专题10 英语作文（上海十六区二模）（上海专用）（解析版）

试卷第=page2020页，共=sectionpages4040页专题10英语作文编者按：上海十六区二模完整齐全，深度解析，排版整齐。（一）（2024年宝山区二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是李华，是希望中学的一名学生。现在你们班级英语课上的互动形式和内容都越来越丰富了，但有一个现象需要注意，就是当老师提出的问题学生不能及时回答时，有时候老师会代替学生回答，有时候也会出现较长时间的冷场。针对这种情况，请你给老师写一封邮件，提出你的意见和建议。你的文章必须包括：简单描述你觉得能改变这种现象方法；阐述你所提建议的理由。（文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称）___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearTeacher,IamLiHua,astudentfromouresteemedschool.Recently,IhavenoticedthatourEnglishclasseshavebecomeincreasinglyinteractiveandengaging.However,thereisasmallaspectthatIbelievecouldbefurtherimprovedupon.Occasionally,whenaquestionisposedandstudentshesitatetorespondpromptly,thereareinstanceswhereyoumightansweronourbehalforamomentarylullensues.Toaddressthis,Isuggestimplementingafewstrategies.Firstly,wecouldbeencouragedtodiscussinsmallgroupsbeforesharingourthoughtswiththeclass.Secondly,youcouldprovidepromptsorguidingquestionstohelpusbridgethegapinourthinking.Thereasonforthesesuggestionsistwofold.Firstly,itwouldfosteramorestudent-centeredlearningenvironment,encouragingactiveparticipationandcriticalthinking.Secondly,itwouldhelpbuildourconfidenceinspeakingEnglish,knowingthatwehavethesupportandspacetoexploreourideas.Thankyouforyourdedicationtoourlearning.Bestregards,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生假如是李华，是希望中学的一名学生。现在你们班级英语课上的互动形式和内容都越来越丰富了，但有一个现象需要注意，就是当老师提出的问题学生不能及时回答时，有时候老师会代替学生回答，有时候也会出现较长时间的冷场。针对这种情况，请你给老师写一封邮件，提出你的意见和建议。【详解】1.词汇积累培养：foster→develop建议：suggestion→advice提出：pose→putforward提供：provide→offer2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Toaddressthis,Isuggestimplementingafewstrategies.拓展句：Ifwewanttoaddressthis,Isuggestimplementingafewstrategies.【点睛】[高分句型1]Recently,IhavenoticedthatourEnglishclasseshavebecomeincreasinglyinteractiveandengaging.(运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Occasionally,whenaquestionisposedandstudentshesitatetorespondpromptly,thereareinstanceswhereyoumightansweronourbehalforamomentarylullensues.(运用了when引导时间状语从句和where引导的限制性定语从句)（二）（2024年崇明区二模）WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是明启中学的高三学生徐晶，你远在英国的朋友Anna前几天给你发来电子邮件，向你叙述了她未能成功入选校学生会的事情，为此一直闷闷不乐。恰巧你在图书馆看到下面图中英国前首相丘吉尔讲过的这句名言。你给Anna回一封邮件，用这句名言来劝慰和鼓励她。在邮件中你必须：1.对Anna的失败表示同情；2.用你对这句名言的理解和1-2个实例来劝慰和鼓励Anna。注：不要在邮件中提及你的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearAnna,I’msorrytohearaboutyourunsuccessfulbidforthestudentcouncil.Failurecanbetoughbutremember,asWinstonChurchillsaid,“Successisnotfinal,failureisnotfatal;itisthecouragetocontinuethatcounts.”So,don'tletonesmallfailurestandinyourway.ThinkofEdison,whofailedthousandsoftimesbeforeinventingthelightbulb.Hiscouragetopersevereledtoaworld-changingdiscovery.You,too,havethepotentialtoovercomethissetback.Don’tletthisfailuredefineyou;letitbeasteppingstonetogreatersuccess.Keepgoing,Anna.Itisyourcourageanddeterminationthatwillleadyoutonewheights.Ibelieveyouwillbeselectedsuccessfullyinthenextelection.Bestwishes,XuJing【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于远在英国的朋友Anna前几天给你发来电子邮件，向你叙述了她未能成功入选校学生会的事情，为此一直闷闷不乐，恰巧你在图书馆看到下面图中英国前首相丘吉尔讲过的这句名言这一情况，给Anna回一封邮件，用这句名言来劝慰和鼓励她。【详解】1.词汇积累痛苦的：tough→painful挫折：setback→frustration克服：overcome→conquer决心：determination→resolution2.句式拓展简单句变非谓语作状语原句：I’msorrytohearaboutyourunsuccessfulbidforthestudentcouncil.拓展句：Hearingaboutyoufailedinyourbidforthestudentcouncil,Ifeelsosorry.【点睛】【高分句型1】ThinkofEdison,whofailedthousandsoftimesbeforeinventingthelightbulb.