读后续写+母亲的暖心爱之笺+讲义 高三12月月考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AMother’sHeartfeltNoteofLoveEverythingseemedtochangeformewhenIenteredhighschool.Inmyfreshmanclass,IneversawasinglepersonIknewfrommiddleschool.AthomeIwasjustaslonely.Myolderbrotherwasasenior,consumedwithfuturedecisionsaboutcollegeormilitarylife.Mylittlebrotherdidn’twantanythingtodowithme,

“agirl.”

Myoldersisterwasoutgoingandneverwithoutherfriends.Theyallfitin,Ithought.Whycan’tI?Momwastherewaitingforme.“Karole,yourbedroom’sadisaster.Whycan’tyoukeepitclean?”ThelastthingIneededwascriticismfrommymother.Cleanyourroom.Finishyourdinner.Cleanthedishes.Whathadhappenedtothemotherwhousedtosnugglewithmeonthecouch,readingtome,lovingmewithcompleteacceptance?Ididn’tbothertryingtoexplainmymisery.Itwaseasiertositwithmytight-lippedmoodiness,holedupinmybedroom.Isatdownatmydeskandpulledoutmymathtextbook.Iturnedtoafreshpageinmynotebookandstartedworkingoutthefirstproblem.Almostimmediately,IsawI’dmadeamistake.Itorethepaperoutofmynotebook,balleditupinmyfistandthrewitatthewastepaperbasket.BythetimeIfinishedmyhomework,thefloorwaslitteredwithcrumpled(起皱的)paper.EverytimeIlookedatthosecrumpledballs,IremindedmyselfwhatafailureIwas.Butmyunhappinessstayedhiddenaway,justlikethosemistakes.

Oneday,Icamehometoanemptyhouse.ItwasareliefnottobemetwithMom’slatestcomplaint.Iwentuptomybedroomasusual.WhenIopenedthedoor,Ifroze.Itwasneatasapin.Momhadobviouslydecidedtocleanitherself.Allthecrumpledpapershaddisappeared.Exceptonesinglesheet.Ipickedupthesheetandturneditover.

IrecognizedMom’sperfecthandwritingatonce:“DearKarole,Ihave

noticedyourunhappinessthesedaysand

Iamsorry

forbeingsocriticalofyoulately.

Iwillalwaysloveyouandsidewithyouwhenyouneedmysupport.

Iexpectyoutobe

the

same,sweetself.Love,Mom.”

