书信写作（模考满分范文10篇）-上海新高考英语一轮总复习（解析版）

进阶练17书信写作（最新模考满分范文10篇）

学校:姓名：班级：考号：

一、书信写作

1.（2023•上海嘉定•统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假设你是李明，你得知美术馆将要举办“国宝展”，邀请好友王磊周末同往。但王磊担心参观耗时太长，影

响课业复习，婉拒了你的邀请。写一封电子邮件给王磊，在信中你必须：

1.简要介绍此次“国宝展”；

2.给出理由再次劝说王磊同往。

［答案］DearWangLei,

I'msorrytohearthatyouturneddownmyproposalofvisitingNationalTreasureExhibition.Thisexhibition

hasdisplayedthenationaltreasuresofthemainlandandTaiwan,whichisavaluableopportunity.

AlotoffamousChinesetraditionalpaintingbytopartistswillbeexhibitedthere.Youcanseesomefamous

paintersdrawingChinesepaintingsonthespot,whichIthink,willcertainlyattractthevisitors'eyes.Ithinkyou

canlearnmoreabouttraditionalculturethroughthisexhibitionandfurtherenhanceyourunderstandingofChina.

Besides,asthesayinggoes,allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy,soyoucanrelieveyourselffromthe

heavystudyloadsfromthis.

Again,Isincerelyinviteyoutogototheexhibitionwithme.Fmlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiMing

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李明，你得知美术馆将要举办“国宝展”，邀请好友王磊周末

同往。但王磊担心参观耗时太长，影响课业复习，婉拒了你的邀请。写一封电子邮件给王磊。

【详解】1.词汇积累

拒绝：turndown—refiise

宝贵的：valuable一precious

机会：opportunity^-chance

力口强：enhance一strengthen

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Ithinkyoucanlearnmoreabouttraditionalculturethroughthisexhibitionandfurtherenhanceyour

understandingofChina.

拓展句：Ithinkyoucanlearnmoreabouttraditionalculturethroughthisexhibition,whichfurtherenhanceyour

understandingofChina.

【点睛】[高分句型1]I'msorrytohearthatyouturneddownmyproposalofvisitingNationalTreasure

Exhibition.（运用了that引导宾语从句）

[高分句型2]Besides,asthesayinggoes,allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy,soyoucanrelieveyourself

fromtheheavystudyloadsfromthis.（运用了as引导非限制性定语从句）

2.（2023•上海•上海中学校考模拟预测）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingto

theinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近收到好友王磊的邮件，信中提到他对如何选择大学专业感到非常困

惑。回复王磊一封邮件，内容须包括：

1.你对选择专业的建议；

2.你的理由。

【答案】DearWanglei,

Hearingthatyouhavetroubledecidingwhichmajoryoushouldchoosewhenyouentertheuniversity,I'd

liketoofferyousomesuggestions.AndIhopetheywillgiveyouahand.

Firstofall,it'sadvisablethatyouchooseonethatisfitforyourowninterestbecauseinterestisthebest

teacher.Whenanobstaclearises,youwillhavetheenthusiasmtocrackitinsteadofgivingitup.Also,picka

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majoryouaregoodat.Sufficientknowledgemaycontributetoyourprogress.Lastbutnotleast,you'dbetter

considerthecareerprospectssinceyouwillhavetotakeadvantageofwhatyou'velearntincollegetofind

yourselfajob.Whenchoicesaremultiple,youwillhavemorechances.

Hopemyadviceisworthytakingandyoucanfindyouridealmajor!

Yours,

LiMing

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以高三学生李明的身份写邮件给好友王磊，对他将来如何选

择大学专业提出建议并给出理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

决定：decide一determine

建议：suggestion一advice

擅长：begoodat一dowellin

机会：chance^opportunity

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Also,pickamajoryouaregoodat.Sufficientknowledgemaycontributetoyourprogress.

