高考英语复习读后续写练习：姐姐的歌声：打破偏见重拾亲情与尊重+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习姐姐的歌声：打破偏见，重拾亲情与尊重1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文ALessonfromMySisterMyparentsworkedveryhardatensuringthateverythingseemedpleasantformeandImostlyignoredthefactthatmyeldersisterwasdifferent.Thechildpsychologisthadtermeditas“AspergerSyndrome”(阿斯伯格综合症，一种自闭障碍).Thisdiagnosisturnedmyparentsworldupsidedown-buttheyneverletitaffectme.ItwasonlyattheageoftenthatIstartedtonoticethedifferences,andbecomeconsciousofmysociallifeandself-imagethatIhadcarefullycultivated.Mysisterwassociallyawkward.Shecouldnotlookatpeopleintheeye.Shewouldmumble(嘟哝)toherselfandrepeatthewordsshehadjustsaidunderherbreath.She,however,wasacademicallycapable,andhenceweattendedthesameprimaryschool.Despitethis,Inever,everacknowledgedinpublicthatshewasmysister.Therewasoneincident,however,justtwoyearsago,thatremainsimprintedinmyconsciousness.ItwastheincidentthatchangedhowIviewedmysister.Itwastheincidentthatchangedme.4续写原文Beinginprimarysix,abouttograduate,mysisterandherclassmateshadtoputupaperformance,whetherinagroup，orindividually.Duetoherinabilitytointegrate(融入)，mysisterwastheonlyoneleftwithoutagroup.Theschoolhadmadeitaruleforeveryonetoputupanitem,somysisterhadtoperformindividually.”I’llsing.”mysistertoldmyparents,confidently.Hearingthat,Iwastakenabackandcompletelyshocked.Iknewshewouldembarrassme,onewayoranother.“No!”Iprotested.MyparentsshotmealookandthatwaswhenIknewmysisterwasgoingtoperform,nomatterwhat.Silently,IprayedthatsomethingwouldhappenandIwouldnothavetowatchmysistershameherself.Thatdaycame.Isatinthehall，waitingfortheperformancestostart.Thelightsdimmed(变昏暗)aminuteortwolaterandthecurtainspartedtorevealtheonlysolo-mysister.Sheblinked(眨眼)acoupleoftimes,asifthelightsshiningonherwerehurtinghereyes.5段首句Paragraph1：Ittookaboutawholeminuteforhertostammer(口吃，结巴地说)hernameandclass.Paragraph2:HowdidInotknowthatmysistercouldsingsosweetly?6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8“我”的父母努力让“我”的生活不受姐姐患有阿斯伯格综合症的影响，“我”在十岁之前也大多忽略了姐姐的不同。随着年龄增长，“我”开始在意自己的社交生活和形象，因姐姐在社交方面的笨拙，如不敢直视他人、会自言自语和重复话语等，“我”在公共场合从不承认她是自己的姐姐。小学六年级时，姐姐和同学们要进行毕业表演，由于她无法融入集体，只能独自表演。当姐姐说要唱歌时，“我”强烈反对，害怕她会让自己难堪，但父母没有理会“我”的抗议。表演那天，“我”怀着忐忑的心情坐在大厅里，等待着表演开始，灯光暗下后，姐姐走上舞台，开始了她的独唱。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Paragraph1:IrushedtowardsGrandmawithopenarms.她花了差不多整整一分钟才结结巴巴地说出自己的名字和班级。台下的观众开始交头接耳，小声议论起来，一些同学还忍不住发出了轻笑。我坐在座位上，身体不自觉地紧绷起来，脸涨得通红，恨不得找个地缝钻进去。我心里不停地埋怨姐姐，为什么要选择这样的方式让我难堪。我低着头，不敢看周围人的表情，生怕他们的目光中带着嘲笑和鄙夷。然而，就在这时，音乐缓缓响起，姐姐深吸一口气，开始唱歌。她的声音一开始有些颤抖，还带着一丝紧张，但渐渐地，变得越来越稳定、越来越动听。那甜美的歌声如同山间清泉，流淌在整个大厅里，清澈而又纯净。观众们的议论声渐渐消失，取而代之的是一片安静，大家都被姐姐的歌声吸引住了。他们静静地聆听着，脸上露出了陶醉的神情。我惊讶地抬起头，看着舞台上的姐姐，她不再是那个在社交场合中笨拙、羞涩的女孩，此刻的她，自信又闪耀，仿佛整个世界都为她而存在。她的眼神中透露出一种坚定和自信，歌声中充满了情感和力量。我突然意识到，我一直以来都忽略了姐姐的闪光点，只看到了她的不足，而现在，她用自己的歌声证明了自己的价值。10续写思路分析Paragraph2:HowdidInotknowthatmysistercouldsingsosweetly?我怎么不知道姐姐能唱得这么动听呢？在那之前，我总是因为姐姐的阿斯伯格综合症而感到自卑和尴尬，总是试图逃避她，害怕她会影响我的形象。我从来没有真正去了解过她，没有发现她身上隐藏的才华。但这一刻，我为自己的想法感到无比羞愧。我看着姐姐在舞台上尽情地歌唱，泪水模糊了我的双眼。当她唱完最后一个音符，全场爆发出雷鸣般的掌声。姐姐站在舞台上，脸上露出了灿烂的笑容，那是我从未见过的自信和喜悦。从那以后，我彻底改变了对姐姐的看法。我不再因为她的不同而感到丢脸，反而为有这样一个优秀的姐姐而感到骄傲。我开始主动和姐姐交流，陪她一起做她喜欢的事情，努力去了解她的内心世界。我发现，姐姐虽然在社交方面有些困难，但她有着丰富的内心世界和独特的见解。她对音乐的热爱和执着，让我深受感动。我也明白了，每个人都有自己的闪光点和不足之处，我们不能仅仅因为别人的一点缺陷就否定他们的全部。我要珍惜和姐姐在一起的时光，用爱去陪伴她，让她感受到家人的支持和关爱。