读后续写+妮莎救援+讲义 高三上学期期中Ⅱ考试英语试卷

读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Neesha,an8-year-oldgoldenretriever,isaluckydog.Afterspendingafortnightonherownwithoutfoodorrealshelter,thetoughdogwasaccidentallyspottedbyacouple,whoinspiteofthecoldweather,werehikingtherangeandhappenedonher.Twoweeksearlier,Neesha’sownershadtakenherandtheirotherdog,aGermanshepherdnamedHarley,forsomeoutdoorexercise.Terrifiedbyadeer,bothdogstookoff.Harleyfoundhiswaybacktotheparkinglotthenextday,butNeeshadidnot.Thefamilymadeathoroughsearch.Theyleftalaundrybasketofunwashedclothingnearthespotwherethey’dlastseenNeeshaontheoffchancethatshe’dhomeinonthefamiliarsmellmarker.TheyeventurnedtotheInternetforhelpinfindingNeesha-buttherewasstillnosignofher.“Wepostedourexperienceonsocialmedia.Thenaweekendlater,wewerestilllookingforher.Wewerestartingtogiveuphope,”thepet’sownersMaryandherhusbandDavidtoldTheIrishTimes.Eventually,thefamilybegantoacceptthatNeeshamightnotbecominghome.“Wejustthoughtsheis8,andit’sbeentwoweeks.Therewasnowayshecouldsurvive.”DoctorsCiaraNolanandJeanFrancoisBonnetmustbetrulydedicatedhikers.TheybravedtheelementsonthefreezingdaywhenthecoupledecidedtoreachoneofWicklow’speaks.Astheynearedthetop,Nolanwasshockedtoseeadogtremblinginthesnow.“Shewasfrightened,freezingcold.Shedidn’thaveenoughenergytobarkorstand,”Bonnetsaidinaninterview.“Wetriedtogethertowalk,butshecouldn’tstand.Sowecoveredherwithourspareclothesandgavehersomefood.”注意1．续写词数应为150左右；2．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。BonnetliftedNeeshaontohisbackforthelongpathdownthemountain.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________MaryandDavidcouldscarcelybelieveitwhentheylearnedtheirdoghadbeenfoundalive.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________妮莎救援故事续写续写要点第一段：着重描写下山途中的艰难，如恶劣天气加剧行走困难，Bonnet体力不支但仍坚持。到达山下后，丰富救助细节，如描述Neesha在兽医处的治疗过程，医生的嘱咐等。第二段：深入刻画主人与狗狗团聚时的互动，如主人回忆寻找时的艰辛，表达对狗狗的思念。以及狗狗回家后的生活，像与家中另一只狗狗Harley的重逢，展现家庭的温暖。情感线起初，狗狗Neesha独自在山中时恐惧、绝望。Bonnet和Nolan发现它时，它害怕又虚弱。救助过程中，随着人们的关爱，它逐渐安心。主人Mary和David在寻找无果时，从满怀希望到近乎绝望。得知Neesha被找到，他们惊喜、激动，团聚时满是喜悦与感恩，最后一家人因这次经历更加珍惜彼此。故事线Bonnet背着Neesha下山时，狂风大作，山路愈发难行，但他咬牙坚持。到达山下，兽医为Neesha输液、检查冻伤情况，嘱咐保暖和营养补充。Bonnet和Nolan联系主人，告知Neesha的情况，主人激动得语无伦次。主人赶到兽医处，与Neesha相拥，回忆起寻找时的日夜煎熬。Neesha回家后，与Harley欢快玩耍，逐渐恢复往日活力。一家人将Neesha的照片和救援故事制作成相册，纪念这段难忘经历。主旨升华句ThisheartwarmingrescueofNeesharemindsusthatinthefaceofharshnature,thepowerofhumankindnesscanbringhopeandwarmth,bridgingthegapbetweenhumansandanimals.（妮莎这次温暖人心的救援提醒我们，在恶劣的自然面前，人类善良的力量能带来希望和温暖，拉近人与动物之间的距离。）ThestoryofNeeshanotonlyshowcasestheunwaveringbondbetweenpetsandtheirownersbutalsohighlightstheselflessdedicationofstrangerswhoarewillingtogotogreatlengthstosavealife.（妮莎的故事不仅展示了宠物与主人之间坚定不移的纽带，还凸显了陌生人无私奉献，愿意竭尽全力拯救生命的精神。）ThroughNeesha'sjourneyfrombeinglosttobeingfound,welearnthathopeneverfades,andeveninthedarkestmoments,thereisalwaysachanceforahappyending.