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。第一段：Isatdownatmydeskandreadthenoteagain.第二段：Whenshegothome,Iletdownmyguardandtalkedtoher.一、文章大意故事围绕刚上高中的Karole展开，她进入高中后在学校和家里都倍感孤独。在学校，新班级里没有熟悉面孔，回到家，哥哥忙于未来规划，弟弟因性别差异不愿与她亲近，姐姐外向朋友众多，这让她觉得自己格格不入。在家中，妈妈还总是批评她房间乱、要求她做家务，这使她愈发郁闷，与妈妈产生隔阂，常把自己关在房间生闷气，做数学题出错扔纸团的举动更凸显她内心的挫败感。一次回家发现妈妈打扫了房间，留下一张饱含爱意与歉意的纸条，为故事转折埋下伏笔，开启后续情感和解之路。二、伏笔及在续写中的回应伏笔：Karole进入高中后在学校无人相识，极度孤独，为她在家中对妈妈态度变差、内心敏感做铺垫。回应：续写中她向妈妈倾诉学校的孤独，妈妈的理解与陪伴让她重获温暖，填补内心空缺，不再那么孤僻。伏笔：妈妈频繁对Karole提出诸如打扫房间、吃完饭洗碗等要求并批评她，引发母女矛盾，促使Karole封闭内心。回应：妈妈的纸条表达歉意，后续交流中主动倾听，化解矛盾根源，让Karole放下防备，修复关系。伏笔：Karole做数学题出错后频繁撕纸揉团扔向垃圾桶，体现她内心的自我否定与挫败，侧面反映她急需情感支持。回应：妈妈的纸条成为情感转折点，后续母女敞开心扉，妈妈给予的鼓励使她重拾信心，克服挫败心理。伏笔：Karole习惯把不开心藏在心里，即便面对妈妈也紧闭心门，这让妈妈意识到问题严重性，才有写纸条之举。回应：续写中Karole主动向妈妈袒露心声，打破隔阂，实现从自我封闭到坦诚沟通的转变，如同打破坚冰。伏笔：家里其他人都有各自生活，哥哥忙未来、弟弟排斥、姐姐外向交友，衬托Karole的孤独，凸显妈妈关心的重要性。回应：妈妈后续给予Karole专属陪伴与关怀，成为她心灵慰藉，让她在家庭中有了情感依托，不再孤独。三、续写要点（一）故事线第一段：Karole反复读纸条，内心被触动，回忆起往昔妈妈的疼爱，反思自己的固执，决定不再沉浸于消极情绪，起身收拾房间，将物品摆放整齐，等待妈妈回来，准备打破僵局。第二段：妈妈到家，Karole鼓起勇气迎上去，先为之前的态度道歉，随后倾诉学校的遭遇，妈妈耐心倾听，不时给予安慰，两人相拥而泣，之后关系愈发亲密，常一起聊天分享心事，Karole也逐渐开朗自信。（二）情感线起始是Karole孤独、郁闷、对妈妈不满且自我封闭；看到纸条后转为感动、愧疚、反思；与妈妈交流后变为释然、温暖、重新获得自信与爱，完成情感的正向转变。四、主旨升华句（5句英文）“Trueloveisoftenhiddenbeneaththesurfaceofdailynagging,waitingtobediscoveredwhenweopenourhearts.”（真正的爱常常隐藏在日常唠叨之下，当我们敞开心扉时便能发现。）“Inthedarkestmomentsofloneliness,asinglenoteoflovecanlightupthewholeworldofourhearts.”（在最孤独的黑暗时刻，一张爱的纸条能照亮我们心灵的整个世界。）“Evenwhenwefeellostandunappreciated,thelovefromourfamilyisalwaysthere,asilentforcetopullusback.”（即使我们感到迷失与不被赏识，来自家人的爱永远都在，是一股默默将我们拉回正轨的力量。）“Amother’sloveknowsnobounds,itcanbreakthroughthethickestwallsofmisunderstandingwebuildaroundourselves.”（母亲的爱无远弗届，它能冲破我们在自己周围筑起的最厚的误解之墙。）“Whenweletgoofourprideandreachouttothosewholoveus,wefindthathealingandhappinessarejustaroundthecorner.”（当我们放下骄傲，向爱我们的人伸出援手，就会发现治愈与幸福近在咫尺。）五、写作示范（一）第一段：Isatdownatmydeskandreadthenoteagain.Eachwordseemedtoseepintomysoul,meltingtheiceI'dbuiltaroundmyheart.IthoughtofthecountlessnightswhenIwaslittleandMomwouldtuckmein,hergentlevoicelullingmetosleep.HowcouldIhaveletmyinsecuritiesblindmetoherlove?Iwipedawaymytearsandstartedtocleanupmyroom.Ipickeduptheremainingpapers,smoothedthemout,andplacedmybooksneatlyontheshelf.IwantedMomtoseethatIwasreadytomeetherhalfway.第二段：Whenshegothome,Iletdownmyguardandtalkedtoher.Itookadeepbreathandsaid,“Mom,I'msorryforbeingsocoldtoyou.”ThenIpouredoutmyfeelingsaboutschool,howIdreadedgoingeachdaybecauseIfeltlikeanoutsider.Momwrappedherarmsaroundmeandsaidsheunderstoodhowharditwas.Fromthatmomenton,webecamecloser.We'dhaveheart-to-hearttalkseveryevening,andIfoundmyselflookingforwardtocominghome.WithMom'slove,Istartedtoseethebeautyinmyselfandtheworldaroundme.（二）第一段：Isatdownatmydeskandreadthenoteagain.ItwasasifMom'svoicewaswhisperinginmyear,soothingmytroubledspirit.Irememberedthetimesshe'dcheeredmeonatmysoccergames,herfacebeamingwithpride.Iregrettedmysulkybehaviorandvowedtomakethingsright.Itookthenoteandcarefullytapedittomywall,areminderofherlove.ThenIsetabouttidyingmydesk,organizingmypensandpapers.IknewIhadtoshowMomIwaswillingtochange.第二段：Whenshegothome,Iletdownmyguardandtalkedtoher.Iwalkeduptoherwithahesitantsmileandsaid,“Mom,Ireadyournote.Thankyou.”Ithentoldheraboutmystrugglesinmathclass,howIwasafraidtoaskforhelp.Momlistenedintentlyandofferedtohelpmestudy.Wesatdowntogether,andforthefirsttimeinalongwhile,IfeltlikeIhadsomeoneonmyside.Ourrelationshipgrewstronger,andIlearnedthatsharingmyproblemswasthefirststeptosolvingthem,allthankstoMom'slovingnote.读后续写参考范文Isatdownatmydeskandreadthenoteagain.

Aweightseemedtoliftfromme.Itwasreplacedbysomethingassoftandcomfortingasanangel’swing,asreassuringasMomreadingtomeonthecouch.IrecalledhowshewouldcheermeupwhenIwasdown,takingcareofeverythingwithallherheart.IsawthatMomstilllovedmethesameway,andshewantedmetolovemyselftoo.Butforthepastweeks,Ihad