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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Thehomemadebookbagwasplacedacrossmybed.Itappearedtohavetakenovertheentireroom.Iknewthatmymomhadspentalldayhappilysewingasshepicturedmeproudlywalkingfromclasstoclasswithitovermyshoulder.ThenextdayIwastostartseventhgradeatanewschool,inanewstate,inthemiddleoftheschoolyear.Iwasnervousandexcited.ThatfirstdayatschoolIheardthewhispers.“Haveyouseenthenewgirl?She’sfromCalifornia.Didyouseethatbigbag?”Thenthereweregiggles(咯咯笑).BecauseIstartedschoolinthemiddleoftheyear,allofthelockershadbeenassignedtootherkids.Therewasnoextralockeravailableforme,soIwasforcedtocarryallmystuffaroundintheoversizedbag.WildstoriesflewbackandforthaboutwhatIkeptinthebagthatneverleftmyside.Drugs?Somekidswondered.Clothes?Isshehomeless?Therewasnothinginterestinginthatbag,justmycoatduringcoldweather,schoolbooks,papersandpens.Eventually,moststudentsprettymuchignoredme,butsomeofthekidsmadefunofmybag.Peoplegrabbedatit,pretendedtotreatitlikeadogandtriedtodroplitterintoit.Myteachersdidn’tseemtonotice,probablybecauseIdidn’teverplainoraskforhelp.Astheyearprogressed,Istartedtohatethatbag.Iblamedallmyproblemsonit.Ifelthelpless,aloneandhomesickforCaliforniaandmyoldfriends.Onedaytowardtheendoftheschoolyear,mymathteacherassignedeachstudentapartnertoworkwithonwordproblems.IwastoldtoworkwithDebbie,apopulargirlwhowasinseveralofmyclasses.Shesmiledandwavedmeovertowardherdesk,soIgrabbedmybagandquietlymovedtowardher.AsIsatdown,IrealizedthatIhadneverspokentoherbefore.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。“So,what’sinthebag?"Debbieaskedloudlywithasmile.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThenDebbiestartedtolaugh,notatme,butatthesituation.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________书包的故事续写续写要点第一段:重点描写“我”回答黛比问题后的反应以及黛比的后续表现。可以写黛比在听到回答后,没有嘲笑“我”,而是流露出理解和友善的神情,可能还会和“我”分享她对书包的看法或自己类似的经历,让“我”感到意外和温暖。第二段:主要写黛比的笑声对周围氛围的影响以及“我”的内心变化。比如她的笑声吸引了周围同学的注意,同学们围过来,在黛比的带动下,大家对“我”和书包的态度发生转变,“我”也不再那么自卑和抵触书包,开始以平和的心态面对。情感线从一开始“我”因书包被嘲笑而产生的自卑、无助和对书包的厌恶,到黛比询问时“我”的紧张、戒备,再到黛比展现出友善和理解后“我”的意外与感动,最后在黛比的笑声和同学们态度转变的氛围下,“我”变得释然、轻松,感受到了温暖和接纳,情感由消极转为积极。故事线新学校新环境,“我”因独特书包被同学嘲笑,产生负面情绪。数学老师安排“我”与黛比合作,这是故事的转折点。黛比主动询问书包内容,打破了“我”与同学之间的隔阂。黛比没有嘲笑“我”,而是理解“我”,并分享自己的经历,让“我”感到温暖。黛比的笑声吸引了周围同学,大家围过来,气氛变得融洽。在大家的友好氛围中,“我”不再讨厌书包,心态发生转变,与同学们的关系也得到改善。主旨升华句Fromthisexperience,Ilearnedthatasimpleactofkindnesscanbreakdownbarriersandbringwarmthtoothers.(从这次经历中,我明白了一个简单的善举可以打破隔阂,给他人带来温暖。)Thepoweroffriendshipissogreatthatitcanturnadifficultsituationintoabeautifulmemory.(友谊的力量是如此强大,它能将困境变成美好的回忆。)Don'tjudgeothersbytheirappearanceorpossessions,foryouneverknowwhat'sintheirhearts.(不要以貌取人或根据别人的财物来评判他人,因为你永远不知道他们的内心是怎样的。)Sometimes,asinceresmileandafriendlywordareenoughtolightupsomeoneelse'sworld.(有时候,一个真诚的微笑和一句友好的话就足以照亮他人的世界。)Thisincidenttaughtmethatweshouldbebraveenoughtofaceourfearsandinsecurities,andthatunderstandingandacceptancefromotherscangiveusthestrengthtodoso.(这件事教会了我,我们应该勇敢地面对自己的恐惧和不安,而他人的理解和接纳能给我们这样做的力量。)写作示范示范一“So,what’sinthebag?"Debbieaskedloudlywithasmile.Iblushed,hesitatedforamomentandthenrepliedinalowvoice,“Justsomeordinarythings,nothingspecial.”Debbielookedatmeandsaid,“Ithoughttheremightbesomecoolstuff.Youknow,Iusedtohaveabagthatwasabitstrangetoo.Everyonemadefunofit,butIjustignoredthem.”Herwordsmademefeelalittlemorerelaxed.ThenDebbiestartedtolaugh,notatme,butatthesituation.“Haha,wewereallsosillytocaresomuchaboutthesethings,”shesaid.Herlaughterwassoinfectiousthatsomeclassmatesnearbyalsocameover.Debbietoldthemaboutourconversation,andtheyallsmiledatme.Suddenly,Ididn'tfeelsoembarrassedanymore.IrealizedthatmaybeIhadbeentoosensitive.Fromthatdayon,Ibecamemoreconfidentandmademanynewfriends.ThebagthatIusedtohatedidn'tseemsoannoyinganymore.示范二“So,what’sinthebag?"Debbieaskedloudlywithasmile.Iwasstillabitnervousandrepliedquickly,“Justschoolthingsandmycoat.”Debbienoddedandsaid,“Oh,Isee.Ithoughtitwassomethingreallyinteresting.Youknow,wewereallcuriousaboutyourbag.”Shethenbegantotalkabouthoweveryoneintheclasshadtheirownuniquethings,andthat'swhatmadeusallspecial.Herwordswerelikearayofsunshine,shiningintomygloomyheart.ThenDebbiestartedtolaugh,notatme,butatthesituation.“Weshouldhavetalkedaboutthisearlierinsteadofmakingwildguesses,”shesaid,stilllaughing.Herlaughtermadetheatmosphereintheclassroommuchmorerelaxed.Otherstudentsjoinedinandstartedtosharetheirownstoriesaboutstrangethingsintheirbags.Ifoundmyselflaughingalongwiththem,andforthefirsttime,IfeltlikeIwasreallyapartoftheclass.Thebag,whichhadbeenasourceoftroubleforme,nowbecameasymbolofmynewbeginninginthisschool.参考答案"So,whatisinthebag?"Debbieaskedloudlywithasmile.Herquestionwasthelaststrawtobreakmedown.Faceblushingred,Idumpedthebagonthetableandgrumbledinachokingvoice,"Nothin
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