SCI论文写作与投稿 第2版-课件 2-SCI论文题名写作

2SCI论文题名写作SCI论文写作与投稿2SCI论文题名写作2.1

题名的写作要求2.2题名的内容表达2.3

题名的结构表达2.4

题名的语言表达2.5

题名写作实例评析第2页2025年3月31日SCI论文写作与投稿准确(accuracy)

内容范围恰当，紧贴文题文相扣概念准确术语使用描述结果吸引人(attractive)

如获至宝

继续深入

愿望冲动内容准确结构合理用词准确详略得当语序正确修辞妥当逻辑通顺给以美感清楚(clarity)

明确具体、特色及创新重点突出关键词开头优于简洁主副题名简洁(brevity)

简短明了，以少概多越短越好去掉冗词不宜太长不宜太短内容结构语言

2.1

题名的写作要求第3页过于笼统，范围太大，不明确

（题文相扣）ResearchofReconfigurableManufacturingSystemBasicTheoryandMethodofReconfigurableManufacturingSystemResearchActualityandDevelopmentTendencyofReconfigurableManufacturingSystemProductionPathPlanningandMethodofReconfigurableManufacturingSysteminaWorkshopComputerAidedProcessPlanningTechnologyofReconfigurableManufacturingSystemCAPPTechnologyofReconfigurableMachineTools

2.2

题名的内容表达第4页（概念准确）ParticleSwarmOptimizationAlgorithmBasedonPyramidModelforSatelliteModuleLayout

OptimalDesignMethodforMountainBikeRearSuspensionMechanism

KinematicDesignandScaleSynthesisof5-DOFHybridRobotwithLargeWorkspace/Limb-strokeRatioAlgorithm去掉更准确Method去掉更准确KinematicDesign包含ScaleSynthesis

2.2

题名的内容表达第5页（表意清楚）TheEffectivenessofVaccinationagainstInfluenzainHealthy,WorkingAdults

ImprovedMethodforHilbertInstantaneousFrequencyEstimation

Vaccination开头，方法性论文；Effectiveness开头，直接指明主题Method开头，直接指明方法性论文第6页

2.2

题名的内容表达（表意不清）HybridWaveletPacket-TeagerEnergyOperatorAnalysisandItsApplicationforGearboxFaultDiagnosis

AComplicationofTranslumbarAortography

NewHydraulicActuator’sPositionServocontrolStrategyIts指代不明，费力判断Complication表意不明，使劲想像避免非定量、含义不明词，如Rapid、New、Good、Important、Advanced第7页

2.2

题名的内容表达术语ComputerAidedProcessPlanning或CAPP（术语使用）IntelligentDevelopmentStrategyof

ProcessDesignTechnologyBasedonComputer第8页

2.2

题名的内容表达AmbientTemperatureandFreeStreamTurbulenceEffectsontheThermalTransientAnemometerParticleDistributioninCentrifugalAcceleratingFieldsImprovingtheConceptofanAsynchronousCyclotronPricingIncentiveStrategyofInformationSharingInSupplyChain（语法结构）介词结构on、in为名词性短语的后置修饰语；Pricing、Improving是中心词常规结构：中心词+前后置修饰语，中心词常为名词性短语，或分词或动名词第9页

2.3

题名的结构表达Study

Entrusting-AgentProbleminVehicleLogisticsStudyonEntrusting-AgentProbleminVehicleLogisticsEntrusting-AgentProbleminVehicleLogisticsStudyEntrusting-AgentProbleminVehicleLogistics

byUsingInformationEconomics

Talkabout

Entrusting-AgentProbleminVehicleLogistics

（动宾结构）少用动宾结构，改为常规结构（偏正结构）中心动词有状语时用动宾结构中心动词是特殊动词短语时用动宾结构第10页

2.3

题名的结构表达SorghumRootsAreInefficientinUptakeofEDTA-chelatedLeadH7N9virulentmutantsdetectedinchickensinChinaposeanincreasedthreattohumansCanAgriculturalMechanizationBeRealizedwithoutPetroleum?ARaceforSurvival:Can

BromusTectorumSeedsEscapePyrenophoraSemeniperda-causedMortalitybyGerminatingQuickly?