（运用了关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句。）【高分句型2】Itisyourcourageanddeterminationthatwillleadyoutonewheights.（运用了Itis…that…的强调句式。）（三）（2024年奉贤区二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.随着中国传统文化的复兴，汉服(Hanfu)作为一种独特的服饰文化，逐渐受到人们的关注和喜爱。假如你是明启中学的学生李华，你校正在向学生们征集新社团的创建意向。作为汉服爱好者，你准备成立汉服社，请给校委会写一封邮件表达你的想法。你的邮件需包含：1.成立该社团的目的；2.社团拟开展的活动及原因。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSchoolCommittee,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.MynameisLiHua,astudentatMingqiHighSchool,andIamwritingtoproposetheestablishmentofaHanfuClubwithinourschoolcommunitywiththepurposeoftherevivalofHanfuclothing.TheactivitiesthattheHanfuClubplanstoundertakeareasfollows.Atfirst,wewillorganizeworkshopstoteachinterestedstudentsaboutthehistoryofHanfu,itssignificanceinChineseculture,andhowtowearitcorrectly.Thesesessionswillbeinteractiveandinformative,allowingstudentstoappreciatethebeautyandeleganceofHanfu.Besides,theclubwillhostculturalperformancesshowcasingvariousaspectsoftraditionalChineseculture,withafocusonHanfu.Byengagingintheseactivities,webelievethattheHanfuClubcancontributetofosteringagreatersenseofculturalprideandidentityamongourstudentbody.Thankyouforconsideringourproposal.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校委会写邮件，提出组建汉服社团的申请。【详解】1.词汇积累重要性：significance→importance得体地：correctly→decently此外：besides→inaddition各种各样的：various→diverse2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Thesesessionswillbeinteractiveandinformative,allowingstudentstoappreciatethebeautyandeleganceofHanfu.拓展句：Thesesessionswillbeinteractiveandinformative,whichallowsstudentstoappreciatethebeautyandeleganceofHanfu.【点睛】【高分句式1】TheactivitiesthattheHanfuClubplanstoundertakeareasfollows.(运用了that引导的定语从句)【高分句式2】Byengagingintheseactivities,webelievethattheHanfuClubcancontributetofosteringagreatersenseofculturalprideandidentityamongourstudentbody.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)（四）（2024年虹口区二模）WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是明启中学高三学生赵磊，你的外国朋友William一直对中国文化很感兴趣。近日，他在网上了解到有两个相关的线上节目（节目信息如下表所示），但他对节目选择有些茫然，想听听你的建议。请给William回复一封邮件，邮件内容须包括：（1）推荐其中一个节目；（2）通过比较两个节目的信息，说明你推荐该节目的理由。节目名称故宫里的国宝TreasuresoftheForbiddenCity寻访中国美食ExploringChineseCuisine节目内容介绍故宫里的国宝及其背后的故事介绍中国传统美食及其烹饪方式节目形式纪录片短视频节目语言英语解说无字幕(subtitles)中文解说英语字幕___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearWilliam,HavinglearntyouareinterestedinChinesecultureandthatyoucannotdecidewhethertooptfortheTreasuresoftheForbiddenCityortheExploringChineseCuisine,Iamwritingtoputforwardmyownideathatthesecondoptionmightbemoresuitableforyou.Thereasonsbehindthechoice,asfarasIcansee,canbeanalyzedinthreeaspects.Tobeginwith,asisuniversallyacknowledged,deliciouscuisineisalwaysapopulartopicaroundthewholeworld.Inthisprogramme,youwillbeintroducedtheprocessofmakingChinesetraditionalfood,whichisalsoapartoftheChineseculture.Inaddition,itwon'tcostyoumuchtimesinceitispresentedbyshortvideo,sothatyoucanchooseyourtimefreely.Lastbutnotleast,althoughtheprogrammeisspokeninChinese,thereareEnglishsubtitlesforyoutohaveafullunderstandingofthecontent.Tosumup,itisadvisablethatyouchoosethesecondone.Hopetheabovemightbeofanyhelptoyou.ThankyouforyourtimeandwishyouagreatsuccessinlearningabouttheChineseculture.Yours,ZhaoLei【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友William写一封邮件，给他提一些关于了解中国文化节目的选择建议。【详解】1.词汇积累选择：option→choice总之：tosumup→inshort普遍地：universally→widely有帮助的：beofhelp→behelpful2.句式拓展改为复合句原句：Thereasonsbehindthechoice,asfarasIcansee,canbeanalyzedinthreeaspects.

