高考英语复习读后续写练习：悲伤中寻希望：学开车偶遇暖心人

高考英语读后续写语篇练习悲伤中寻希望：学开车偶遇暖心人1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文In2022,MaryGriffisfoundherselfdrownedinsorrowafterherbrotherPeter’sheart-breakingaccidentaldeath.Inthemonthsthatfollowed,Griffishadtonavigatetheoverwhelmingexperienceofbothfeelingsadatherbrother’sdeathandbeingconsumedbythetoughtasksofsettlingPeter’saffairs,toomuchpaperworkandendlessphonecalls.“It’shardtoexplainjusthowtiringitistohavetocallagainandagainandsay‘I’mcallingonbehalfofmylatebrother...’dayinanddayoutformonthsandmonths,”Griffissaid.WhenallthearrangementshadbeenmadeandPeter’shousehadbeensold,Griffisdidn’tknowwhattodowithherself.4续写原文“WhatdoIdonow?”Griffisthought,“Well,Ithinkmybrotherwouldwantmetodosomethingthatmakesmehappy.”Soshedecidedtodosomethingthatshe’dalwayswantedtodo:learnhowtodriveamanualtransmission(手动变速器)car.Griffisthoughtitwasreallyfun.Shelikednotjustthejoy,thesenseoffreedomofdrivingandnotreallyhavingtogoanywhere,butalsolearningsomethingnew.Shethoughtitwasverycomfortingforsomestrangereason.5续写原文Griffisenjoyeditsomuchthatshedecidedtobuyacarwithamanualtransmission.Shefoundonethatfitherbudgetandwentandpickeditupfromthedealership.Afterpullingoutofthelot,everythingwasfineforabouttwoorthreemiles.Thenshehitheavytrafficonanarrow,two-wayroad.Herenginediedandtherewasnobreakdownlane.Shetookadeepbreathandtriedtostartthecarafewtimes,butitwouldn’tgo.Andatthispoint,becauseofthetraffic,peopleweresoangry.Theywereurginghertomoveaside;theywerehonking(鸣喇叭)andsomepeopleevenrolleddowntheirwindowsandshoutedastheyslowlybypassedhercar.Butshejustcouldn’tstarthercar.Aspeoplegatheredaroundher,Griffisbecamemoreandmorenervous.6段首句Paragraph1：Eventually,oneofthecarssloweddown.Paragraph2：ThewomanthenintroducedherselfasRobin.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析92022年，玛丽・格里菲斯因弟弟彼得意外离世陷入悲痛。处理完弟弟后事，她决定做一直想做的事——学习驾驶手动挡汽车。她觉得这既有趣又能带来慰藉，还买了辆手动挡汽车。但提车后不久，在拥堵路段车子熄火，她多次尝试却无法启动。周围司机愤怒催促、鸣笛甚至叫骂，她愈发紧张。这时，有辆车缓缓停下。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Eventually,oneofthecarssloweddown.终于，有一辆车缓缓停下。从车上下来一位和蔼可亲的女士，她径直走向格里菲斯的车。此时的格里菲斯满脸焦急与无助，女士轻敲车窗，格里菲斯摇下车窗，女士温柔地询问：“姑娘，是车子出问题了吗？别着急，慢慢说。”格里菲斯带着哭腔，将车子熄火后无法启动的情况告诉了她。女士听后，绕着车查看了一圈，然后自信地说：“别担心，我对这种手动挡车有点经验，让我试试。”她的话让格里菲斯燃起了一丝希望，紧张的情绪也稍有缓解。接着，女士打开车门，坐进了驾驶座。11续写思路分析Para2：ThewomanthenintroducedherselfasRobin.女士随后介绍自己叫罗宾。她一边熟练地操作着手动变速器，一边耐心地向格里菲斯讲解：“启动的时候，离合要慢慢松，同时轻踩油门，感觉到车子有向前的动力了，再慢慢换挡。”在罗宾的操作下，车子成功启动了。格里菲斯激动得差点落泪，连声道谢。罗宾微笑着鼓励她：“别害怕，多练习就好。我当初学手动挡的时候，也遇到过不少麻烦。”两人相谈甚欢，在这个艰难的时刻，罗宾的出现不仅解决了格里菲斯的燃眉之急，还让她感受到了人与人之间的温暖，为她阴霾的生活带来了一丝阳光。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Eventually,oneofthecarssloweddown.AwomangotoutofthecarandwalkedstraighttowardsGriffis'svehicle.Griffis,lookingextremelyanxious,rolleddownthewindow.Thewomanaskedinagentlevoice,"What'swrongwithyourcar?Takeiteasyandtellme."Griffis,almostonthevergeoftears,explainedthathercarhadstalledandshecouldn'tstartitagain.Thewomannoddedunderstandingly.Shewalkedaroundthecar,examiningitcarefully.Thenshesaidwithconfidence,"Don'tworry.I'mquitefamiliarwithmanual-transmissioncars.Letmegiveitatry."HerwordsbroughtaglimmerofhopetoGriffis.Afterthat,thewomanopenedthedoorandgotintothedriver'sseat,readytohelpGriffissolvetheproblem.14范文呈现ThewomanthenintroducedherselfasRobin.Assheskillfullyoperatedthemanualtransmission,shepatientlyexplainedtoGriffis,"Whenstarting,releasetheclutchslowlywhilegentlysteppingontheaccelerator.Whenyoufeelthecarhasforwardmomentum,shiftgearsgradually."WithRobin'sefforts,thecarstartedsuccessfully.Griffiswasoverjoyedandthankedherprofusely.Robinsmiledandencouragedher,"Don'tbeafraid.Practicemore.Ialsohadatoughtimelearningtodriveamanual-transmissioncar."Theychattedpleasantly.Robin'sappearancenotonlysolvedGriffis'simmediateproblembutalsobroughtwarmthandhopetoherlife,whichhadbeenfilledwithsadnessafterherbrother'sdeath.15升级版范文呈现Eventually,oneofthecarssloweddown.OutsteppedawomanwhomadeherwaydirectlytoGriffis'svehicle.Griffis,herfaceetchedwithanxiety,rolleddownthewindow.Inagentletone,thewomaninquired,"What'samisswithyourcar?Calmdownandsharewithme."Griffis,onthebrinkoftears,recountedhowhercarhadstalledandherfailedattemptstorestartit.Noddingunderstandingly,thewomancircledthecar,conductingathoroughinspection.Then,withassurance,shedeclared,"There'snoneedtoworry.Manual-transmissioncarsarewithinmyexpertise.Allowmetohaveago."ThesewordsinstilledaglimmerofhopeinGriffis.Subsequently,thewomanopenedthedoorandslidintothedriver'sseat,determinedtoassist.16升级版范文呈现ThewomanthenintroducedherselfasRobin.Asshedeftlymanipulatedthemanualtransmission,shepatientlyelucidatedtoGriffis,"Uponstarting,easetheclutchwhilegentlydepressingtheaccelerator.Onceyousensethecargainingforwardmomentum,smoothlyshiftgears."ThankstoRobin'sefforts,theengineroared