier today.,angrily,clear,4. So I grateful accepted the offer.,gratefully,practice,2. I was learning to express me in simple English. 3. I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. 4. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher.,m

17、yself,everything,it,Some students may also save up for our college or future use .,their,practice,practice,Im sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool.,2. At last we reached to the village at the foot of the hill.,3. When a young man starts to earn his own living, he can no longer expect others to pay his food .,4. The gentleman insisted at my receiving the money.,a