拓展句：Also,pickamajoryouaregoodatbecausesufficientknowledgemaycontributetoyourprogress.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Firstofall,ifsadvisablethatyouchooseonethatisfitforyourowninterestbecause

interestisthebestteacher.（运用了that引导的主语从句、that引导的定语从句和because引导的状语从句）

[高分句型2]Lastbutnotleast,you'dbetterconsiderthecareerprospectssinceyouwillhavetotakeadvantage

ofwhatyou'velearntincollegetofindyourselfajob.（运用了since引导的状语从句和what引导的宾语从句，

不定式作目的状语）

3.（2023•上海•模拟预测）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近收到英国笔友Mike的邮件，其中提到因为父母工作原因，他们举

家搬迁，他也转学到了一所新的学校，但是他因为换了一个环境感到不太适应。回复一封邮件，内容须包

括：

1）分析导致他不适应的原因；

2）给他提出建议。

【答案】DearMike,

Iamsorrytohearthatyou'rehavingtroubleadjustingtoyourhighschoollife.Iunderstanditishardtoget

usedtoyournewschool.Actually,anyoneenteringastrangeenvironmentwillfeelconfusedandlonely.The

reaosnisthatwearefarawayfromourfamiliarsurroundings.Besides,wearenotsurewhetherwearepopularin

thenewschoolandwhetherournewclassmatesareeasytogetalongwith.However,youshouldnotworrytoo

muchaboutthese.

I'mwritingtoofferyousomeusefuladvice.Firstly,Irecommendthatyousignupforextra-curricularactivities,

whichcanhelpyoumakemorenewfriends.Inthiswayyouwon'tfeellonelyandyourschoollifewillbecome

colorfulandinteresting.Secondly,youshouldmakeagoodscheduleandfocusonimprovingyourstudy.Asa

teenager,itisourresponsibilitytostudywell.Ihopemysuggestionswillbesuitableforyou.

Ihopeyoucanadaptquicklytothenewenvironment.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本书面表达属于应用文写作。要求回复笔友邮件，分析他不适应新学校的原因并提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

适应：adjustto—>adaptto

止匕夕卜：besides—whafsmore

确定的：sure-certain

建议：advice一suggestion

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Actually,anyoneenteringastrangeenvironmentwillfeelconfusedandlonely.

拓展句：Actually,anyonewhoentersastrangeenvironmentwillfeelconfusedandlonely.

【点睛】【高分句型11Iamsorrytohearthatyou'rehavingtroubleadjustingtoyourhighschoollife.（运用了

that引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]Irecommendthatyousignupforextra-curricularactivities,whichcanhelpyoumakemorenew

friends.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

4.（2023•上海•模拟预测）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

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instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim要在暑假来沪旅游，有人给他推荐了两个旅游主

题供他选择:“文化上海”或“摩登上海”。Jim来信希望你能给他一些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括:

1.你推荐的旅游主题；

2.你推荐该主题的理由。

【答案】onepossibleversion:

DearJim,

I'mgladtohearthatyouaregoingtomakeatriptoShanghai.Ihighlyrecommendthatyouchoose'"Cultural

Shanghai^^asyourtraveltheme.

Firstofall,Shanghaiisanimmigrantcitywithalonghistory,reflectingtheintegrationofChineseand

Westerncultures.Here,youcannotonlylearnabouttheearlyShanghaiculture,butalsolearnabouttheunique

ShanghaiculturewithWesternstyle.Besides,Shanghaialsohasmanyfolkcustoms,whichnotonlyenrichthe

culturalheritageofShanghai,butalsoattractmanyoverseastouriststocometoappreciateandexperiencethem.

Lastbutnotleast,manysnacksinShanghaiarealsoveryfamous.Amongthem,XiaolongBaoandShengJian

Baorepresentthebestfoodcultureandflavor,whichisalsooneoftheculturalcharacteristicsofShanghai.

IhopeyoucanenjoyyourselfandlearnmoreaboutShanghai.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友约翰写信邀请他周末看电影，表示对他给予你的

帮助的感谢。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad—pleased

建议：recommend一suggest

止匕夕卜：besides一what'smore

著名的：famous-well-known

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Firstofall,Shanghaiisanimmigrantcitywithalonghistory,reflectingtheintegrationofChineseand

Westerncultures.

