高考英语复习读后续写练习：女孩寻宠梦：偶遇独角兽的奇妙经历+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习女孩寻宠梦：偶遇独角兽的奇妙经历1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文MynameisFauna,butMomandDadsometimescallmeMagpie,sinceItalkalot.Theycallme“animalmagnet,”too;becauseanimalslikeme.Idon’tmindatallbecauseIlikethem,too.Infact,whatIreally,reallywantisapetofmyown.Mydadhasapetfish,andIlikeitalot—butIwouldstilllikeapetthat’sallmine.“Please?Iaskedmyparents.“Prettyplease,withcherriesandchocolateandwhippedcreamontop?”“We’llsee!”“I’llwalkitandfeeditandbrushit....well,unlessithasscalesorsomething.ThenI’llpolishthemrealnice.”“We’llsee.”Finally,though,“we’llsee”wasupgradedto“soon.”4续写原文“Let’sdosomeresearch,”saidDad,“andseewhatkindofpetisbestforyou.”“Andkeepyoureyespeeled,”saidMom.“Youneverknowwhenanopportunitywillcomealong.”Onedidcomealong.IwasonmywayhomefromschoolwhenIsawaunicorn(独角兽)standinginbackofBakerTrembly’sshop.Hewasnibblingstalebiscuitsoutofthetrashcan.Ithoughthemightbeawildunicorncomeintotown,buthetrotted(小跑)rightuptomewhenIheldouttheappleIhadinmybackpack,leftoverfromlunch.“Itfollowedmehome!”Itoldmyparents,afterImanagedtoleadtheunicorntoourfrontgate.“CanIkeepit?”“Ihopeyouwerecareful,”saidmydadwithafrown.“Unicornscanbedangerous.”“Notthisone!He’sverysweet.Andhe’sjustwhatIwant!.Icankeephim.inthegarden.”“Hedoeslooksweet,”saidmymom.“Let’scheckhistags(标牌).”Tags?Ihadn’tevennoticedhisthinsilvercollar,I’dbeensoexcited.5段首句Paragraph1:Therewasalittletagonit,withaphonenumber.Paragraph2:“I’vehadhimsincehewaslittle,”Sarisaid.“We’veneverbeenapart.”6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8主人公福纳非常喜欢动物，一直渴望拥有一只完全属于自己的宠物。她的父母有一条宠物鱼，但她不满足于此，不停地向父母请求。起初父母总是敷衍地回应“再看看”，后来态度有所松动，表示“很快”会考虑。父亲让她先做些研究，了解哪种宠物最适合她，母亲则叮嘱她留意机会。一天，福纳放学回家途中，在面包店后面意外发现一只独角兽在垃圾桶里吃着过期饼干。她拿出背包里的苹果，独角兽就小跑着靠近她。福纳兴奋地把独角兽带回家，请求父母让她养这只独角兽。父亲担心独角兽危险，母亲提议查看独角兽项圈上的标牌。福纳之前太兴奋，都没注意到独角兽戴着的银色细项圈。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Paragraph1:Therewasalittletagonit,withaphonenumber.项圈上有个小标牌，上面写着一个电话号码。福纳的心里“咯噔”一下，刚刚还满心欢喜，想着终于能拥有自己的宠物了，这突然出现的电话号码却让她隐隐有些不安。她既想留下独角兽，又明白这可能意味着独角兽是有主人的。父母看着她纠结的表情，温柔地安慰她，告诉她应该联系一下主人，说不定主人正着急地寻找着独角兽呢。福纳犹豫了很久，最终还是鼓起勇气拿起电话，拨通了那个号码。电话很快接通了，一个女孩的声音传来，听起来十分焦急。福纳小心翼翼地说明了情况，女孩听到独角兽的消息后，激动得声音都颤抖了，她表示马上就赶过来。挂了电话，福纳看着可爱的独角兽，心里满是不舍，她紧紧地抱住独角兽，仿佛这样就能留住它。10续写思路分析Paragraph2:“I’vehadhimsincehewaslittle,”Sarisaid.“We’veneverbeenapart.”不一会儿，一个女孩匆匆赶到福纳家。她就是电话里的女孩萨莉，萨莉一看到独角兽，眼泪就夺眶而出，她快步跑过去，紧紧地抱住独角兽。“我从它小时候就养着它，”萨莉说，“我们从来没有分开过。”福纳看着萨莉和独角兽亲昵的样子，心里虽然很失落，但也明白了她们之间深厚的感情。萨莉感激地看着福纳，不停地说着谢谢。福纳强忍着泪水，挤出一丝微笑，说自己很喜欢独角兽，这段时间和它相处得很开心。萨莉看着福纳难过的样子，灵机一动，提议以后可以带着独角兽来找福纳一起玩。福纳听了，眼睛一下子亮了起来，她开心地答应了。从那以后，萨莉经常带着独角兽来找福纳，福纳也因此多了一个好朋友，她和独角兽的故事也成为了一段美好的回忆。