读后续写+跟着祖母学种菜收获成长与爱+讲义 高二上学期期末教学质量检测英语试题

第1页/共1页阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Onacalmweekend,Iwenttothecountrysidetovisitmygrandmother.Herhouse,locatedintheheartofavillage,wasaharbourofquietnessawayfromthenoiseofcitylife.AsIapproachedherhome,thefamiliarsightofherwelcomingsmilewarmedmyheart.Mygrandmother,awomanofgreatwisdomandstrength,hadalwaysbeenthebackboneofourfamily.Herhands,thoughweatheredwithtime,wereskilledintheartofgrowingfoodfromthesoil.Hergardenwasherprideandherlovefortheland.Uponmyarrival,Inoticedthewideareaofhergarden,awaitingtheplantsthatwouldbringforthaharvest.Ieagerlyofferedtohelpherwiththeplanting,butshelookedatmewithconcern.Hereyesreflectedamixofaffectionandapprehension."Areyousure,mydear?"sheaskedwithdoubt."It'shardwork,andIdon'twantyoutotireyourself."Determinedtoassisther,Iinsistedonlearningtheskillsofgardening.Shesawthedeterminationinmyeyesand,withagentlenod,agreedtoteachme.Underhercarefulteaching,Ibeganmylearning,eagertoabsorbeverypieceofknowledgeshehadtooffer.Theprocessofplantingrequiredpatience.Mygrandmothershowedmehowtopreparethesoil,theproperdepthtodig,andthecorrectspacingbetweeneachseedling(幼苗).Sheexplainedtheimportanceofeachstep.Shetaughtmeeverysingledetail.Atfirst,mymovementswereclumsy(笨拙的),andIfearedImightbemoreoftroublethanahelp.Butmygrandmother'sencouragementwasfirm.Sheguidedmyhands,correctingmytechniquewithagentletouchandkindwords.Slowly,Ibegantofindmyrhythm(节奏),andmyactionbecamemorefluent.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Finally,mygrandmotheragreedtoletmedotheplantingalone.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WhenIleftthatevening,Ilookedbackatthegarden.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意在一个宁静的周末，“我”前往乡村看望祖母。祖母家在村子中心，是远离城市喧嚣的宁静港湾。祖母智慧且坚强，她的花园是她的骄傲。“我”到达后，看到花园广阔，主动提出帮忙种植，祖母虽担心“我”辛苦，但看到“我”的决心后，同意教“我”。在祖母的悉心教导下，“我”学习了准备土壤、确定播种深度和间距等种植技巧，从一开始的笨拙，在祖母的鼓励下逐渐熟练起来。故事山分析开端：“我”周末去乡村看望祖母，看到祖母的花园，主动提出帮忙种植。发展：祖母担心“我”，但在“我”的坚持下同意教“我”，“我”在祖母的指导下学习种植技巧，从笨拙逐渐变得熟练。高潮（待续写）：需要续写“我”独自种植时的情况，以及种植完成后“我”离开时对花园的感受。结局（待续写）：通过对花园的回望和内心感受，展现这次经历对“我”的影响，为故事收尾。伏笔以及在续写中的回应祖母的智慧和对花园的热爱：在续写中可以体现祖母的经验和热爱传递给了“我”，“我”在独自种植时运用祖母教的技巧，感受到种植的乐趣和意义，也更加理解祖母对花园的情感。“我”的主动和决心：回应在独自种植时，“我”凭借坚定的决心克服困难，成功完成种植任务，展现自己的成长。祖母的担心和鼓励：续写中祖母在“我”独自种植时，可能会在一旁默默关注，当“我”遇到问题时，再次给予鼓励和指导，强化祖孙之间的情感联系。种植过程的耐心和技巧学习：在独自种植时，“我”会运用学到的技巧，耐心地完成每一个步骤，体现从学习到实践的过程。“我”从笨拙到熟练的转变：在独自种植中，“我”将进一步巩固熟练的种植技能，并且可能会发现自己在种植方面的潜力，对未来的种植活动充满期待。续写要点（两段）第一段：描写“我”独自种植时的情景。可以写“我”按照祖母教的方法小心翼翼地进行种植，遇到一些小问题，比如种子放置的角度不对或者土壤覆盖不均匀，但凭借之前学到的知识和祖母的鼓励，努力克服困难，最终完成种植。第二段：描述“我”离开时回望花园的感受。看到自己和祖母共同努力的成果，心中充满成就感和对祖母的感激之情，意识到这次种植经历不仅让“我”学会了一项技能，更让“我”体会到劳动的价值和亲情的温暖，这次经历也将对“我”未来的生活产生积极影响。情感线起初“我”充满热情和决心想要帮忙种植，在学习过程中因为笨拙而有些沮丧，在祖母的鼓励下逐渐自信熟练，独自种植时紧张又坚定，完成种植后充满成就感，离开时回望花园，心中满是对祖母的感激和对这次经历的珍视，情感从期待到经历波折再到收获成长和温暖。故事线“我”获得独自种植的机会。“我”按照祖母教的方法开始独自种植。“我”在种植过程中遇到小问题并努力解决。“我”完成种植，看着自己的成果感到满足。“我”离开时回望花园，心中感慨万千。这次经历对“我”未来产生积极影响。主旨升华句Thisgardeningexperiencenotonlyequippedmewithpracticalskillsbutalsodeepenedmyunderstandingofthevalueofpatience,hardwork,andthelovethatbindsfamilymemberstogether.