托福作文中的“良性建议模块”模板

良性建议模块1.类型特点should话题(良性建议类)题型特点：若要得到美好结果/避免大的问题，就应当…Tip1要解决的问题往往庞大复杂Tip2解决方案通常片面甚至偏激（二合为一，复杂问题被简化）Tip3解决方案可行性有时欠佳(质疑可行性)Tip4建议或解决方案不设上限（如果过多会很严重）Tip5解决方案通常无效（unwarrantedevendangerous）思路#先让步—--这样有一定道理(有保留，含蓄)限制级合理性(HeadingorBody1) --relatively --somewhat --tosomeextent--insomecases,… --oncertainoccasions,…--undercertaincircumstances,合理性源于目标的速求，解释目标（从what—--待达成/解决的目标本身发掘理由）--whatisculture--whatisnationalgovernment--whatisleader--whatistradition--whatiseducation得出复杂※因为…很复杂（大）--complicated --tough --sophisticated 因此有理所以这样做有一定道理—strategy--channel渠道--solution--awayout*Modeforheading—Proposal因为艰难所以有所需!asisknowtoall…Inrecentyears,…istough/difficult/serioustoapointwherepeoplecannottackleitwithease,whichmakes…beproposedasasolution.+Inweighingupboththeprospectivebenefitsandpotentialrisks,however,Ireckonthat题目中的解决方案,asmanyothersimplesolutionstosomemostcomplicatedproblems,wouldbeawkwardinservingasakey.*Modesforbody#再反对—质疑解决方案的可行性良性建议，首先可行性--isthatfeasible?※thefeasibilityof…isopentoquestion※the…/inheritednatureofsuchasolution/proposal/suggestionposessomeproblemsthathinder…theblueprintof…frombeingconvertedintoreality※the…/inheritednatureofsuchasolution/proposal/suggestionposessomeproblemsthatmakesuchaproposalrestontheblueprint+可能出现的矛盾！理论对实践最常见的不可行原因Theoreticallysoundedas…/itis,inpracticetheimpedimentsthatareexpectedtoencounter,suchasA,B,CandD（可能出现的阻碍）,arefatalelementsthatmakethefeasibilityofthissuggestedsolutionvulnerabletoanypossiblechallengeorquestion.************************************************************************** 短期vs长远：Atpresent/Inshortterm,…mightbeeffective,whileinthelongrun,itwouldturnouttobedisastrous.单一vs多样：1.Itwouldbeabigheadache/Itwouldbealmostamissionimpossibleforwithdiversifiedtoachieve/sustain/followcertaincommon.../asingle...2．Itwouldbeagreatmisleadingtotrytodefinewhichfeaturesinmanyformsandispossibletoalterundermanyrealitieswithmerelyone简单vs复杂Themostcomplicated…whichinvolves/requires/demandsacombinationofalleffortsislargelydegraded/simplifiedto...不变vs万变Insomecases,/oncertainoccasions,...mightbeeffective/beneficial,whileundermanyothercircumstances,...runstheriskofmessingup/driving...toadeadend理论vs实践Theoretically,...isacceptable,/issounded,whileinpractice,/inreality,itwouldbeawkwardinservingasakey/itwouldmakethingsworseoffratherthanbringingbenefits.**************************************************************************+/单一对多样+Eg.引出例子…,forexample,…#thecaseof…/thepersonalexperienceof…canserveasanexample/evidencethatcansubstantiate/solidify/bolster/supportmyclaim(that…) “半分离”式的例子，下面在简单说一下上面“简单”提到的例子#…lendcrediblesupporttotheclaimthat(thefeasibility/viabilityTosumup,+thepredictableuncertaintiesandtroublesbroughtaboutby…faroutweightheopportunitiesandpossiblesolutionsitmightoffer.+Whatismore,it'sessentialforuniversities…偏倚话题A>B模块组Aismore…thanB话题A>B(偏倚)表述emphasizevsemphasisanalyzeanalysisadviseadvice*placemoreemphasisonA,ratherthanB*moreemphasisshouldbeplacedonA,ratherthanB*AovershadowsB*AoutweighsB=BisoutweighedbyA*AshouldbegivenmoreprecedenceoverB/WeshouldgiveAmoreprecedenceoverBHeading豪华加强版1@凸显主题，体现侧重@深思熟虑@我的立场@凸显主题，体现侧重Inrecentyears,/Atpresent,#Onceconcerning…!Asfaras…isconcerned,…#Insenseof….#Asisoftenthecase,…#Underthecontextof…,*AismuchemphasizedtoapointwhereBisovershadowed.@深思熟虑*Intakingvariousfactorsintoconsideration,*Intakingvariousfactorsintoaccount,*Inweighingupboththeprospectivebenefitsandpotentialrisks,@我的立场Tolargeextent,however,IsideontheoppositeoftheclaimthatAoutweighsB. replaces/takestheplaceofB+--why?+--Option1—厚此薄彼*intertwine相辅相成*playrespectiveindispensablerolesin各得其所Asamatteroffact,*theformerandthelatterareintertwinedelementsthatareplayingrespectiveindispensablerolesin….//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////--Option2—你死我活AvsBA—exist+B—exist=co-exist*共存原则harmony—harmonious#AandBcanco-existinaharmoniousway/manner#AandBarenot2mutuallyexclusivematters.#AandBarecompatibleAandBarenot2mutuallyexclusivematters.Asamatteroffact,theformerandthelattercanco-existinaharmoniousway.豪华加强版2HeadingY+O+NYes让步Incaseof…,Insenseof…,Underthecontextof…,Infacing…,Onceconcerning…,+#wealwayshaveastrongertendencyindoing/turningtoA#wealwaystendtodoA+Although….,adj.+thoughn./itis,…adj.+as+n./itis,…*IndispensablethoughA/itisinservingaschannelsolutionstrategytobeachieved,a/anapproachthroughwhich…isexpectedtobeaccomplished,referencetobeenhanced,evidence