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Ittookaboutawholeminuteforhertostammerhernameandclass.Theaudienceinthehallstartedtowhisperandtalkamongthemselves.Somestudentsevencouldn'thelpchucklingsoftly.Isatinmyseat,mybodytensingupinvoluntarily,myfaceturningbeet-red.IwishedIcouldfindaholetocrawlinto.Ikeptblamingmysisterinmyheartforchoosingthiswaytoembarrassme.Iloweredmyhead,afraidtolookattheexpressionsofthepeoplearoundme,fearingthattherewouldbemockeryandcontemptintheireyes.However,justthen,themusicstartedtoplayslowly.Mysistertookadeepbreathandbegantosing.Hervoicewasabitshakyatfirst,filledwithnervousness,butgradually,itbecamemoreandmorestableandbeautiful.Hersweetvoicewaslikeaclearspringinthemountains,flowingthroughtheentirehall,pureandrefreshing.Thewhispersoftheaudiencegraduallydieddown,replacedbyacompletesilence.Everyonewasattractedbymysister'ssinging.Theylistenedquietly,theirfacesshowingexpressionsofintoxication.Ilookedupinsurpriseandstaredatmysisteronthestage.Shewasnolongertheclumsyandshygirlinsocialsituations.Atthismoment,shewasconfidentandshining,asifthewholeworldbelongedtoher.Therewasafirmnessandconfidenceinhereyes,andhersingingwasfullofemotionandpower.IsuddenlyrealizedthatIhadalwaysoverlookedmysister'sshiningpointsandonlysawhershortcomings.Now,shehadprovedhervaluewithhersinging.13范文呈现HowdidInotknowthatmysistercouldsingsosweetly?Beforethat,Ialwaysfeltinferiorandembarrassedbecauseofmysister'sAspergerSyndrome.Ialwaystriedtoavoidher,fearingthatshewouldaffectmyimage.Ihadneverreallytriedtounderstandherordiscoverthehiddentalentsinher.Butatthismoment,Ifeltextremelyashamedofmythoughts.Iwatchedmysistersingingonthestagewithtearsblurringmyeyes.Whenshefinishedthelastnote,thunderousapplauseeruptedfromtheaudience.Mysisterstoodonthestage,abrightsmileonherface,showingaconfidenceandjoythatIhadneverseenbefore.Fromthenon,Icompletelychangedmyviewofmysister.Inolongerfeltashamedofherdifferences.Instead,Iwasproudtohavesuchanexcellentsister.Istartedtotaketheinitiativetocommunicatewithmysister,accompanyhertodothethingssheliked,andtrymybesttounderstandherinnerworld.Ifoundthatalthoughmysisterhadsomedifficultiesinsocializing,shehadarichinnerworldanduniqueinsights.Herloveandpersistenceformusicdeeplytouchedme.Ialsounderstoodthateveryonehastheirownshiningpointsandshortcomings.Wecannotdenyaperson'swholejustbecauseofalittledefect.Iwanttocherishthetimewithmysister,accompanyherwithlove,andletherfeelthesupportandcareofherfamily.14升级版范文呈现Ittookaboutawholeminuteforhertostammerhernameandclass.Theaudienceinthehallimmediatelyburstintowhispers,somestudentsevensnickeringsoftly.Isanklowerinmyseat,mybodyrigidwithembarrassment,myfaceburningwithshame.Isilentlycursedmysisterforputtingmeinsuchanawkwardsituation.Ikeptmyheaddown,avoidingthegazesofthosearoundme,terrifiedofencounteringanysignsofmockery.Justthen,themusicbegantoplay,asoftmelodyfillingtheair.Mysistertookadeepbreathandstartedtosing.Hervoice,initiallytremblingwithnerves,graduallygrewstrongerandmoremelodious.Itwasasifabeautifulstreamofmusicwasflowingthroughthehall,captivatingeveryonepresent.Thewhispersceased,andaprofoundsilencedescended.Alleyeswerefixedonmysister,whowasnowradiatinganunexpectedconfidence.GonewasthesociallyawkwardgirlIhadalwaysknown;inherplacewasasingerwhocommandedthestagewithhertalent.Istaredindisbelief,realizingforthefirsttimethatIhadbeenblindtohertruepotential.IhadbeensofocusedonherdifferencesthatIhadfailedtoseeherhiddenstrengths.15升级版范文呈现HowdidInotknowthatmysistercouldsingsosweetly?Inthepast,Ihadbeenconsumedbyfeelingsofinferiorityandembarrassmentbecauseofmysister'scondition.Ihaddistancedmyselffromher,fearingthatherpresencewouldtarnishmyimage.Butnow,asIwatchedherrece