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Therewasalittletagonit,withaphonenumber.Fauna'sheartsankabit.Justnowshewasfullofjoy,thinkingthatshecouldfinallyhaveherownpet.Butthisunexpectedphonenumbermadeherfeelabituneasy.Shebothwantedtokeeptheunicornandknewthatitmightmeantheunicornhadanowner.Herparents,seeinghertangledexpression,gentlycomfortedherandtoldherthattheyshouldcontacttheowner.Maybetheownerwaslookingfortheunicornanxiously.Faunahesitatedforalongtime.Finally,shesummonedupthecouragetopickupthephoneanddialedthenumber.Thephonewasquicklyanswered,andagirl'svoicecamethrough,soundingveryanxious.Faunacarefullyexplainedthesituation.Thegirl'svoicetrembledwithexcitementwhensheheardabouttheunicorn.Shesaidshewouldcomeoverrightaway.Afterhangingupthephone,Faunalookedatthelovelyunicorn,feelingextremelyreluctanttopartwithit.Shehuggedtheunicorntightly,asifshecouldkeepitthatway.13范文呈现Afterawhile,agirlrushedtoFauna'shouse.ShewasSari,thegirlonthephone.AssoonasSarisawtheunicorn,tearswelledupinhereyes.Shequicklyranoverandhuggedtheunicorntightly."I'vehadhimsincehewaslittle,"Sarisaid."We'veneverbeenapart."FaunalookedattheaffectionatescenebetweenSariandtheunicorn.Althoughshefeltverydisappointed,shealsounderstoodthedeepbondbetweenthem.SarilookedatFaunagratefullyandkeptsayingthankyou.Faunaforcedbackhertearsandsqueezedoutasmile,sayingthatshelikedtheunicornverymuchandhadagreattimewithitduringthisperiod.Sari,seeingFauna'ssadlook,hadanidea.SheproposedthatshecouldbringtheunicorntoplaywithFaunainthefuture.Fauna'seyeslitupwhensheheardthis,andshehappilyagreed.Fromthenon,SarioftenbroughttheunicorntovisitFauna.Faunaalsogainedagoodfriend,andherstorywiththeunicornbecameabeautifulmemory.14升级版范文呈现Therewasalittletagonit,withaphonenumber.ItwasatthatmomentthatFauna'sheartsank,asifaheavystonehadbeendroppedintoit.Justmomentsago,shewasbrimmingwithjoy,imaginingthatshecouldfinallyhaveapetofherown.However,thisunexpectedphonenumbercastashadowofuneaseoverherexcitement.Shewastornbetweenherdesiretokeeptheunicornandtherealizationthatitmightbelongtosomeoneelse.Herparents,noticingherconflictedexpression,gentlycomfortedher,tellingherthattheyoughttocontacttheowner,foritwashighlylikelythattheownerwasdesperatelysearchingfortheunicorn.Faunahesitatedforalongtime.Eventually,shesummonedupthecouragetopickupthephoneanddialthenumber.Thephonewasansweredinaflash,andagirl'svoice,filledwithanxiety,camethroughthereceiver.Faunacarefullyandclearlyexplainedthesituation.Thegirl'svoicetrembledwithexcitementuponhearingabouttheunicorn,andshedeclaredthatshewouldcomeoverimmediately.Afterhangingupthephone,Faunalookedatthelovelyunicornwithaheavyheart,huggingittightlyasifherembracecouldpreventitfromleaving.15升级版范文呈现Afterashortwhile,agirlrushedtoFauna'shouse.ItwasSari,thegirlfromthephonecall.ThemomentSaricaughtsightoftheunicorn,tearswelledupinhereyes.Runningquickly,shehuggedtheunicorntightly."I'vehadhimsincehewaslittle,"Sarisaid,hervoicefilledwithemotion."We'veneverbeenapart."Fauna,watchingtheaffectionatescenebetweenSariandtheunicorn,feltapangofdisappointment.Nevertheless,shealsounderstoodthedeepbo