拓展句：ThereasonswhyImadethechoicecanbeanalyzedinthreeaspects.

【点睛】【高分句型1】HavinglearntyouareinterestedinChinesecultureandthatyoucannotdecidewhethertooptfortheTreasuresoftheForbiddenCityorthe

ExploringChineseCuisine,Iamwritingtoputforwardmyownideathatthesecondoptionmightbemoresuitableforyou.(运用了现在分词短语作状语和idea后that引导的同位语从句)【高分句型2】Tobeginwith,asisuniversallyacknowledged,deliciouscuisineisalwaysapopulartopicaroundthewholeworld.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)（五）（2024年黄浦区二模）WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.“人设”通常指人们向公众展示的自我，现在很多学生经常说“我的人设不能倒”。校学生会正在开展有关“人设能不能倒?(Canmypublicimagefallapart?)”的讨论，请你在学生会邮箱投稿，表达自己的想法。你的投稿须包括(文中请不要出现真实的校名和人名)：1)你觉得自己的人设是什么？2)你觉得你的人设能倒吗？为什么？_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文CanMyPublicImageFallApart?Mypublicimageisthatofadiligentstudentandaresponsibleteamplayer.Istrivetomaintainthisimagebyconsistentlyperformingwellacademicallyandactivelyparticipatinginschoolactivities.However,Ibelievethatmypublicimagecanindeedfallapart.Nooneisperfect,andweallmakemistakes.IfIweretobehaveinawaythatcontradictsmyestablishedimage,itwouldnaturallycollapse.Thisisnotsomethingtofear,asitprovidesanopportunityforgrowthandself-reflection.What’simportantistolearnfromourmistakes,adapt,andstrivetorebuildamoreauthenticandsustainableimage.Therefore,whileIaimtoupholdmycurrentpublicimage,Iamalsoopentothepossibilityofitsfallibility.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封主题为“CanMyPublicImageFallApart?”的作文投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累重要：beimportant→matter机会：opportunity→chance害怕：fear→scare维持：uphold→sustain2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Mypublicimageisthatofadiligentstudentandaresponsibleteamplayer.Istrivetomaintainthisimagebyconsistentlyperformingwellacademicallyandactivelyparticipatinginschoolactivities.拓展句：Sincemypublicimageisthatofadiligentstudentandaresponsibleteamplayer,Istrivetomaintainthisimagebyconsistentlyperformingwellacademicallyandactivelyparticipatinginschoolactivities.【点睛】[高分句型1]What’simportantistolearnfromourmistakes,adapt,andstrivetorebuildamoreauthenticandsustainableimage.(运用了what引导主语从句以及不定式tolearn作表语)[高分句型2]Therefore,whileIaimtoupholdmycurrentpublicimage,Iamalsoopentothepossibilityofitsfallibility.(运用了while引导让步状语从句)（六）（2024年嘉定区二模）WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.你所在的小区附近将新建一个大型游乐场，很多居民表示不满。社区管理处决定征集居民意见并召开专题讨论会，作为居民代表，写一份讨论会发言稿，内容需包括：1.你认为新建大型游乐场可能会存在的问题(至少2个)；2.你对以上问题的建议和理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dearneighbors,Iamhereasaresidentrepresentativetovoiceourconcernsabouttheupcominglargeamusementparknearourcommunity.Whiletheideasoundsexciting,therearepotentialissueswemustconsider.Firstly,noisepollutioncouldbecomeanimportantproblem.Theconstanthustleandbustleoftheamusementparkmightdisturbourpeaceandquiet.Secondly,trafficcongestionisanotherconcern.Theinfluxofvisitorsislikelytocausemajortrafficjams,affectingourdailycommutes.Toaddresstheseissues,Iproposeconductingathoroughnoiseimpactassessmentandimplementingnoisereductionmeasures.Additionally,weshouldexploretrafficmanagementstrategiestominimizecongestion.It'scrucialforourvoicestobeheardandconsideredinthisprocess.Let'sworktogethertofindsolutionsthatbenefitourcommunity.【解析】【导语】这是一篇发言稿。要求考生作为居民代表就你所在的小区附近将新建一个大型游乐场，很多居民表示不满一事，写一份讨论会发言稿。【详解】1.词汇积累变得：become→turninto重要的：important→significant问题：problem→issue合作：worktogether→teamup2.句式拓展同义句改写原句：Firstly,noisepollutioncouldbecomeanimportantproblem.