读后续写-以爱之名家务与机票里的深情+讲义 高二下学期开学英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Niallwasa10-year-oldboywhoenjoyedtheoutdoors.Hewasfondofparksandnaturetrailsandwassavingupforanewbikehecoulduseforhisoutdooradventures.Onedayafterschool,Niallcheckedtherefrigeratorforsomeleftovers.Hewasveryhungryafterspendingtheearlyafternoonplayingfootballwithhisfriends.HenoticedhismomLinda’sto-doliststuckontherefrigeratordoor.“Preparedinner,washthedishes，mowthelawn(修剪草坪),watertheplants，dothelaundry,cleanthehouse...”Niallreadthelist.Herealizedhismomwouldonlybeabletogotobedatoneo’clockinthemorningifshewantedtoaccomplisheverything.Andshehadtowakeupatfivetopreparebreakfastforbothofthembeforeschoolandwork.“Oh,Mom,’’Niallsighed.Hewassadthathismotherhadtoworkhardbecauseshewasraisinghimasasinglemother.Withouthesitation,hequicklyfinishedhismealanddecidedtohelpwiththehouseworkonhismom’slistintwohoursbeforeshecamehome.Niallfirstcleanedtheflooranddidthelaundry.Thenhewenttohismom’sroomtoputthefoldedclothesinthecloset,wherehesawabeautifulcard.Itwashismother’sbucketlist.Niallfoundhertopwishwastoflytoawhitesandbeachalone.Theboysmiled.Heknewhowmuchshelovedgoingtothebeachandhowmuchshehaddevotedtothefamily.Inspired,Nialldecidedtousethemoneyhehadsavedtobuyaplaneticketforhismom.Hecouldaskhisgrandmatoteachhimhowtobookaflight.Heimaginedhowhappyhismomwouldbewhenhehandedherthatticket.Smiling,Niallquicklyplacedtheclothesinsidethecloset.Therewerestillmanyotherchores—likemowingthelawn—thatneededtobedone.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Thenhehurrieddownstairstodothem.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Assistedbyhisgrandma,Niallsecretlyboughthismomaplaneticket.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意10岁的尼奥热爱户外活动，正存钱买新自行车。一天放学后，他看到身为单亲妈妈的妈妈琳达列在冰箱门上的待办事项清单，发现妈妈要忙到凌晨一点才能完成所有家务，第二天还得早起为两人准备早餐。尼奥心疼妈妈，决定在妈妈回家前两小时帮她做家务。他先打扫地板、洗衣服，在妈妈房间放衣服时，看到了妈妈的愿望清单，得知妈妈最想去白色沙滩独自旅行。尼奥深受触动，决定用自己存的钱给妈妈买机票，并打算找奶奶帮忙订票，之后他继续下楼完成剩下的家务。故事山分析开端：尼奥放学后看到妈妈忙碌的待办事项清单，决定帮忙做家务。发展：尼奥做家务时发现妈妈的愿望清单，决定用自己的积蓄给妈妈买机票。高潮：续写部分，尼奥完成家务，妈妈回家，尼奥给妈妈机票，妈妈的反应。结局：妈妈被尼奥的举动感动，两人关系更加亲密，体现亲情的温暖。五处伏笔以及在续写中的回应伏笔：尼奥是单亲家庭，妈妈独自抚养他。回应：在续写中，突出妈妈看到尼奥的礼物后的感动，强调单亲家庭中孩子对妈妈的理解和感恩。伏笔：尼奥看到妈妈的待办事项清单，决定帮忙做家务。回应：续写第一段中，详细描述尼奥完成家务的过程，如修剪草坪时遇到的困难及如何克服，体现他对妈妈的爱。伏笔：尼奥看到妈妈的愿望清单，决定给妈妈买机票。回应：续写第二段中，描述尼奥在奶奶帮助下成功订票，以及妈妈收到机票时的惊喜和感动。伏笔：尼奥热爱户外活动，存钱买自行车。回应：可以在结尾提及尼奥虽然用了买自行车的钱，但他并不后悔，因为妈妈的幸福更重要，体现他的成长。伏笔：尼奥想象妈妈收到机票时的快乐。回应：在续写中，具体描写妈妈收到机票时的表情、语言和动作，展现她的喜悦和感动。续写要点第一段：详细描述尼奥继续完成家务的过程，如修剪草坪时可能遇到草太长、工具不好用等困难，但他努力克服，最终完成了所有家务，满心期待妈妈回家。第二段：写尼奥在奶奶的帮助下成功买到机票，妈妈回家后，尼奥将机票递给妈妈，妈妈看到机票后的惊喜、感动，两人温馨互动，表达彼此的爱。情感线一开始，尼奥看到妈妈的辛苦，心疼妈妈，决定帮忙做家务，情感上是对妈妈的关心和体贴。看到妈妈的愿望清单后，他决定给妈妈买机票，情感变得更加坚定和温暖。在完成家务和买到机票的过程中，他充满期待。妈妈收到机票时，尼奥收获了成就感和幸福感，妈妈则是惊喜和感动，两人的情感在互动中得到升华。故事线尼奥放学后看到妈妈的待办事项清单，决定帮忙做家务。尼奥做家务时发现妈妈的愿望清单，决定用积蓄给妈妈买机票。尼奥下楼继续完成家务，如修剪草坪等，克服困难。尼奥在奶奶帮助下成功买到机票。妈妈回家，尼奥将机票递给妈妈。妈妈感动，两人表达彼此的爱，关系更加亲密。主旨升华句Loveisnotjustwords,butactionsthatshowcareandsacrifice.爱不只是言语，更是展现关怀与牺牲的行动。Inafamily,smallactsofkindnesscanbringgreatwarmthandstrengthenthebondbetweenfamilymembers.在一个家庭中，小小的善举能带来巨大的温暖，并加强家庭成员之间的联系。Truehappinessliesinmakingthosewelovehappy,evenifitmeansgivingupsomethingwedesire.真正的幸福在于让我们所爱的人快乐，即使这意味着放弃我们渴望的东西。Achild'sloveforaparentcanbeapowerfulforcethatovercomesdifficultiesandbringsjoytothefamily.孩子对父母的爱可以是一种强大的力量，它能克服困难，给家庭带来欢乐。Familyiswhereloveisshared,sacrificesaremade,andheartsarefilledwithwarmthandgratitude.家庭是爱得以分享、付出得以展现、心灵充满温暖与感激的地方。写作示范示范一