拓展句：Firstofall,Shanghaiisanimmigrantcitywithalonghistory,whichreflectstheintegrationofChinese

andWesterncultures.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Here,youcannotonlylearnabouttheearlyShanghaiculture,butalsolearnaboutthe

uniqueShanghaiculturewithWesternstyle.（运用了notonly...butalso...连接两个并列结构）

【高分句型2】Amongthem,XiaolongBaoandShengJianBaorepresentthebestfoodcultureandflavor,which

isalsooneoftheculturalcharacteristicsofShanghai.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）

5.（2023•上海•南洋中学校考三模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

学校大力推进劳动教育，打算开辟校园农场组织学生进行果蔬花卉种植实践。假设你是校学生会干部李华，

负责老师Helen委托你了解同学们对此项活动的看法。经了解，你发现有些同学缺乏种植经验，不敢尝试；

有些学生担心种植成果没有实用价值，兴趣不大。请你写封信给Helen

1.反映同学们的想法；

2.提出建议并说明理由。

【答案】DearHelen,

Asforthepracticalactivityoffruit,vegetableandflowerplantingorganizedbythecampusfarm,after

investigation,Ifoundthatsomestudentslackedplantingexperienceanddarednottryit.Somestudentsarenot

interestedbecausetheyareworriedthattheplantingresultshavenopracticalvalue.

Inviewofthesephenomena,Iwouldliketoputforwardsomeideasofmyown.Firstofall,weshoulddoa

goodjobintheearlypublicityandmobilizationwork.Letstudentsknowthemeaningandvalueofthisactivity.

Secondly,letthestudentsknowtheinformationoffruits,vegetablesandflowersthroughvariouschannels,and

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understandtheappearance,growingenvironmentandprocessofthecrops.Finally,itisbesttouseourlocalplant

material.Inthisway,studentscanincreasetheirinterest,theirconfidence,andactuallylearnsomething.

Abovearesomeofmysuggestions.Ihopeouractivitieswillbeasuccess.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，学校大力推进劳动教育，打算开辟校园农场组织学生进行果蔬花卉种

植实践。假设你是校学生会干部李华，负责老师Helen委托你了解同学们对此项活动的看法。经了解，你

发现有些同学缺乏种植经验，不敢尝试；有些学生担心种植成果没有实用价值，兴趣不大。请你写封信给

Helen,反映同学们的想法；提出建议并说明理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

调查：investigation一inquiry

担心的：worried—>concemed

了解：know-learn

成功：beasuccess=besuccessful

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Finally,itisbesttouseourlocalplantmaterial.Inthisway,studentscanincreasetheirinterest,their

confidence,andactuallylearnsomething.

拓展句：Finally,itisbesttouseourlocalplantmaterial,becauseinthisway,studentscanincreasetheirinterest,

theirconfidence,andactuallylearnsomething.

【点睛1[高分句型1]Somestudentsarenotinterestedbecausetheyareworriedthattheplantingresultshaveno

practicalvalue.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句和that引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]Ihopeouractivitieswillbeasuccess.（运用了省略that引导的宾语从句和抽象名词具体化）

6.（2023春•上海•高三校联考阶段练习）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingto

theinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假如你是明启中学的高三学生李华，你的班级将要组织高考倒计时100天的主题班会，班长正在征集主题

班会活动方案，请你给班长写封邮件，内容须包括：

1.活动流程及理由；

2.需要做哪些准备。

【答案】Inordertostimulatestudents5enthusiasmforlearningandcultivatetheirself-confidence,ourclasswill

holdaclassmeetingwiththethemeof100dayscountdowntotheCollegeEntranceExamination.NowIwould

liketointroducemyclassmeetingactivityplanasfollows.

First,ourheadteacherwillgiveanopeningspeech,explainingthepurposeandsignificanceoftheclass

meeting.Afterthat,thesong“MyFutureisnotaDream^^isplayedtocreateaclassatmosphere.Thenitis

arrangedthatthestudentswilltalkabouttheirgoalsandhowtospendthenext100days.Finally,everyonewill

takeacollectiveoathtostimulatethepassionoflearning.

Inaddition,beforetheclassmeeting,studentsshouldpreparethelyricsof“Myfutureisnotadream^^andthe

contentoftheirspeech.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一个以高考倒计时100天的主题的班会课活动方案，其中

包括活动流程及原因以及需要做的准备。

【详解】1.词汇积累

激励：stimulate一motivate

方案：plan一scheme

目标：goal一aim

止匕夕卜：inaddition—whafsmore

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Inordertostimulatestudents5enthusiasmforlearningandcultivatetheirself-confidence,ourclasswillhold

aclassmeetingwiththethemeof100dayscountdowntotheCollegeEntranceExamination.

