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高考英语读后续写语篇练习纸键盘上的音乐梦与坚持1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Iwas11yearsoldwhenIaskedmymumforpianolessons.Wewereintheeconomicdeclineandshe'drecentlybeenoutofwork.Shesaidapolite“no”.Thatdidn'tstopme.Igoogledthephotosofakeyboard,drewthekeysontoapieceofpaperandstuckitonmydesk.Iwouldclicknotes(音符)onanonlinekeyboardand“play”thembackonmypaperone—keepingthesoundtheymadeonthecomputerinmyhead.AfterawhileIcouldhearthenotesinmyheadwhilepressingthekeysonthepaper.Ispentsixmonthsplayingscales(音阶)andchordsequences(和弦序列)withouttouchingarealpiano.Oncemymumsawitwasn'tafad(一时的怪念头),sheborrowedsomemoneyfromfamilyandfriends,andboughtme10lessons.Istillrememberthefirstone.Iwasstruckbyhoworganicthesoundofthepianowas,asIhadbecomefamiliarwiththeartificialelectronicsound.TheteachertriedtoexplainwheremiddleCwasbutIcouldalreadyplayallthemajorandminorscales.4续写原文Ipassedmygradeoneaftereightlessonsandgotdistinction.BythetimeIstartedsecondaryschool,wecouldn'taffordlessonsagain,soIreturnedtomypaperkeyboard.Ipassedgradethree,thengradefive,practicingonlyonmypieceofpaper.Forthegradesabovethat,there'sanexpectationthatyouputacertainsensitivityintoyourplaying.TheheadofmusicatmyschoolsaidIcouldpracticeontheschool'spiano.Iwouldwakeupat5:30amtogetthereintimeandplayuntillessonsstarted.I'dskiplunchandthenpracticeafterschooluntilthecaretakerkickedmeout.Athome,I'dhavedinner,dothreehoursofrevision,andthenmentalpracticeuntilIam.5段首句Paragraph1:Oneevening,whenIwasabout13,Icamehome,andmymomsaidshehadasurpriseforme.Paragraph2:Mydadwasverymuchagainstmeplaying,butwhenheheardthatsong,somethinginsidehimchanged.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析811岁时,因家庭经济困难,“我”向妈妈请求学钢琴被拒。但“我”没有放弃,通过在纸上画键盘、借助网络键盘学习,坚持练习半年。妈妈看到“我”的坚持后,借钱为“我”买了10节钢琴课。“我”凭借努力取得不错的成绩,后来因家庭经济再次无法负担课程,“我”又回到纸键盘练习,并通过了多个等级考试。在学校,“我”抓住一切机会练习钢琴。点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句;点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;点4:文章结尾升华,给予读者正能量,揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1:Oneevening,whenIwasabout13,Icamehome,andmymomsaidshehadasurpriseforme.13岁那年的一个晚上,我回到家,妈妈说要给我一个惊喜。她拉着我来到客厅,我一眼就看到角落里摆放着一架二手钢琴。我简直不敢相信自己的眼睛,愣在原地,眼眶瞬间湿润。我缓缓走向钢琴,轻轻抚摸着琴键,仿佛在触摸一个遥不可及的梦。“妈妈,这真的是给我的吗?”我声音颤抖地问道。妈妈微笑着点头,眼中满是慈爱。我迫不及待地坐下,弹奏起那首练习了无数遍的曲子。熟悉的旋律从指尖流出,这一次,不再是脑海中的想象,而是真切的、美妙的音乐。我沉浸其中,感受着梦想成真的喜悦。10续写思路分析Para2:Mydadwasverymuchagainstmeplaying,butwhenheheardthatsong,somethinginsidehimchanged.爸爸一直不支持我学钢琴,觉得这会影响我的学习,还增加家庭经济负担。当他听到我弹奏的曲子时,他停下了手中的事情,静静地站在一旁聆听。他的表情逐渐从严肃变得柔和,眼中流露出一丝惊讶和欣慰。一曲结束,他走过来,轻轻地拍了拍我的肩膀说:“弹得真好。”我惊喜地看着爸爸,从他的眼神中,我看到了理解和支持。从那以后,爸爸不再反对我学琴,还会在我练习时,默默坐在一旁,享受着音乐带来的美好。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Oneevening,whenIwasabout13,Icamehome,andmymomsaidshehadasurpriseforme.Shetookmetothelivingroom,andthere,inthecorner,stoodasecond-handpiano.Iwascompletelyshocked.Ifrozeinmytracks,myeyesfixedonthepiano,andmyheartpoundingwithexcitement.Iwalkedslowlytowardsit,reachingouttotouchthekeysgently."Mom,isthisreallyforme?"Iasked,myvoicefilledwithdisbelief.Shenoddedwithabigsmile.Withouthesitation,IsatdownandstartedplayingthesongIhadpracticedsomanytimes.Thebeautifulsoundofthepianofilledtheroom,andIfeltlikeIwasinadream.13范文呈现Mydadwasverymuchagainstmeplaying,ashethoughtitwouldaffectmystudyandaddtothefamily'sfinancialburden.ButwhenheheardthesongIwasplaying,hestoppedwhathewasdoingandlistenedquietly.Hisexpressionchangedfromserioustosoft,andtherewasaglimmerofsurpriseandprideinhiseyes.AfterIfinishedplaying,hewalkeduptomeandpattedmeontheshoulder,saying,"Youplayedreallywell."Ilookedathiminsurprise,andfromhiseyes,Isawunderstandingandsupport.Fromthenon,mydadnolongerobjectedtomyplayingthepiano.Instead,hewouldsitbesidemequietlywhenIpracticed,enjoyingthebeautifulmusic.14升级版范文呈现Oneevening,whenIwasabout13,Icamehome,andmymomsaidshehadasurpriseforme.Guidingmeintothelivingroom,sheunveiledasecond-handpianostandinggracefullyinthecorner.Stunned,Irootedtothespot,myeyeswidewithdisbeliefandheartpoundingwildly.Approachingitslowly,Igentlycaressedthekeys,asiftouchingalong-awaiteddream."Mom,isthistrulymine?"Iqueried,myvoicelacedwithincredulity.Shenodded,beamingwithjoy.Withoutamoment'shesitation,IsettleddownandlaunchedintothemelodyIhadrehearsedcountlesstimes.Therich,resonantsoundofthepianofilledtheroom,makingmefeelasifIwereinamusicalwonderland.15升级版范文呈现Mydad,whohadbeenvehementlyopposedtomypiano-playingduetoconcernsaboutmystudiesandourfinancialstrain,underwentaremarkabletransformationuponhearingmeplay.Haltinghisactivities,hestoodstill,hisearsattunedtothemusic.Hisonce-sternvisagesoftened,andhiseyessparkledwithsurpriseandpride.OnceIconcludedthepiece,hestrodeover,pattedmeontheshoulder,anduttered,"Youplayedsplendidly."Surprised,Imethisgaze,whereIdetectedunderstandinga

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