新目标英语课件--英语写作专题

1、English Writing 英语书面表达训练,写过去的事,主要特点,记叙为主 稍加议论 旁带说明,空间顺序,时间顺序,能力要求,逻辑顺序,主要问题,要点不全,线索不清,原因：步骤不对,书面表达,六 步 法,书面表达六步法,书面表达六步法,一、审题,确定基本要素:5W1H,何 时 何 地 何 人 为 何 如 何 做 了 何 事,书面表达六步法,二、抓要点,确定主要行为,What happened?,书面表达六步法,三、扩展成句,形成基本语义单位,Who did what?,书面表达六步法,四、连句成文,时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应,书面表达六步法,五、查错改错,要尽量剔除错误,书面表达六步法

2、,六、誊写,卷面不工整扣5分,课堂练习,请用六步法写一篇短文,五个 “W”一个 “H”,第一步 审题,认真读题然后找出,把答案写在题中相应的位置,书面表达经典示例,假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。 1、目击者应该准确报告事实； 2、词数100左右； 3、结尾已为你写好。 _ About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua,附图,1,2,3,4

3、,At 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000, I saw a woman driving a car hit the man in the street.,第二步 抓要点,一幅图，一要点,时态直达 语态到位,介/副词紧随,抓要点，配动词,第三步 扩展成句,把要点变成完整的句子。,注意使用介/副词,第四步 连句成文,增加细节 呼应首尾,句与句相连,词与词搭配,第五步 查错改错,主谓一致吗？,时态正确吗？,时态正确吗？,有“半截话”吗？,第六步 誊写,卷面整洁不一定加分， 卷面潦草一定要扣分！,作业选评,要改进吗？,为什么？,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,At

4、 7:15 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th, 2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual. I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudde

5、n right turn at the crossing.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,The car was so fast that the old man even didnt have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,I thought the driver would have stopped to help, but she didnt. Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pai

6、n.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady. After that, I went over to check out the old man.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.