拓展句：Inordertostimulatestudents5enthusiasmforlearningandcultivatetheirself-confidence,ourclasswill

holdaclassmeetingwhosethemeis100dayscountdowntotheCollegeEntranceExamination.

［点睛］［高分句型1］First,ourheadteacherwillgiveanopeningspeech,explainingthepurposeandsignificance

oftheclassmeeting.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）

【高分句型2］Thenitisarrangedthatthestudentswilltalkabouttheirgoalsandhowtospendthenext100days.

（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句）

7.（2023•上海崇明•统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

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假设你是明启中学高三学生徐晶，你校的英文报向即将毕业的高三学生征文，给高中三年来最值得你感谢

的一个人或一件事表达感谢。你有意投稿，内容包括：

A描述这个人或这件事；

»表达感谢，说明感谢的理由。

注：文中不得提及真实姓名或学校。

【答案】DearMs.Zhang,

I'mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyou.Youaretheverypersonwhogavemeahandwhen

necessary.

Onemonthago,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationaroundthecorner,Iwasnervousandinlowspirits,

beingafraidoflettingmyparentsdown.WhenIwasataloss,asmyheadteacher,youaskedmetogotoyour

office.Insteadofblamingme,youcomfortedmeanddiscussedwithmethereasonsformyfailingintheexam.

Moreunforgettably,youmanagedtohelpmewithmystudyandinspiredmefromtimetotime.

Ms.Zhang,I'mmorethangratefulforwhatyouhavedoneforme.Wishyouhappinessandgoodhealth.

Yours,

XuJing

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是明启中学高三学生徐晶，你校的英文报向即将毕业的高三学

生征文，给高中三年来最值得你感谢的一个人或一件事表达感谢。

【详解】1.词汇积累

感谢：gratitude^-appreciation

帮助：givesb.ahand一dosb.afavor

害怕的：afraid-scared

鼓励：inspire一encourage

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Onemonthago,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationaroundthecorner,Iwasnervousandinlowspirits,

beingafraidoflettingmyparentsdown.

拓展句：Onemonthago,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationaroundthecorner,Iwasnervousandinlow

spiritsbecauseIwasafraidoflettingmyparentsdown.

［点睛］［高分句型1］Youaretheverypersonwhogavemeahandwhennecessary.（运用了who弓|导的定语从

句和when的省略句）

［高分句型2］Onemonthago,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationaroundthecorner,Iwasnervousandinlow

spirits,beingafraidoflettingmyparentsdown.（运用了with的复合结构和现在分词作状语）

8.（2023・上海・上海中学校考模拟预测）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingto

theinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校英语报正在进行主题为“如何应对压力”的征文，你有意参加，写一

篇短文，内容须包括：

1）你对如何应对压力的建议；

2）用具体的事例说明这一建议的有效性。

【答案】Psychologisttellusthatstressisastateofworrycausedbytheprobleminlife,suchastoomuchworkor

study,heavyresponsibilities,andquickenedpaceoflife.Ithinktherearelotsofthingswecandotosolvethese

problems.

Asweknow,musicisthemostbeautifullanguageintheworld.Ithinkit'shelpfultolistentosomemusicwhen

weareundertoomuchpressure.Itwillmakeusforgetallourproblemsandrecallsomegoodmemories.Orwe

couldreadsomejokesandaburstoflaughterhelpsalot.Besides,doingsportsisanothergreatwaytodealwith

theproblems.It'snotonlygoodforourhealthbutalsoourmood.Havingworkedout,wewillfeelverytired

physically,whichhelpsustofallfastasleepandhaveagoodsleep.WhenIfailedthelastexaminJuniorschool,

stressbegantomount.Iwasinlowspiritsandcouldn'tconcentrate.Luckily,oneweekend,mybestfriendpulled

metothewood,wherewehikedandjoggedforthewholemorning.Sweatingthoroughly,andmountainsofload

gone,Ifeltconfidentaboutmyentranceexam.Last,wecantalkaboutourproblemswithourteachersorbest

friends,whomayhelpustogetoverit.