拓展句：Initially,thematterofnoisepollutionemergesasasignificantconcern.【点睛】【高分句型1】Whiletheideasoundsexciting,therearepotentialissueswemustconsider.（使用了关系代词that引导的定语从句，先行词为issues）【高分句型2】Toaddresstheseissues,Iproposeconductingathoroughnoiseimpactassessmentandimplementingnoisereductionmeasures.（使用了非谓语动词作状语）（七）（2024年金山区二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你在英语一考中取得了118分的成绩，现在你正面临着是否参加6月份二考的选择，请谈谈你的想法。内容需包括：1）说明你的选择；2）阐述你的理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文MyDecisionontheSecondEnglishTestI'mWuLei,astudentfromMingqiHighSchool.IamwritingtosharemythoughtsonwhethertoparticipateinthesecondEnglishtestscheduledforJune.Aftercarefulconsideration,Ihavedecidedtoforegothesecondtest.Myprimaryreasonforthisdecisionstemsfromtheencouragingscoreof118Iachievedinthefirstexam.ThisresultindicatesthatIpossessasolidfoundationinthelanguage,andIbelievethatwithcontinuedeffortanddedication,Icanfurtherenhancemyproficiency.Additionally,Irecognizethatmytimeisvaluable,andIwishtoutilizeiteffectively.Participatinginthesecondtestmightnotsignificantlyimpactmyoverallscore,butitcouldpotentiallydetractfrommyfocusonothersubjectsandextracurricularactivities.Inconclusion,IamconfidentinmycurrentEnglishproficiencyandbelievethatmyeffortsshouldbedirectedtowardsmaintainingandimprovingmyperformanceinotherareas.Therefore,IhavechosennottoparticipateinthesecondEnglishtest.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你在英语一考中取得了118分的成绩，现在你正面临着是否参加6月份二考的选择，请谈谈你的想法。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：participatein→joinin此外：additionally→besides提高：enhance→strengthen总之：inconclusion→inshort2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Additionally,Irecognizethatmytimeisvaluable,andIwishtoutilizeiteffectively.拓展句：Additionally,afterIrecognizethatmytimeisvaluable,Iwishtoutilizeiteffectively.【点睛】[高分句型1] IamwritingtosharemythoughtsonwhethertoparticipateinthesecondEnglishtestscheduledforJune.(运用了特殊疑问词+不定式作宾语)[高分句型2]InconclusionIamconfidentinmycurrentEnglishproficiencyandbelievethatmyeffortsshouldbedirectedtowardsmaintainingandimprovingmyperformanceinotherareas.(运用了that引导宾语从句)（八）（2024年静安区二模）假设你是明启中学李华，你校艺术节即将举办主题为“最美瞬间”的摄影展，捕捉“热爱生活、积极向上、全面发展”等正能量的精彩瞬间。现邀请每位同学提供自己生活中的一张照片参展，并撰写摄影作品的介绍供参观者阅读。你打算提供什么样的照片？请写一篇短文作为参展摄影作品的介绍，内容包括：1)对该照片的简要描述；2)你选择该照片参展的理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Thisisaphotodepictingasunriseoveramistymountainpeak.Intheimage,thesunisjustpeekingoverthehorizon,castingawarmgoldenglowacrosstheskyandilluminatingtherollingcloudsthatclingtothemountainslopes.Ichosethisphotofortheexhibitionbecauseitcapturesabreathtakingmomentofnaturalbeautyandserenity.Thevibrantcolorsofthesunrisesymbolizehopeandnewbeginnings,reflectingthethemethattheartfestivalseekstopromote.Additionally,thetranquilatmosphereofthesceneencouragesviewerstopauseandappreciatethewondersofnature,fosteringasenseofmindfulnessandgratitude.Thephotoinvitesviewerstoconnectwiththeirsurroundingsandfindinspirationinthesimplejoysofeverydaylife.Itservesasaremindertoembraceeachmomentwithenthusiasmandapositiveoutlook.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，参与学校艺术节即将举办的“最美瞬间”摄影展，为参展摄影作品写一篇介绍，需涵盖简要描述和选择的理由。【详解】1.词汇积累描绘：depict→portrary捕捉：capture→catch,seize象征：symbolize→representsignify激励某人做某事：encouragesb.todo→motivatesb.todo,inspiresb.todo培养：foster→cultivate,develop2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Thisisaphotodepictingasunriseoveramistymountainpeak.