record+Other不可忽视--*overshadowitcannever*overshadowthesignificanceoftheother…Thereisnopointtoovershadow/overlookthesignificanceof…No这种倾斜有害+Whatismore,theclaim/solutioninwhich…isoveremphasizedwithlittleconsiderationoveranyaltersinsituationorenvironmentwillinevitablyruntheriskofmessingup…driving…toadeadend.经济简化版Heading1.IsAin…moreimportantthanB?Insomecases,itsoundsreasonable.outweighs+Inmyview,however,thisclaimsuffersfrommanycriticalflawsthatmakeitunconvincingasitstands.2.…Intakingvariousfactorsintoaccount/consideration,Isideontheoppositeoftheclaimthat…andreckonthatbothAandBserveasindispensable…in….ing….BodyStrategy:#优先且重点关照B(A>B)#证明B重要－为B存在－AforB－B是标准－BguideA－B可以带来什么？Steps1先让步，关照A—indispensable2挽救被轻视的B—B重要3再冲击联系，othersshouldnotbeovershadowed4如此侧重，效果不好,危害巨大：找漏洞—简单vs复杂单一vs多样僵化vs发展眼前vs长远理论vs实践CS1让步Yes:A不可或缺—限制级Asisoftenthecase,Inmanycases,undermanycircumstances,--*indispensableAsisoftenthecase,/inmanycases,…isacceptedastheoneofmostapproved/effectiveways/meansfor….to….…isacceptedasamainstream(media/influence)for…to… …isregardedasoneofthemostconvincingreferencesfor…to…+why?—advantages优势+consequences好处advantages:限制级relatively,forthereasonthat..,onthegroundthat…feasiblewiderrangeofinfluence …profoundinfluencesystematicconsequences:Inthissense,Inthiscase,*限制级tosomeextent,,it/which,tocertain/largeextent,contributestospeedingup…fueling…enhancingtheefficiencyof…streamliningandoptimizing…CS2B重要AforBEachstepinvolvedinAisdesignedforBsegmentbornPart/Theverymeaningoftheexistenceof….liesin….+Bguide/testAAsisoftenthecase,Bservesasanultimatestandardwhichguides/directseachsegment/allaspectsofA/整体+TheeffectivenessandefficiencyofA/整体canbetestedbyB.TheaccurateandobjectivedefinitiontowardsA/整体canbejustifiedbyB+Bservesasanindispensablereferencewithwhich…cangain/keepanobjectiveviewover…Bservesasanindispensablereferencewithwhichwecangainabetterunderstandingabout….+theabsenceofBwillinevitablywaste…+WhatcanBbringusItisBthatguarantee….狡猾的让步—继续突出BAdmittedly,onoccasionthat….,theprominenceshouldbegiventoA,butB,tolargeextent,isalsoquiteeffective inspeedingupthedevelopmentofA/整体infuelingadvanceAdmittedly,onoccasionthat….,Aisjustifiedtoenjoypriority(in…),butB,tolargeextent,isalsoprovedtobeeffectiveinstreamlining…optimizing…CS3No其他的…不可忽视Inaddition,thereisnopointtoclaimthatgivingprecedence/prominenceto…servesasthe*exclusiveprerequisitefor…*重要因素*Manyfactors/solutions/strategies/possibilitiesaresignificantelementsthatshouldnotbeoverlooked.