高考续写微技能高分技巧课件高三英语一轮复习

Howtopolishasentence？读后续写微技能——高分结构Wee续写评分标准：

主要从内容质量、语言表达和篇章结构三个方面考查，具体为：（1）续写内容的质量、续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。（2）所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。（3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。注意！！！词数少于130的，酌情扣分；书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分。2Sheburstintotearsandburiedherfaceinherhands.Howtodescribeherindetail?Lead-inHowtopolishthesentencetogetthefavorofteachers?Tip1:分词doing/done做状语现在分词doing表主动、进行；过去分词done表被动、完成

1.

(influence)bymyhomeschooling,kidspreparedfornewschoolyear.2.Theexperiencewaslikeapermanentflower,

(bloom)intheriverofmymemory.InfluencedbloomingSheburstintotears,

(bury)herfaceinherhands.buryingSheburstintotearsandburiedherfaceinherhands.关注动词1.Theteachercamein,.

(面带灿烂的笑容）2.

(一切准备就绪)theyexpecteditscoming.withabrightsmilespreadingonherfaceWitheverythingprepared,Sheburstintotears,withherhands

(bury)herface.

Tip2:with的复合结构with+宾语+宾补（doing、done、todo、adj、adv、prep短语)

Sheburstintotearsandburiedherfaceinherhands.buryingSheburstintotears,withherface

(bury)inherhands.buried

关注补充状态1.

(又开心又兴奋)，Isharedthenews.2.

(令人惊讶的是),theydidn’tfallbehindacademically.SurprisinglyUpsetanddepressedTip3:形容词（短语）作状语，说明主语的状态;副词作状语，突出，强调作用。

(伤心难过),sheburstintotearswithherhandsburyingherface.

(显然）shewasoverwhelmedwithbitterness.

ApparentlyDelightedandexcitedSheburstintotearsandburiedherfaceinherhands.关注形容词、副词

_______(see)herbestfriend,_______,shedashedtohughim,

_______________________________.SeeingexcitedwithabrilliantsmilespreadingonherfaceObserveanddescribethescene.SummaryTip1:分词doing/done做状语，（与逻辑主语）表主动、进行则doing；被动、完成

则doneTip2:with的复合结构with+宾语+宾补（doing、done、todo、adj、adv、prep短语)Tip3:形容词（短语）作状语，说明主语的状态；

副词作状语，突出、强调作用。

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