（其他结构）题名用来标示，通常不用陈述句即主谓结构，有判断式语意，不简洁、醒目和突出陈述句可强调过程、动态性，但要避免用主、谓、宾结构的完整冗长语句逐点描述疑问句有探讨性语气，适于评论、综述和驳斥性论文，表达生动，容易易引起兴趣第11页

2.3

题名的结构表达（简短精练）TransitionTextureSynthesisPresenceofTriploidsamongOakSpecies

StudyonBrucella

Research

aboutRapidAnalysisMethodofChemicalConstituentsIncludedinLiquidSteelPreliminaryObservationsontheEffectofZnElementonAnticorrosionofZincPlatingLayer词数恰到好处，简洁明确Brucella是哪个领域，医学、分类学、遗传学、生物化学或别的？RapidAnalysisMethodofChemicalConstituentsofLiquidSteelEffectofZnonAnticorrosionofZincPlatingLayer第12页

2.4

题名的语言表达（简短精练）IndustrialEngineeringandVisualisation

AProductDevelopmentPerspectiveNano-bearing：TheDesignofaNewTypeofAirBearingwithFlexureStructureFlowinaPeltonTurbineBucket：NumericalandExperimentalInvestigations短题名不足以表达内容（题名难以简化或语意未尽），或内容层次较多，或系列研究分篇报道时，可使用副题名，补充、说明主题名，使整个题名既充实准确而又不流于笼统和一般化第13页

2.4

题名的语言表达（介词使用）ChineseCharacteristicsNewTypesofMachines

InhibitionMechanism

of

Na2MoO4

for

CarbonSteel

in55%LiBrSolution

NonlinearEstimationMethodsforAutonomousTrackedVehiclewithSlip名词1修饰2，前者是后者的一部分或性质、特点时，用with＋名词1结构放在中心词之后：

NewTypesofMachineswithChineseCharacteristicsInhibitionMechanism与Na2MoO4为所有关系，用of；Na2MoO4与CarbonSteel间的for表目的、用途；CarbonSteel与LiBrSolution为包含关系，用in…Methods用于车辆…Vehicle，表方法的用途或使用场合，用for不用of第14页

2.4

题名的语言表达（语序正确）MediationMethodBasedonEDMEnergyOperatorand

ItsApplicationinMechanicalFaultDiagnosisGeometricAccuracyTestingofComputerAidedMachineTool

Basedon的对象应是EDM，而非…Operator。EDM应改EMD（EmpiricalModeDecomposition）：EnergyOperatorMediationMethodBasedonEMDComputerAidedTestingofGeometricAccuracyofMachineTool第15页

2.4

题名的语言表达NursingofTrans-sphenoidRemovalofPituitaryAdenomasNeutronsCausedChainReactionofUraniumNucleiMulti-scaleandMulti-phaseNanocompositeCeramicTools

andCuttingPerformanceNumericalSimulationbyComputationalFluidDynamicsandExperimentalStudyonStirredBioreactorwithPunchedImpellerNanoscaleCuttingofMonocrystallineSiliconUsingMolecularDynamicsSimulationCharacterizationofBacteriaCausingMastitisbyGas-liquidChromatography第16页

2.5

题名写作实例评析题名写作实例评析一NursingofTrans-sphenoidRemovalofPituitaryAdenomas将接受护理

（Nursing）的对象病人表达成手术（Trans-sphenoidRemovalofPituitaryAdenomas），对手术进行护理明显不合逻辑病人类型护理对象是病人，即对病人进行护理（NursingforPatients）NursingforPatientsafterTrans-sphenoidRemovalofPituitaryAdenomas第17页题名写作实例评析二Neutrons

Caused

ChainReactionofUraniumNuclei陈述句：Neutrons为主语，Caused为谓语，ChainReactionofUraniumNucle为宾语短语，偏正结构：ChainReaction为中心语UraniumNuclei和CausedbyNeutrons为后置修饰语ChainReactionofUraniumNuclei

CausedbyNeutrons第18页题名写作实例评析三Multi-scaleandMulti-phaseNanocompositeCeramicTools

andCuttingPerformanceCuttingPerformance和Tools并列不妥，切削性能是刀具的属性，不在一个层面，应在其前补出限定语，如andit’sMulti-scaleandMulti-phaseNanocompositeCeramicTools

anditsCuttingPerformanceCuttingPerformanceofMulti-scaleandMulti-phaseNanocompositeCeramicTools侧重论文的主题是CuttingPerformance第19页题名实例评析四NumericalSimulationbyComputationalFluidDynamicsandExperimentalStudyonStirredBioreactorwithPunched