《高中备考指南-英语必修1》课件-2.5Unit 1 Teenage Life-Period Ⅴ Writing - Writing a Letter of Advice

Unit

1

Teenage

LifePeriod

Ⅴ

Writing

—

Writing

a

Letter

of

Advice写作指导【话题技巧总析】

本单元的写作任务是建议信。建议信的目的是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告。有可能是写给个人，就收信人遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务等方面提出建议、忠告。

提出建议时，多用祈使句，时态以一般现在时为主，人称多用第二人称。【基本框架】

建议信的格式和普通信件一样，通常包括以下几个部分：信头、称呼、正文、结束语和签名。因为本写作任务开头和结尾已给出，所以我们只需要写出正文部分即可。

建议信的正文部分分为三部分：

第一部分——引出话题；

第二部分——提出建议；

第三部分——表达祝愿。【关键句型举例】一、常用开头语1.

I

know

you

are

now

having

trouble

communicating

with

others,

and

you

may

often

feel

lonely.我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。2.I’m

glad

to

receive

your

letter

asking

for

my

advice

on…很高兴收到你就……征求我的建议的来信。3.

Here

are

some

tips/a

few

suggestions

to

help

you.这里有一些建议可以帮到你。4.

I

think

you

can

make

it

if

you

follow

the

advice

below.如果你听从以下建议，我认为你会做到的。二、正文部分1.

First,

why

not

join

a

club?

If

you

do

this,

you

can

make

friends.首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。2.

Second,

you

should/can

try

to

talk

with

others.

Then/That

way,

you

will

feel

better.其次，你应该尽力与他人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。3.

Third,

it

would

be

a

good

idea

if

you

read

a

book

or

listen

to

music.

By

doing

this,

you

will

calm

yourself

down.第三，看书或听音乐是个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。4.

Last

but

not

least,

you

should

talk

with

her

first.最后但同等重要的是，你应该先和她谈一谈。5.

As

far

as

I

am

concerned/In

my

opinion,

you

should

help

each

other.就我而言/在我看来，你们应该互相帮助。三、结尾部分1.

I

hope

you

will

find

these

ideas

useful.我希望你会发现这些办法有用。2.

As

time

goes

on,

people

will

know

you

better

and

will

like

to

make

friends

with

you

if

you

can

follow

the

above.如果你听从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加理解你，会愿意和你交朋友的。3.

I

believe

that

if

you

follow

my

advice,

you’ll

get

along

well

with

your

classmates.我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会和同学们相处好的。4.

I

believe,

with

your

trying,

you

can

manage

to

overcome

these

difficulties.我相信，通过努力，你会成功地克服这些困难的。写作演练

假定你是李华，你的英国网友Linda最近在中国学习。她写信向你诉说了她的困扰：不适应新的生活学习环境，想家，感到很焦虑。请你根据以下要点给她写一封回信。要点如下：

1.表示理解并给予安慰；

2.提出建议并给出理由。注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear

Linda,

I’m

sorry

to

learn

that

you

are

having

such

a

bad

time._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Dear

Linda,

I’m

sorry

to

learn

that

you

are

having

such

a

bad

time.

Actually,

most

people

will

feel

homesick

and

anxious

when

they

leave

home

and

come

to

a

new

place,

especially

a

foreign

country.

So

don’t

worry

too

much.

Here

are

some

tips

for

you.

First,

you’d

better

try

to

change

some

of

your

habits

so

that

you

can

get

used

to

the

new

environment

as

soon

as

possible.

Second,

make

more

new

friends,

who

can

share

their

hobbies

and

ideas

with

you.

You

will

feel

less

homesick

with

many

friends

around

you.

Third,

you

should

take

part

in

some

social

activities.

It

will

help

you

learn

more

about

the

local

customs

and

cultures._____________________________________________________________________________________________