（这次园艺经历不仅让我掌握了实用技能，还加深了我对耐心、努力工作的价值以及维系家庭成员之间的爱的理解。）Throughtheprocessofplanting,Ilearnedthateverysmallstepinlaborisacontributiontothebeautyoflife,andtheguidanceoflovedonesisthemostprecioustreasureonthejourneyofgrowth.（通过种植的过程，我明白了劳动中的每一小步都是对生活之美的贡献，而亲人的指导是成长道路上最珍贵的财富。）AsIlookedbackatthegarden,Irealizedthattheseedsweplantedwerenotonlyforafutureharvestbutalsoforthegrowthofmyheart,nurturedbytheloveandwisdomofmygrandmother.（当我回望花园时，我意识到我们种下的种子不仅是为了未来的收获，也是为了我心灵的成长，它被祖母的爱和智慧所滋养。）Thisdayinthegardenbecameamemorablechapterinmylife,teachingmethatwithdeterminationandthesupportoffamily,Icanovercomeanydifficultiesandcreatesomethingbeautiful.（在花园里的这一天成为我生命中难忘的一章，教会我只要有决心和家人的支持，我就能克服任何困难，创造美好的事物。）Thetimespentplantingwithmygrandmotherwasmorethanjustasimpleactivity;itwasaprofoundlessoninlife,acelebrationofnature,andatestamenttotheunbreakablebondoffamily.（和祖母一起种植的时光不仅仅是一项简单的活动，它是一堂深刻的人生课，是对自然的赞美，也是家庭牢不可破纽带的证明。）写作示范一Finally,mygrandmotheragreedtoletmedotheplantingalone.Withamixofexcitementandnervousness,Itookadeepbreathandstarted.Icarefullypickedupaseedling,rememberingtheproperdepthandspacingmygrandmotherhadtaughtme.AsIwasplacingtheseedlinginthesoil,Iaccidentallydroppedit.Myheartskippedabeat,butIquicklyregainedmycomposure.Igentlypickeditupandcontinued.Eachstepwasatestofmynewly-acquiredskills.Afterwhatseemedlikealongtime,Ifinallyfinishedplantingalltheseedlings.Istoodup,lookingattheneatly-plantedrows,asenseofaccomplishmentwellingupinsideme.WhenIleftthatevening,Ilookedbackatthegarden.Thesettingsuncastawarmglowoverthefreshly-plantedarea.Ifeltadeepsenseofgratitudetowardsmygrandmother.Notonlyhadshetaughtmetheskillsofgardening,butshehadalsogivenmeapreciousmemory.Thisexperiencehadmademeappreciatethehardworkbehindeveryharvest.IknewthatwheneverIthoughtofthisday,Iwouldberemindedoftheloveandpatiencemygrandmotherhadshownme.Itwasadaythatwouldstaywithmeforever,andIcouldn'twaittocomebackandseethefruitsofourlabor.写作示范二Finally,mygrandmotheragreedtoletmedotheplantingalone.Ibentdown,focusingallmyattentiononthetaskathand.Idugtheholeswithprecision,tryingtomakethemtheperfectdepth.AsIplantedeachseedling,Iimaginedthemgrowingintostrong,healthyplants.However,Isoonencounteredaproblem.Thesoilinoneareaseemedabittoohard.Istruggledforawhile,butthenIrememberedwhatmygrandmotherhadsaidaboutlooseningthesoilgently.Withalittleextraeffort,Imanagedtomakeitsuitableforplanting.Onebyone,theseedlingsfoundtheirplacesintheground,andIfeltagrowingsenseofpride.WhenIleftthatevening,Ilookedbackatthegarden.Itwasnolongerjustanemptyplotoflandbutasymbolofoursharedeffort.Thegardenheldthepromiseofabountifulharvest,butmoreimportantly,itheldthememoriesofadayfilledwithlearningandlove.Irealizedthatthisexperiencehadchangedme.Ihadgainedanewrespectfornatureandthelaborthatgoesintonurturingit.Icouldn'twaittoseethegardeninfullbloom,andIknewthateverytimeIdid,IwouldthinkofthespecialdayIspentwithmygrandmother,learningtheartofgardening.【答案】参考范文：Finally,mygrandmotheragreedtoletmedotheplantingalone.Ibecamemorecareful.Irecalledtheskillsmygrandmotherhadtaughtme,inclu