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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Mymotheralwayssaid,“Can’tnevercoulduntilhetried.”Sherecitedittomemanytimesduringmychildhood.Itwaslikewavingaredflaginfrontofabull.Angryasitwas,ittookroot.IstronglybelievethatIwillneverbeabletodosomethingunlessItry.Lastyear,myhusbandlosthisjob,leavinguswithasingleine—mine.Wewereatwoinefamilywithtwochildrentosupport.Justwhenitlookedlikethingscouldn’tgetworse,Ilostmyjobtoo.Whilemyhusbandwasmakingcallsforanotherjob,Istayedathomeanddidmybesttofigureouthowtomakethemostofeverycent.WhenItriedtogetsomemilkfromtherefrigerator,Ifoundthemilkhadgonebad.Whatwaswrong?Ittookmesometimetomakeitout.Therefrigeratordidn’twork.Itwasoftendifficultformetohaveahopefulandpositiveattitudeatthattime.Anxiousaboutoursituation,ItriedtothinkofsomethingthatIcoulddotoearnsomemoney.Evenalittlewouldhelp.Maybewecouldatleastgettherefrigeratorrepaired.ButwhatcouldIdo?Ibegansearchingthewantads,applyingforanythingthatIwasevenabletodo.Ihadlunchwithaformercolleague
whoinsistedthatIwouldbegreatatteachingputerclasses.Ihadusedwordprocessingsoftwareatmyformerjobandwasdefinitelyanexpert.Iusedtohelpmyfriendslearnhowtouseputersoftware.IwasconsiderateandeasygoingandIwasgoodatdescribingthingspatiently.Oncemyfriendshaddifficultyinusingtheputer,Iwouldbewillingtohelp—guidingthemthrough,answeringalltheirquestions.Fromtheirfacialexpressions,Icouldtelltheylovedme.Wasitpossiblethatpeoplewouldactuallypaymetoteachthem?Isuddenlyrememberedmymother’swords“Can’tnevercoulduntilhetried”.注意:1.续写词数为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Iwasn’tsurewheretostart,butfinallyIgotanidea.Paragraph2:Fortunately,ImadeenoughmoneytodothethingsIwanted.经济困境解决方案故事续写一、续写分析第一段情节发展:主人公在决定教授电脑课后,先是前往当地社区中心,成功说服经理免费提供教室。接着制作宣传传单,在周边社区、商店以及网络上进行分发。一开始因担心无人报名而紧张,随后陆续接到报名,这为后续课程开展奠定基础。写作手法:运用了心理描写,如“Atfirst,Iwasnervous,fearingnoonewouldsignup.”生动展现主人公的忐忑心情;动作描写,“createdflyers”“distributedthem”等使情节更具画面感,体现主人公积极行动的过程。第二段情节发展:课程取得巨大成功,主人公凭借授课收入不仅修好了冰箱,购买了急需的生活用品,更重要的是收获了自信。回顾这段经历,主人公深刻领悟到母亲话语的真谛,认识到只要勇于尝试,困境就有转机。此段为故事高潮与结尾,突出成功后的成果及内心感悟。写作手法:通过结果描述,“notonlygottherefrigeratorrepairedbutalsomanagedtobuysomemuchneededgroceries”展现经济状况的改善;结尾采用议论方式升华主题,“nomatterhowtoughlifegets,aslongaswehavethecouragetotry,thereisalwayshopeforabetterfuture.”点明文章主旨。二、故事线失业困境:主人公和丈夫先后失业,家庭陷入经济困境,冰箱也出现故障。寻找契机:与前同事交流后,受启发打算教授电脑课,回忆起母亲的话。付诸行动:向社区中心申请场地,制作并分发传单,开始筹备课程。收获成功:课程成功开展,获得收入,解决了生活难题,获得自信与感悟。三、高频单词approach[əˈprəʊtʃ]v.接近,着手处理pitch[pɪtʃ]v.推销,争取支持relief[rɪˈliːf]n.宽慰,安心expertise[ˌekspɜːˈtiːz]n.专业知识,专长distribute[dɪˈstrɪbjuːt]v.分发,散布success[səkˈses]n.成功confidence[ˈkɒnfɪdəns]n.信心courage[ˈkʌrɪdʒ]n.勇气四、短语besure确定getanidea有了一个主意approachsb.接近某人toone'srelief令某人宽慰的是createflyers制作传单distributearound四处分发signup报名turn...around使……好转五、主旨升华句Thisexperiencebecameapowerfulreminderthatinthefaceofadversity,thesimpleactoftakingtheinitiativeandtryingcanopendoorstounexpectedopportunities.(这段经历有力地提醒我们,在逆境面前,主动尝试这一简单行为能够开启通往意想不到机会的大门。)Ourjourneyoutoftheeconomicquagmiretaughtmethateverychallengeisasteppingstonetogrowth,andthekeyliesinhavingthegutstostepforwardandgiveitashot.(我们摆脱经济困境的历程让我明白,每一个挑战都是成长的垫脚石,关键在于要有勇气向前迈出一步并尝试。)