2025届新高考英语冲刺复习 读后续写专题之亲情

2025届新高考英语冲刺复习

读后续写之亲情立中心阿甘正传(个人成长类)从挫折中站起来的励志故事:毅力perseverence坚持persistence耐心patience梦想dream/ambition/goal决心determination家有儿女(与家人朋友宠物之间关系)和谐harmony

有爱love

温暖warmth

感动touch雷锋故事(好人好事)助人为乐helpful被帮助者的感恩gratitude奥特曼/汪汪队(危险中的救助)保持冷静keepcalm勇敢brave抗争struggle/fight胜利得救managetobesaved四部电影教会你立中心亲情无价亲情类题材的续写1.通常包含父母之恩、子女之牵挂、兄弟姐妹之情、夫妻之爱、家人之鼓励、长辈之关爱等内容2.也有可能涉及误会、犯错、理念不合等导致亲人之间的冲突的，需要通过解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等来化解矛盾，用感恩、温暖、珍惜亲情、触动心灵等进行主题升华。续写第一步：读快读准侦探式阅读1.分析所给两段首句内容，获得文章内容提示2.段首句中不懂部分，去文章中寻找答案带着问题有目的去阅读（5W1H)P1:

Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.P2:

Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Possiblequestions:Whydidweforgetthebrand-newtent?

whathappenedyesterday?Whatdoes“we”referto?Wheredidwego?AvacationwithmymotherIhadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmymother—loving,sweet,andyetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecksMomhadforgotten.DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:“Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout(放哨)whileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections(反对).Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorsteps,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldisasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph1:

Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.____________________________________________Paragraph2:

Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.___________________________________________Avacationwithmymother Ihadaninterestingchildhood:Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmymother-loving,sweet,andyetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.原文分析标题作用：直观引起主题惊讶和快乐的童年健忘的妈妈 MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecksMomhadforgotten.原文分析我和父母出去旅游。妈妈健忘的具体事件。 DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:”YoustandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.原文分析讲述妈妈经常忘事的烦恼。 Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections.Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorsteps,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.原文分析好不容易找到了旅馆。在旅途趣事中的亲情和爱人与社会人物分析情节发展主题语境

主旨

续写第二步：立中心Westartedourjourneydrivingtovisitourgrandparents.

unhappyWehadtoreturnedhomeandthendroveoffagain.fearfulWehadtroublefindingavacancytospendthenight.worried续写部分续写部分续写第三步：

析情节本文情节线setting环境risingaction发展fallingaction结局climax高潮爸爸妈妈带着我和David开车去祖父母外祖父母家。由于妈妈健忘，我们出发后又回来取钱包。我们没有找到有空房的旅馆。妈妈提议露营，爸爸拒绝了妈妈的提议，我们松了一口气。resolution解决ending尾声续写部分续写部分本文情感线setting环境risingaction发展fallingaction结局climax高潮andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhen...DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.resolution解决ending尾声续写部分续写部分点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。续写第四步：情节构建14故事类型矛盾转折式(给出/没给出需要写出来)3个词：矛盾

转变诱因

转变

(起因过程结果)注意：不要负面太多，不要写大吵大闹打架直线上升式

4个词：行动

进展

结果

升华(起因过程结果)

历年高考英语读后续写真题分析Paragraph1Paragraph1：

Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.起因：妈妈提议宿营。我们同意。过程：我们找到了宿营地，妈妈却忘了带枕头。结果：没有枕头睡在了帐篷里。Paragraph2Paragraph2：

Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.起因+过程：沿路美好风景结尾：到了目的地中心：看到的风景和可爱的妈妈模版构思Paragraph1:妈妈提议宿营(情绪+语言模版)我们的回应（连动动作模版）我们找到了宿营地（情节推进）妈妈又忘了东西（对话模版）Paragraph2:美丽的风景（延展句子：概述+例子模版)结尾（情节推进）中心（notonlybutalso并列模版）Paragraph1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.1.妈妈提议宿营(情绪+语言模版)Withathrilledlook,Mominsistedthatweshouldmakefulluseofitandfindanicecampingplace.2.我们的回应（动作模版）DavidandIlookedatDad,whosmiledandnoddedinagreement.3.我们找到了宿营地（情节推进）Thenwespentawholeafternoonseekinganicecampingplaceandfinallysetupourtentbeforenightfell.4.妈妈又忘了东西（对话模版）“Oh,Iforgotthepillows!”Momscreamed.Withacomfortingsmileonhisface,dadsuggestedthatwesleepinthetentwithoutpillowsforanightandperhapswecouldanunforgettablenight.Paragraph2:Wedrove