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Thenhehurrieddownstairstodothem.Thelawnmowerwasabitheavyforhim,butNiallgrittedhisteethandstartedmowing.Thegrasswaslongandthick,makingthejobevenmorechallenging.However,hedidn'tgiveup.Afterwhatseemedlikeages,hefinallyfinishedmowingthelawn.Thenhewateredtheplants,makingsureeachonegotenoughwater.Bythetimehecompletedallthechores,hewasexhaustedbutfilledwithasenseofaccomplishment.Hecouldn'twaittoseethelookonhismom'sfacewhenshecamehome.Paragraph2:

Assistedbyhisgrandma,Niallsecretlyboughthismomaplaneticket.Afewdayslater,whenhismomgothomefromwork,Niallhandedhertheticketwithabigsmile.“Mom,thisisforyou.Youcanfinallygotothebeachyou'vealwayswantedtovisit,”hesaid.Lindawasstunned.Tearsfilledhereyesassherealizedwhathersonhaddone.ShehuggedNialltightly,saying,“Youarethebestthingthathaseverhappenedtome.Iloveyousomuch.”Atthatmoment,Niallknewthatallhiseffortswereworthit,andthelovebetweenthembecameevendeeper.示范二

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Thenhehurrieddownstairstodothem.Niallpushedthelawnmower,strugglingtomakeitmovesmoothlyacrosstheunevengrass.Hehadtostopseveraltimestoclearthegrassthatgotstuckinthemower.Hisarmsached,buthethoughtofhismom'stiredfaceandkeptgoing.Aftermowingthelawn,hewashedthedishes,scrubbingeachonecarefully.Finally,hewateredtheplants,enjoyingthesoundofwaterdropletshittingthesoil.Wheneverythingwasdone,hesatonthecouch,waitingforhismomwithexcitement.Paragraph2:

Assistedbyhisgrandma,Niallsecretlyboughthismomaplaneticket.Onasunnyday,whenhismomwasabouttostartherusualeveningroutine,Niallpresentedthetickettoher.“Surprise,Mom!It'stimeforyoutotakeabreak,”heexclaimed.Linda'seyeswidenedindisbelief.Shewasspeechlessforamoment,thenpulledNiallintoawarmembrace.“Ican'tbelieveyoudidthisforme.Youaresothoughtful,”shesaid,hervoicetremblingwithemotion.Niallfeltawarmglowinhisheart,knowingthathehadmadehismom'sdreamcometrue.【答案】Paragraph1:Then,hehurrieddownstairstodothem.Inthefollowinghour,Niallmowedthelawn,wateredtheplants,etc.Then,knowinghismomwouldreturnhomesoon,hesetthetableandheatedtheleftoversfordinner.Whenhismotherarrivedhome,Niallwasseatedatth