Throughthisarduousyetrewardingprocess,Ilearnedthathopeisnotapassivewishbutanactivepursuitthatbeginswiththefirstbraveattempt.(通过这个艰难却又充满回报的过程,我懂得了希望不是被动的愿望,而是一种积极的追求,始于勇敢的第一次尝试。)六、写作示范示范一Paragraph1:Iwasn’tsurewheretostart,butfinallyIgotanidea.Ithoughtofreachingouttothelocallibrary.Iarrangedameetingwiththelibrarianandpassionatelypitchedmyplanofconductingputerclasses.Tomydelight,shewasenthusiasticabouttheideaandprovidedaquietstudyroomformyclasses.Then,Idesignedeyecatchingposters,emphasizingthepracticalbenefitsoflearningputerskills.Ipostedtheminlibraries,munitynoticeboards,andvariousonlineplatforms.Initially,selfdoubtcreptin,worryingthatnoonewouldshowinterest.However,asdayspassed,theresponsewasoverwhelming.Peopleofallages,fromyoungstudentstoretirees,wereeagertoenhancetheirdigitalknowledge.Iwasboththrilledandabitdauntedbytheprospectofstartingtheclasses.Paragraph2:Fortunately,ImadeenoughmoneytodothethingsIwanted.Theclasseswereanastoundingsuccess.Withtheine,Inotonlyfixedthemalfunctioningrefrigeratorbutalsoreplacedsomewornouthouseholditems.Moresignificantly,thisventureinstilledinmeanewfoundsenseofselfworth.Itrulyunderstoodthewisdomofmymother’swords.Bydaringtotakethatinitialleapandtry,Itransformedourbleaksituation.Lookingback,Ifeeladeepsenseofacplishment.Ithastaughtmethatnomatterhowdarkthecloudsofhardshipgather,thelightofhopecanshinethroughifwehavethecouragetotry.示范二Paragraph1:Iwasn’tsurewheretostart,butfinallyIgotanidea.Idecidedtovisitthenearbyseniorcenter.Imetwiththedirectorandpresentedmyplanofteachingputerclassestailoredfortheelderly.Tomygreatrelief,hewasveryreceptiveandofferedaspaciousactivityroomformyuse.Afterthat,Icrafteddetailedbrochures,highlightingmyexperienceandthecustomizedcurriculumforseniors.Ihandedthemoutattheseniorcenter,localseniorfocusedevents,andevensharedthemwiththefamiliesoftheelderly.Atfirst,Iwasfilledwithtrepidation,fearingthattheseniorsmightbehesitanttolearn.Butsoon,theinquiriesstartedpouringin.Seniorswereeagertolearnhowtovideochatwiththeirgrandchildrenanduseonlineshoppingplatforms.Iwasexcitedandabitnervousaboutstartingtheseuniqueclasses.Paragraph2:Fortunately,ImadeenoughmoneytodothethingsIwanted.Theclasseswerearemarkabletriumph.Withtheearnings,Inotonlyrepairedtherefrigeratorbutalsotreatedmyfamilytoamuchneedednicemeal.Moreover,thisendeavorboostedmyconfidencetonewheights.Irealizedthatmymother’swordswereabeaconoftruth.Bysimplyhavingthecouragetotry,Iturnedourfinancialstruggleintoachanceforpersonalandfamilygrowth.Now,Ilookbackonthisperiodwithaheartfullofgratitude.Ithasshownmethatnomatterhowtoughlife'scircumstancesmayseem,asingleactofcouragecansetoffachainreactionofpositivechange.参考答案Iwasn'tsurewheretostart,butfinallyIgotanidea.Ithoughtofpostingadvertisementsonthemunitybulletinboardsfirst.Idescribedindetailmyputerteachingexpertiseandmypastexperiencesofhelpingfriendslearn.Meanwhile,Ipostedteachinginformationonsocialmediaplatformstoattractmorepotentialstudents.Tomakeitmoreappealing,Iofferedfreetrialclasses.Soon,manypeoplecontactedme,expressingtheirwillingnesstolearn.Icarefullypreparedeachclassanddevelopedpersonaliz
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