Inaword,everythingdependsonourattitude.Itisimportanttostayhappyallthetime,isn*tit?Themore

meaningfulthingswedo,thehappierwewillbe.

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【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文给校英语报进行的主题为“如何应对压力”的征文

比赛投稿。内容须包括：

1）对如何应对压力的建议；

2）用具体的事例说明这一建议的有效性。

【详解】1.词汇积累

压力：stress一pressure

止匕夕卜：besides一whafsmore/furthermore/additionally

情绪低落的：down-depressed/inlowspirits

增长：increase一accumulate/mount

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Besides,doingsportsisanothergreatwaytodealwiththeproblems.It'snotonlygoodforourhealthbut

alsoourmood.

拓展句：Besides,doingsportsisanothergreatwaytodealwiththeproblems,whichisnotonlygoodforour

healthbutalsoourmood.

【点睛X高分句型1JSweatingthoroughly,andmountainsofloadgone,Ifeltconfidentaboutmyentranceexam.

（运用了现在分词和独立主格结构作状语）

【高分句型2】Havingworkedout,wewillfeelverytiredphysically,whichhelpsustofallfastasleepandhavea

goodsleep.（运用了现在分词作状语及which引导的非限制性定语从句）

9.（2023春•上海•高三上海市建平中学校考开学考试）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150

wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

76.你是中学生李明，你所居住的小区（如图）有块常年闲置的空地;最近小区居委会（theresidents5committee）

向大家征集开发改造这片空地的建议，请给居委会主任写封信，你的信中必须包括：

1.你对空地的开发改造的具体建议；

2.你的理由

【答案】DeardirectoroftheResidents?Committee,

ThisisLiHua,amemberoftheResidents9Committee.Knowingthatthereisanopenspaceinourcommunity,

whichhasnotbeenproperlyplannedforalongtime,I'mwritingtogivesomeadviceonthedevelopmentand

renovationofthespacetoyou.

Personally,Iholdthebeliefthatabasketballcourtandatenniscourtcanbebuiltthere.Newplacesforsports

andexercisescannotonlyencourageourcommunitymemberstoworkoutregularlyandadopthealthierlifestyles,

butalsoserveasexcellentvenuesforfuturecommunityactivitiessuchassportsmeetings,whichwillpromotethe

constructionanddevelopmentofourcommunity.

IhopemysuggestionisusefulandI'dappreciateitifcouldtakeitintoconsideration.

Yours,

LiMing

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给小区居委会主任写封信，就小区常年闲置的一块空地提出

具体的开发改造建议，并说明理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累：

建议：advice一suggestion

鼓励、激励：encourage一inspire

锻炼：workout一takeexercise

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杰出的、卓越的：excellent-remarkable

2.句式拓展：

同义句转换：

原句：Knowingthatthereisanopenspaceinourcommunity,whichhasnotbeenproperlyplannedforalongtime,

I'mwritingtogivesomeadviceonthedevelopmentandrenovationofthespacetoyou.

拓展句：BecauseIknowthatthereisanopenspaceinourcommunity,whichhasnotbeenproperlyplannedfora

longtime,Tmwritingtogivesomeadviceonthedevelopmentandrenovationofthespacetoyou.

【点睛】【高分句型11Personally,Iholdthebeliefthatabasketballcourtandatenniscourtcanbebuiltthere.

（运用了以that引导的同位语从句和情态动词的被动语态。）

【高分句型2】Newplacesforsportsandexercisescannotonlyencourageourcommunitymemberstoworkout

regularlyandadopthealthierlifestyles,butalsoserveasexcellentvenuesforfuturecommunityactivitiessuchas

sportsmeetings,whichwillpromotetheconstructionanddevelopmentofourcommunity.（运用了notonly...but

also..连接两个并列谓语，及以关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句。）

10.（2023•上海虹口•统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

每年的4月23日为世界读书日。明启中学学生会为宣传该主题日，鼓励同学发掘阅读之乐，特向各个班

级征集海报。现有两份海报脱颖而出，进入最后的角逐。假设你是王磊，请给学生会写一封邮件表达你的

想法。你的邮件必须满足以下要求：

1.简要描述你选择的海报；

2.说明选择的理由。

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