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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwasadayjustlikeeveryotherday.IwokeupearlyinthemorningandwenttorunonMountGraciouswithmydog,Bubbles.AsIranupthemountain,withmydogfollowingclosebehind,Ifeltenergeticandrefreshed.Runninginanaturalenvironmentneverfailedtomakemefeelalive.WhenIreachedthetop,Idranksomewaterandenjoyedthebeautifulsunrise.Thisscenealwaystookmybreathaway,nomatterhowmanytimesIhadseenit.Havingrestedenough,BubblesandImadeourwaybackdownthemountain.Aswewererunningdownhill,Isawanunfamiliarpathanddecidedtoexplorethearea.Thepathwasfullofrocks.Itwasnoteasytowalk.Suddenly,Islippedonamuddypatch,rollingdownfivemetersbeforeImanagedtograbholdofanexposedrootofahugetree.Iwassafefornow.However,Iwasseriouslyinjured.Mykneeswerebadlyhurt.Myrightfootwasalsodislocated(脱臼).IknewforsureIwouldbeunabletomakemywayupordownthemountainwithouthelp.IcalledouttoBubblesandhebarkedloudlyfromabove.ItseemedlikeheunderstoodthatIneededhelp.Helookeddownatmepitifullybeforedisappearingfromsight.Asnightfell,panic(恐慌)setinandscarythoughtswentthroughmymind.ThereweremanythingsthatIhadgottodo.Icouldn'tdie!ThiswouldnothavehappenedifIhadstucktomyusualpath.IwaslosinghopewhenIheardbarking.ItwasBubbles.IrubbedmyeyesasIstruggledtokeepawake.Buttherewassilence.Whocoulditbe?WasIhallucinating(产生幻觉)?ThenIheardsomevoicesandmorebarking.Yes.Helpwasnear,Iknew.Icouldcountonmydogtogethelp.注意:1.续写词数应150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Soon,Iheardmyparentscallingmyname.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Later,myparentstoldmewhatBubbleshaddonetogethelp._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意文章讲述了“我”像往常一样带着狗狗Bubbles去MountGracious跑步,在到达山顶休息后下山途中,因探索一条陌生小路而滑倒受伤,无法自行上下山。狗狗Bubbles似乎明白“我”需要帮助,在“我”绝望之时,Bubbles带着人声和狗叫声再次出现,给“我”带来了希望。故事山分析开端:“我”清晨带Bubbles去MountGracious跑步,到达山顶欣赏日出后准备下山。发展:下山时“我”选择探索陌生小路,结果滑倒受伤,无法行动,Bubbles似乎明白情况,随后离开。高潮:夜晚降临,“我”陷入恐慌,在绝望之际听到Bubbles的叫声以及其他声音,意识到救援将至。结局:救援人员赶到救了“我”,后续揭示Bubbles为获得帮助所做的努力。伏笔以及在续写中的回应“我”与Bubbles关系亲密:续写中Bubbles积极寻找帮助,体现它对“我”的关心,回应了亲密关系。Bubbles离开去寻求帮助:后续Bubbles带着救援人员回来,证实它成功找到了帮助。“我”受伤严重无法自行下山:救援人员的到来解决了“我”的困境,对应受伤无法行动的伏笔。“我”后悔未走寻常路:可以在获救后反思,回应此伏笔,体现教训。夜晚降临“我”陷入恐慌:救援人员到来后恐慌解除,前后呼应。续写要点第一段:着重描写父母和救援人员到来后的场景,如父母的焦急神情、救援人员的救助过程,“我”的心理变化,从绝望到安心。第二段:详细讲述Bubbles为获得帮助所采取的行动,比如它如何回到家,怎样引起父母注意,是否有引导救援人员前往“我”所在位置等,展现狗狗的聪明与忠诚。情感线受伤后“我”从起初的冷静到夜晚的恐慌、绝望,在听到Bubbles叫声及救援声音时重燃希望,获救时感到安心与感激。父母从发现“我”未归的焦急,到看到“我”受伤的心疼,最后是对Bubbles的欣慰与赞赏。故事线父母和救援人员到达:父母呼喊“我”,救援人员展开救援,将“我”带下山。讲述Bubbles的行动:Bubbles跑回家,通过各种行为引起父母注意,带领救援人员找到“我”。“我”的获救过程:描述“我”被救助时的状态,被抬下山后的后续处理。家人的反应:父母看到“我”后的情绪表现,对Bubbles的夸赞。“我”的反思:“我”对此次冒险的反思,意识到不能随意偏离常规路线。对Bubbles的感谢:“我”和家人对Bubbles的感激,以及Bubbles与“我”关系的进一步升华。主旨升华句Intimesofcrisis,theloyaltyandintelligenceofouranimalcompanionscanbeatruelifesaver,remindingusofthedeepbondsweshare.在危机时刻,我们动物伙伴的忠诚和智慧真的能拯救生命,让我们想起彼此间深厚的情感纽带。Thisexperiencetaughtmethateveninthefaceofunexpecteddanger,hopecanemergefromthemostunlikelysources,liketheunwaveringdevotionofabelovedpet.这次经历让我明白,即使面对意外危险,希望也能从最意想不到的地方出现,比如心爱宠物坚定不移的付出。Ourpetsarenotjustanimals;theyarepartofourfamily,capableofheroicactswhenweareinneed,strengtheningtheconnectionbetweenhumansandanimals.我们的宠物不仅仅是动物,它们是我们家庭的一部分,在我们需要时能够做出英勇之举,强化了人类与动物之间的联系。ThroughBubbles'heroicefforts,Ilearnedthevalueoftrustandtheremarkableabilitiesofthoseweholddear,andIwillforeverbegratefulforhisloyalty.通过Bubbles的英勇努力,我明白了信任的价值以及我们所珍视之人的非凡能力,我将永远感激它的忠诚。Thisincidentservesasapowerfulreminderthatnaturecanbebothbeautifulandtreacherous,andtheloveandhelpfromourfurryfriendscanguideusthroughthedarkestoftimes.这件事有力地提醒我们,大自然既美丽又危险,而来自我们毛茸茸朋友的爱与帮助能引领我们度过最黑暗的时刻。写作示范第一篇