拓展句：Thisisaphotothatdepictsasunriseoveramistymountainpeak.【点睛】[高分句型1]Intheimage,thesunisjustpeekingoverthehorizon,castingawarmgoldenglowacrosstheskyandilluminatingtherollingcloudsthatclingtothemountainslopes(运用了现在分词短语作状语、that引导限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Ichosethisphotofortheexhibitionbecauseitcapturesabreathtakingmomentofnaturalbeautyandserenity.(运用了because引导原因状语从句)（九）（2024年浦东新区二模）随着人工智能的快速发展，ChatGPT已进入我们的生活，正逐渐影响我们的学习方式和体验，有人认为它会带来诸多便利，也有人心存顾虑。假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，学校贴吧就此话题正在热议，你对此很感兴趣，决定回帖响应。回帖内容应包括：1.你是否支持使用ChatGPT;2.你的理由。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AsastudentatMingqiHighSchool,IamintriguedbytheongoingdiscussionsurroundingtheintegrationofChatGPTintoourlivesamidsttherapiddevelopmentofartificialintelligence.RegardingtheuseofChatGPT,Iamcautiouslysupportive,recognizingbothitspotentialbenefitsandconcerns.Firstly,IsupporttheuseofChatGPTbecauseofitsconvenienceandaccessibility.WithChatGPT,wehaveinstantaccesstoinformationandassistance,whichcangreatlyenhanceourlearningexperiences.Whetherit’sclarifyingconcepts,practicinglanguageskills,orreceivingpersonalizedfeedback,ChatGPToffersvaluablesupportthatcomplementstraditionallearningmethods.Additionally,ChatGPTcanfostercreativityandexploration.ByinteractingwithChatGPT,studentshavetheopportunitytoengageinstimulatingconversations,explorenewideas,andexpandtheirknowledgeindiversesubjects.Thisinteractivelearningexperiencecansparkcuriosity,inspireinnovation,andencourageindependentthinkingamongstudents.However,IalsoacknowledgetheneedforcautionwhenusingChatGPT.Aswithanytechnology,thereareconcernsaboutprivacy,accuracy,andoverreliance.It’sessentialtouseChatGPTresponsibly,criticallyevaluatetheinformationitprovides,andmaintainabalancebetweentechnologicalassistanceandindependentlearning.Inconclusion,whileIsupporttheuseofChatGPTasavaluabletoolineducation,it’simportanttoapproachitsintegrationthoughtfullyandmindfullytomaximizeitsbenefitswhileaddressingpotentialchallenges.(word:217)【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。随着人工智能的快速发展，ChatGPT已进入我们的生活，正逐渐影响我们的学习方式和体验，有人认为它会带来诸多便利，也有人心存顾虑。假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，学校贴吧就此话题正在热议，你对此很感兴趣，决定回帖响应。【详解】1.词汇积累提高，促进：enhance→prompt/facilitate鼓励：inspire→motivate重要的：essential→vital总之：inconclusion→toconclude2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstly,IsupporttheuseofChatGPTbecauseofitsconvenienceandaccessibility.拓展句：Firstly,IsupporttheuseofChatGPTbecauseitisconvenientandaccessible.【点睛】【高分句型1】Whetherit’sclarifyingconcepts,practicinglanguageskills,orreceivingpersonalizedfeedback,ChatGPToffersvaluablesupportthatcomplementstraditionallearningmethods.（运用了whether...or引导的让步状语从句）【高分句型2】WithChatGPT,wehaveinstantaccesstoinformationandassistance,whichcangreatlyenhanceourlearningexperiences.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）（十）（2024年普陀区二模）假设你是明启中学高三学生张磊，你的英国朋友Michael来信说他打算今年暑期来中国度假，你想邀请他去你的家乡游览。请你给他回信，内容需包括：1）你最想带他去的几个地方，以及参与的活动；2）你所提建议的理由。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMichael,I’mverygladtohearthatyouplantocometoChinaforavacationthissummer.I’dliketoinviteyoutovisitmyhometown.ThereareseveralplacesI’dliketotakeyouto.First,wecangotothelocalhistorymuseumtolearnaboutthecultureandhistoryofmyhometown.Then,wecanvisitthebeautifulnaturalscenery,suchasthemountainsandrivers.Wecanalsoparticipateinsomelocalactivities,liketastingthelocalfoodandexperiencingthetraditionalcustoms.Isuggesttheseplacesandactivitiesbecausetheycangiveyouacomprehensiveunderstandingofmyhometown.Youcannotonlyappreciatethebeautyofnaturebutalsofeelthecharmofthelocalculture.Ibelieveyouwillhaveagreattime.Lookingforwardtoseeingyousoon!Yours,ZhangLei【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生给英国朋友Michael写信，邀请其去你的家乡游览。