（通过妮莎从迷路到被找到的经历，我们明白希望永不磨灭，即使在最黑暗的时刻，也总有迎来美好结局的可能。）Thisincrediblerescueisatestamenttothefactthateverylife,nomatterhowsmallorseeminglyinsignificant,isprecious,andourcompassioncanmakeaprofounddifference.（这次令人难以置信的救援证明，每一个生命，无论多么渺小或看似微不足道，都是珍贵的，我们的同情心能产生深远的影响。）Neesha'sstoryservesasabeautifulreminderthattheloveandcareweextendtoanimalscancreatelastingmemoriesandstrengthenthespecialconnectionwesharewiththem.（妮莎的故事美好地提醒我们，我们给予动物的爱与关怀能创造永恒的回忆，加强我们与它们之间特殊的联系。）写作示范一第一段BonnetliftedNeeshaontohisbackforthelongpathdownthemountain.Thewindhowled,andthesnow-coveredtrailwastreacherous.Bonnet'slegsached,buthisdeterminationtosaveNeeshaneverwavered.Nolanheldaflashlight,lightingthewayandconstantlyencouragingBonnet.Whentheyfinallyreachedthefootofthemountain,theyrushedNeeshatothevet.Thevet,withaworriedlook,immediatelystartedanIVdriptowarmherupandexaminedherfrost-bittenpaws.Hecarefullybandagedthewoundsandprescribedspecialfoodtohelpherregainstrength.第二段MaryandDavidcouldscarcelybelieveitwhentheylearnedtheirdoghadbeenfoundalive.Theyspedtothevet's,theirheartspoundingwithexcitement.AssoonastheysawNeeshalyingonthetable,Maryrushedforwardandhuggedhergently,tearsstreamingdownherface.DavidthankedBonnetandNolanoverandoveragain.Neesha,thoughweak,lickedMary'shandaffectionately.Backhome,NeeshawasgreetedbyHarleywithenthusiasticbarksandtail-wagging.Inthefollowingdays,Neesharecoveredquickly,andthefamilyoftenlookedbackonthisexperience,gratefulforthekindnessofstrangersandthehappyreunion.写作示范二第一段BonnetliftedNeeshaontohisbackforthelongpathdownthemountain.Thesnowwasgettingheavier,andBonnet'sstepsbecameunsteady.Nolansupportedhimfromtheside,makingsuretheydidn'tslip.TheytalkedtoNeeshaalltheway,tryingtokeepherspiritsup.Onceatthevet's,thevetcleanedNeesha'smattedfur,removedthethornsfromherpaws,andgaveherathoroughcheck-up.HetoldBonnetandNolanthatNeeshawasluckytohavebeenfoundintime.BonnetthencalledMaryandDavid,hisvoicefilledwithexcitementashesharedthegoodnews.第二段MaryandDavidcouldscarcelybelieveitwhentheylearnedtheirdoghadbeenfoundalive.Theyarrivedatthevet'sinahurry.MarykneltdownbesideNeesha,strokingherheadandsayinghowmuchtheyhadmissedher.DavidshookBonnetandNolan'shandsfirmly,expressinghisgratitude.Neesha'seyessparkledwithhappiness.Athome,Neeshasoonregainedherenergy.SheplayedwithHarleyinthebackyardeveryday,andthefamilydecidedtoorganizeasmallpartytothankBonnetandNolan.Thisrescuestorybecameasourceofwarmthandinspirationforeveryoneinvolved.【参考答案】BonnetliftedNeeshaontohisbackforthelongpathdownthemountain.Intheslipperyandicyconditions,theystumbledandfellseveraltimes,yetBonnetneverthoughtofgivingup.Instead,hecameupwithacleverideaandwrappedNeeshatightlyinascarftomakesureshewouldn’tslipoff.Oncetheyfinallyreachedthelevelground,NolanandBonnetwastednotimeintakingthepoordogstraighttothenearestanimalrescuestation.Despitebeingextremelyweak,asidefromafewminorcutsandscrapes,Neeshawasinrelativelygoodcon