+why?为什么有+what是些什么+很重要Why?#因为科技的推动(其它影响力，其它渠道/方案)!Withtherapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnology…#因为社会/历史…的复杂多样（其它证据）anincreasingnumberoftheincreasing…Theadvancinghistoryleavesusanincreasinglysophisticatedsocietywhichfeaturesinamixtureofdiversifiedevidences.+Somefactors/possibilities/solutions/approachessuchasA,B,CandDarealsoindispensableelementsthatplaycrucial/key/decisiverolesin…CS4这种倾斜有害for建议类Itwouldbeunwarranted,sometimesevendangeroustorelyon/counton/expect…alwayseffectiveinservingasakeywithouttakinganypossiblechangesintoconsideration.for结论类Itwouldbeinaccurate,sometimesevenmisleadingtoprimarilyrelyon/counton/expect…asthemainsourceofreferenceforustolearn/know/understand/define…,asitstands,candoonlypartofthejobcantelljustpartofthestory.针对侧重点，质疑效用--突出问题复杂性the…(整体/大局)isacomplicated/sophisticatedproblem/system/work/projectthatcannotpossiblybetackledachievedaccomplishedbyprimarilycountingon…..，whichrunstheriskofrealizedfulfilledjeopardizingwastingboththe…ofindividual…andthesystem/industry.messingupbe话题（判断，结论类）▽题型特点：…是/不是 …好／不好 …起着积极，消极作用／影响…理解…/判断…主要靠…（东西／途径／标准）*先让步—有道理（层面，部分，情形）HeadingInrecentyears,theissueofXthevalueofXtheinfluenceofXissomuchconcernedtoapointwhereawidediscussionhasbeenaroused.SomepeopleholdthatitisXthatisadj.itisYthatcanserveastheultimatedefinitionforX+Intakingvariousfactorsintoconsideration,tolargeextent,however,Isideontheoppositeandreckonthatthisconclusion/claim/assumptionistoovaguetobeinformative/representative.#What’sthat?(好处,重要性，不可避免)#Whatcanitbringus?(positiveinfluence)--有条件的（留余地）

…isrelatively…

…issomewhat…

…cansomewhat…

…canlargely…

…,tocertain/someextent,…

Insomecases,…is/can…

undercertaincircumstances,…is/can

oncertainoccasions,...is/can*再反对—质疑定义、概括的唯一性#ultimate—really?#best—really?#must—really?#AisB—really?…isnotnecessarily….thereisnopointtoassert/say/concludethat…--冲击定义和解决方案间的联系otherfactors/possibilities/sourcesofinfluence※significantsourceofinfluenceevidencequalitystandardfactorthough…is,itcanneverovershadow/omitmanyotherfactors/possibilities※Somefactors/possibilitiessuchasA,B,CandDaresignificantfactorsthatshouldnotbeoverlooked.※SomefactorssuchasA,B,CandDarealsoindispens