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：glad→happy/delighted打算做某事：planto→intendto参观：visit→payavisitto参与：participatein→takepartin2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：First,wecangotothelocalhistorymuseumtolearnaboutthecultureandhistoryofmyhometown.拓展句：First,wecangotothelocalhistorymuseum,wherewecanlearnaboutthecultureandhistoryofmyhometown.【点睛】【高分句型1】ThereareseveralplacesI’dliketotakeyouto.（运用了省略关系代词that的定语从句修饰先行词places）【高分句型2】Isuggesttheseplacesandactivitiesbecausetheycangiveyouacomprehensiveunderstandingofmyhometown.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）（十一）（2024年青浦区二模）假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青。学校将举办“中国工坊”（ChineseWorkshop）活动，主题涉及本地美食（cuisine）、中国传统手工艺（handicraft）、中国书法（calligraphy）和中国绘画。届时，英国姐妹学校的师生代表将到校访问。学校拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请写一封自荐信，内容必须包括：申请参加本次活动；阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解；结合个人兴趣和特长，说明一项你想要教授的技能，并陈述理由。（注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearOrganizingCommitteeIamLiQing,aGrade12studentfromPurunHighSchool.Iamwritingtoexpressmykeeninterestinparticipatingintheupcoming“ChineseWorkshop”event.ThisculturalexchangeholdsprofoundsignificanceasitoffersaplatformforourBritishcounterpartstointimatelyexperiencetherichnessofChineseculture.Throughthisworkshop,wecanbridgeculturaldividesandfostermutualunderstanding.GivenmypassionforChinesecalligraphy,Iameagertosharethisancientartwithourguests.Calligraphyisnotjustaboutwriting;it’sareflectionofone’sspiritandcharacter.Teachingthisskillwillnotonlyimpartknowledgebutalsopromoteculturalappreciation.Ibelievethatmyenthusiasmandproficiencyincalligraphywillcontributetothesuccessofthisworkshop.Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication.Sincerely,LiQing【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将举办“中国工坊”（ChineseWorkshop）活动，主题涉及本地美食（cuisine）、中国传统手工艺（handicraft）、中国书法（calligraphy）和中国绘画。届时，英国姐妹学校的师生代表将到校访问。学校拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。要求考生根据提示写一封自荐信。【详解】1.词汇积累强烈的：keen→strong参加：participatein→engagein即将到来的：upcoming→forthcoming重要性：significance→importance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：IamLiQing,aGrade12studentfromPurunHighSchool..拓展句：IamLiQing,whoisaGrade12studentfromPurunHighSchool.【点睛】【高分句型1】Iamwritingtoexpressmykeeninterestinparticipatingintheupcoming“ChineseWorkshop”event.（运用了动名词participating作宾语）【高分句型2】Ibelievethatmyenthusiasmandproficiencyincalligraphywillcontributetothesuccessofthisworkshop.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）（十二）（2024年闵行区二模）假设你是上海市明启中学的高三学生李华，你的新西兰笔友Terry即将在下个学期来你们学校参加为期2个月的学习交流项目。他发来邮件，请你给他一些在上海生活和学习的建议。请你回复邮件。你的邮件须包含2～3条建议和相关理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearTerry,Happytoknowthatyouwillcometoourschooltoparticipateina2-monthlearningexchangeprogramnextsemester,I’mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestionsonyourlifeandstudyhere.First,itisbettertoliveinthedormitory,whichcangiveyoumorechancestocommunicatewithyourclassmatesandknowmoreaboutourschool.Besides,youcangooutatnighttoShanghaiBundtoenjoyitsbeautyandlearnsomecustomsandcultur