Soon,Iheardmyparentscallingmyname.Theirvoiceswerefilledwithanxiety.Itriedmybesttoshoutback,myvoicehoarsefromhoursofwaiting.Momentslater,Isawtheflashlightsoftherescueteam.Myparentsrushedtowardsme,theirfacesfullofworry.Therescuerscarefullyexaminedmyinjuriesandgentlyplacedmeonastretcher.Astheycarriedmedownthemountain,Ifeltasenseofreliefwashoverme.AllthefearandpanicIhadbeenfeelingdisappeared,replacedbygratitudeformyrescuersandmydeardog.

Later,myparentstoldmewhatBubbleshaddonetogethelp.Hehadrunallthewaybackhome,histonguehangingout.Whenhereachedthefrontdoor,hebarkednon-stop,scratchingatthedoorfrantically.Myparents,alarmedbyhisunusualbehavior,openedthedoor.Bubblesimmediatelygrabbedmyrunningshoesinhismouthandranout,lookingbackasifurgingthemtofollow.Heledthemstraighttotheparkrangers'office.Withthehelpoftherangers,theywereabletofindme.IwasdeeplytouchedbyBubbles'actions.Fromthatdayon,ourbondgrewevenstronger.

第二篇

Soon,Iheardmyparentscallingmyname.TearswelledupinmyeyesasIshoutedforthem.Therescueteamquicklylocatedme.Mymotherrushedtomyside,cryingwithrelief,whilemyfatherthankedtherescuers.Therescuerscarefullybandagedmywoundsonthespotandthenslowlycarriedmedownthemountain.Iwassogratefultobesafeandinthearmsofmyfamily.

Later,myparentstoldmewhatBubbleshaddonetogethelp.Hesprintedhomeasfastashislegscouldcarryhim.Oncehome,hejumpedonmyparents'bed,barkingloudlyandtuggingatthecovers.Whentheywokeup,confused,Bubblesrantothedoor,barkinginsistently.Myparents,realizingsomethingwaswrong,followedhim.Heledthemtoaneighborwhooftenwenthikingandknewthemountainwell.Theneighborcalledtheparkrangers,andtogethertheysetouttofindme.IwasamazedathowintelligentanddeterminedBubbleswas.Thisexperiencemademecherishhimevenmore.【答案】Onepossibleversion:Soon,Iheardmyparentscallingmyname.SoIbegancallingback.Amomentlater,Isawthelightofaflashlight.FollowingmyvoiceandwithBubblesleadingtheway,myparentsfinallyfoundme.Theylookednervousandworried.AfterlearningIwasbadly

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